i'd really apreciate some advice... just to know if this is ok or if i should change or add a few things before submitting it

thank you for your help!

Hmm, I think the words should be faded a little more, and not red. It doesn't blend with the girl+bg.

is this better?

The only thing I don't like is the text. It might be better if it was just barely visible. Other than that, it's a very nice wall.

how's this then?
or i also did this:

I like the first text in the image of "Original art by Range..." - the dithering is nice, but in the next 2 images, it looks less smooth and clean...

I'm assuming you made the horizontal streaks across the background of flying birds to symbolize their movement, IMO it doesn't really have to be there... overall, it looks like you made this wall out of sadness, the blue background and "never look back" message tells me that. What made you make this wallie anyway? Ohh, and I love Range Murata's works ^_^

Very nice Morphee...

aw thanks
well maybe not exactly sadness... but more frustration... (i got dumped last week by my boyfriend... well... ex-boyfriend now)

i'll put the dithering back

which one is better?

Quote by Morphee
which one is better?

i like the words in the second one and the bg in the first one... to me the bg matches a bit better and flows..

ok... i'll submit the first on then with just the title

thanks for your help!