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*poem* Rotting me away...

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Everyday i walk passed you I feel so good inside.
You used to talk to me all the time.
Then someone turned the tide.
Now you dont want to talk to me and never want to go pass, allways with a mad mood when you look at me.
I feel empty ever so lonely.
My heart is broken.
I lock myself in my room crying constantly.
Even if i hid it, its still rotting me away...


This is a poem i wrote when it was a hard time for me. I hope you all like it.

-Inuyasha-FAN

thats such a sad but yet good poem. welll done

nice poem, it's very depressing but i like it

good poem it describes feelings of a lost love. good job.

Thanks Everyone! :D That means a lot to me.

You put alot of emotion into it. Very nice.

did you really was ditch like that?

... If your asking me if that happened..... Yes. it did...

its very good....very sad

( a few grammer errors)

over all i like it you did good keep up the good work

thanks for sharing

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