I actually made this a long time ago but then decided to put it up here today
not sure if it looked like a finished piece. Just wondering if there's anything
that needs to be fixed/added on, etc.
I think you need to work on the red curved lines, they look over pixelated,
and im not sure if that is the real size (when you click the thumbnail), but
make sure that the wall is at least 1024x1028.
Other than that I belive that the wall is blended well and maybe if you add some
more stff like a hidden catle or stuff like that then it will make ur wall much
better ^^
bump: 1024x768 is the minimum Minitoyko will accept... I kinda wish you kept the
black bar under the thumbnail so we could tell :P There are other sizes
Minitokyo will accept. Most are either 1024x768 or 1600x1200.
I have not much to say... but a few things:
* those curved lines you drew... I wish they continued off the page... because
they look inconsistent and half done when I can see the ends. So bring 'em all
the way off to the left
* It'd be nice to get rid of that line going horizontal at her shoulder
height... everything is about curves and suddenly there's this sharp line going
across the page... it breaks it up a bit.
* The lower left corner effect is pixelated, and the part just to the top left
of her head is a bit blurry. I'd see to getting that fixed up to look a bit
higher quality.
Otherwise the colour, extraction and the whole thing goes pretty well together.
Kudos!
I actually made this a long time ago but then decided to put it up here today not sure if it looked like a finished piece. Just wondering if there's anything that needs to be fixed/added on, etc.
I think you need to work on the red curved lines, they look over pixelated,
and im not sure if that is the real size (when you click the thumbnail), but make sure that the wall is at least 1024x1028.
Other than that I belive that the wall is blended well and maybe if you add some more stff like a hidden catle or stuff like that then it will make ur wall much better ^^
bump: 1024x768 is the minimum Minitoyko will accept... I kinda wish you kept the black bar under the thumbnail so we could tell :P There are other sizes Minitokyo will accept. Most are either 1024x768 or 1600x1200.
I have not much to say... but a few things:
* those curved lines you drew... I wish they continued off the page... because they look inconsistent and half done when I can see the ends. So bring 'em all the way off to the left
* It'd be nice to get rid of that line going horizontal at her shoulder height... everything is about curves and suddenly there's this sharp line going across the page... it breaks it up a bit.
* The lower left corner effect is pixelated, and the part just to the top left of her head is a bit blurry. I'd see to getting that fixed up to look a bit higher quality.
Otherwise the colour, extraction and the whole thing goes pretty well together. Kudos!
yes, i agree with chirichiri1907 and kuroimisa, but the overall look is great and the colour scheme fits nicely together ^___^