I made up this poem while I was waiting. I hope you don't think it's too bad. I'm still an amatuer poet.

Waiting

I sat in the darkness waiting for someone
For so long I was alone
Then you happened to come along
You became my stepping stone

My light inside is dying
But you keep it aflame
But for many bad deeds
I am the only one to blame

I try to convince you
That you should go away
But deep inside me
I hope that you will stay

Once again I am waiting
But not in the same way
Now I wait in heaven
Knowing you'll join me one day

so sad! i wanna cry T-T

.........waahhhhhhhhhhh! sounds like me T-T when I'm waiting for my bf... we act like we don't really mind of the other goes out or somewhere but then deep inside we really just want to be together...

I know who this poem is detacted to... Good poem, I bet the person that it is decated to is really sorry... I' think i'm gonna cry....

agin very good work

awwwww....that.........T.T thats the most beautiful thing i have ever heard whaaaaaaaaaaaToT i love it! whaahahahahaaaaaa!

Uau! Is profound I almoust cry^^.For a amatuer is not bad...dont be so negative our last one isnt bads.
Hum...Is so good being in love ...but is so painfull when is not correspond...( we have to wait so much time).
Is very good.Keep it up!^^

Too sad!everything is great but...Is it me or did you spell dying wrong?(maybe its me)