The traditions and cultures that I have followed
is nothing out of the ordinary. Yet, thus, I wondered. Are these what we follow
by? Does this sit onto my mind and wander about? By saying this, do I want to
know? Whether my family's traditions are true or false? If my purpose was to
exist, then what am I here for? Am I here to hold onto the traditions and
cultures within the grasp of my hand? Or am I here to live on the family name?
Through the thoughts that run onto my head, I, young man, cannot know this. My
existence that which touches the Earth tumbles upon that which I care for and
for less for those who don't care for me. Alas, this may be true or it may be
false. This, I may never know. What I know is that these two matters that took
form inside ourselves and everyone around us created to the being that we are
formally known for. Our minds and thoughts are nothing filled but truths and
lies. Truths and lies created the world and at the end of time, it shall destroy
the world. This cycle that which exists shall move on into the depths of time.
The time that flows in the sky shall remain as long as we all breathe. Once the
extinction begins and eventually ends, the truths and lies that filled the world
shall be extinguished with the light that men once held. Thus, in time, a whole
new world shall be born and once again, the evolution of life and death
begins.
~Kamishiro-san~
Heh, this is a new poem I made up in school a few days ago. I hope you like it.
^^ Please comment on it.
PS - I'm not going to make any changes to this poem due to the fact that I am a
Prose Poet. If you don't know what that means, look for the meaning in a
dictionary or a site in the Internet.
Well, I hope you'll enjoy reading my poem. ^^ And I hope to write up more new
poems as soon as I can. Later. ^^
*Creds for making the picture GIF is me, Kami-san! ^^*
That was a nice poem. I'll be honest, I was never keen on poetry (I think it's
because we were forced to appreciate a lot of poets' work in school and we were
never allowed to say we didn't like the poet's work, very narrow-minded imo). I
started to hate it. But, I like this one. It has a casual story-telling tone,
but quite deep. Good job.
Yep, you definitely are a great poet. keep this up and you'll have a great
career ahead of you.
Hmm...you poems reminds of philosophy...so I guess I could also call you a
philosopher too.
oh, by the way, a prose poem is...
Function: noun
: a composition in prose that has some of the qualities of a poem
WOW. I really like this poem. I'm not much of a poet myself, but I do appreciate
poetry. This is an excellent poem. It makes you stop and think. Thats what a
poem is supposed to do. I look forward to more of your work.
This poem kinda confuses me. I don't know what to think of it really. As for
judgement, I think it's well written and sounds intelligent, but at the same
time I don't like it that much.
WOW! This poem was very deep and emotional. Kinda religious, ya know? LOL.
It;s very cool. It sounded more like a Bible verse than a poem but that makes it
cool! ^^
The traditions and cultures that I have followed is nothing out of the ordinary. Yet, thus, I wondered. Are these what we follow by? Does this sit onto my mind and wander about? By saying this, do I want to know? Whether my family's traditions are true or false? If my purpose was to exist, then what am I here for? Am I here to hold onto the traditions and cultures within the grasp of my hand? Or am I here to live on the family name? Through the thoughts that run onto my head, I, young man, cannot know this. My existence that which touches the Earth tumbles upon that which I care for and for less for those who don't care for me. Alas, this may be true or it may be false. This, I may never know. What I know is that these two matters that took form inside ourselves and everyone around us created to the being that we are formally known for. Our minds and thoughts are nothing filled but truths and lies. Truths and lies created the world and at the end of time, it shall destroy the world. This cycle that which exists shall move on into the depths of time. The time that flows in the sky shall remain as long as we all breathe. Once the extinction begins and eventually ends, the truths and lies that filled the world shall be extinguished with the light that men once held. Thus, in time, a whole new world shall be born and once again, the evolution of life and death begins.
~Kamishiro-san~
Heh, this is a new poem I made up in school a few days ago. I hope you like it. ^^ Please comment on it.
PS - I'm not going to make any changes to this poem due to the fact that I am a Prose Poet. If you don't know what that means, look for the meaning in a dictionary or a site in the Internet.
Well, I hope you'll enjoy reading my poem. ^^ And I hope to write up more new poems as soon as I can. Later. ^^
*Creds for making the picture GIF is me, Kami-san! ^^*
That was a nice poem. I'll be honest, I was never keen on poetry (I think it's because we were forced to appreciate a lot of poets' work in school and we were never allowed to say we didn't like the poet's work, very narrow-minded imo). I started to hate it. But, I like this one. It has a casual story-telling tone, but quite deep. Good job.
Very good poem! Excellent job!
Yep, you definitely are a great poet. keep this up and you'll have a great career ahead of you.
Hmm...you poems reminds of philosophy...so I guess I could also call you a philosopher too.
oh, by the way, a prose poem is...
Function: noun
: a composition in prose that has some of the qualities of a poem
...right?
WOW. I really like this poem. I'm not much of a poet myself, but I do appreciate poetry. This is an excellent poem. It makes you stop and think. Thats what a poem is supposed to do. I look forward to more of your work.
This poem kinda confuses me. I don't know what to think of it really. As for judgement, I think it's well written and sounds intelligent, but at the same time I don't like it that much.
Cheers.
its wicked good lol umm ya hjust yah iuts a good poem glad you made it n shared it with us
truth and lies...light and dark...make us who we are, and the world cant do without either of them.
so i agree with you! and once i say u did a very good job!
keep this up. we'd like to see more work from you !
Wow, lil bro. You rock. Very deep
WOW! This poem was very deep and emotional. Kinda religious, ya know? LOL.
It;s very cool. It sounded more like a Bible verse than a poem but that makes it
cool! ^^