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The Sandbox

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http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m165/CyberGame/Thedayturntopinks.jpg
eh has done another work but i not so sure need to edit anything pls give some comment ^^

made some update ^^

ok now first i use the white colour bg but Chloe-chan give me some ideal of making it into pink and i not sure which is better pls help me choose 1 of them thx T_T

ok now i did some updates ^^

so bright!... oh... the outline is so smoth... too smoth... nice effects arounfd the image. try another colours.

The extraction is ok, but I'm not so sure about the blurry hair stuff behind her. While the bg is cute, I think a softer pink color would go better, since she's all pink.
Also, remember that all wallpapers must be 1024 by 768 or higher. MT doesn't accept 800 by 600 anymore.

its is 1024 by 768

I agree with chloe-chan a softer pink would do better, also the text needs to seperate itself more from the background so that u dont have too try to figure out what its saying. Keep it up

ok i will do 1 more edit and c how ^^

It's cute, but I think its a little cluttered :O Maybe if you remove some of the birds and bubbles?

I would have to agree with sacredsky, the background is a bit too clutterred. It distracts the eye from the scan which should be the main focus of the wallie. Try to make it a little more simple. Maybe considder using a gradient that runs from pink to white instead of the solid pink background? Keep up the good work.

Nice picture but the colour of background need to be soft and not too bright.

TOOO much pink oh and your name stands out too much. You had best include you email and your ****.minitokyo.net. Black strips on top and bottom would make this easier

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