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Minitokyo » Culture & Entertainment Fora » The Sandbox  Comments Needed..! ^.^ thanks

should i submit it into the gallery????

Comments Needed..! ^.^ thanks

should i submit it into the gallery????

yes
11 votes
no
6 votes
maybe
8 votes

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my new wallie..! ^.^ feel free to state opinions and suggestions..! ^.^ thankies..! never mind if you sound harsh, thats alright..! hahax..!

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/2775/otherwalliekz6.th.jpg

oh btw anyone wans to join my new club (link removed) hahax..! see ya..!

Ne,norine-chan,the character is quite blur,I like the background and I suggest the plant in her hands should be the background,because it doesn't look real>.< overall I like it.It's the truth.But the character is really blur.Oh and the words,maybe a different looking font and place some Layer Style onto it,it'll look nice.

You might wanna Stroke Outline the text.
I find the flower rather queer cause one minute i find it ok and the next it starts to annoy me.
The wings looks rather faded (as in some parts).
You might want to ask a gallery mod whether you can sumbit this

Like i said in the other thread, you need to unblur the girl. The rest is fine :D

haha kays..! moderator? kuroimisa? i asked her already she said it was ok, but the flower needs to be more solid! hmmm...i'll see what i can do..! ^.^

its great :D but still the girl is blurry like akuma2002 said...

They're right i think the blur on the chara is a bit excessive, other than that i think it's a very nice wall. Thanks for sharing it ^^ .

ya noe I think that this is one for ya best walls^^
but you still need a few changes^^
first you might want to clean the scan cause it looks abit blur
like FutatsuNoNegai said, the plant looks a bit weird in her hand..you might want to use a stock image for this^^
hmm and the font cant reall be seen..so you might want to change that too :)
other than that it looks really good XD
oh and you can go to this site if you dont noe how to clean a scan..
http://www.imanimetions.net/tutorial/tutorial.php?view=clean
hope that was helpful :)

yeah, the charcter looks blur.. you need to vectorize it.. ^^"

looks like you've over-filtered the scan (did you use median filter?). Also, the colour scheme doesn't match, she's wearing blue and green, with pink hair, so the purple doesn't fit anywhere at all. Also, the plant looks like there's a noise filter on it, take it out and make it smoother in style like the girl. The wings look okay, but the colour's waaay too dark for the rest of the wall. The font style looks... out of place, I suggest taking it out, or change it to another font colour and style (maybe a more faded colour)

the picture is quite blurry.....and i think it's a bit....too normal. I think the picture should stand out a bit more....but other than that, it's cute, and you should totally submit it!

hanyaa~ if you use median filter,you should blend it to soft light.. so she doesnt look blur ^^

hmm...i did do that, but it does not seem to unblur, hahax..! maybe it'll try to think of something. thanks for all comments, i'll go edit it somemore..! ^.^

i know! why didnt it still blur.. frst you have duplicate first dont use median filter on the origin image. use it on the duplicate one ^^

yupyup..! the normal, thats wad i always do maybe i should lower the px blured, do you think that will help? i guess, it will be less blur right..! ^.^

yeah! i'm sorry.. is that offend you? T-T

I always do like..gomenasai T-T

merged: 11-28-2006 ~ 09:31pm
i used 5 or 4 px..

oh nope you did not..! ^.^ hahax..! ic..! okie, i'll go test it out..! ^.^

hmmm.. First.. The scan is blur and it is hard to judge on the extraction. The left leg of the scan is being cutted.. >.< Not too sure whether you did the wings on her back but it looks blur too.. ^_^' The bg is pretty ok but u need to change the colour of the font because it was well blended in the bg.. O_O;; GOmen for the comments!~

hahax..! thats alright...! ^.^ i'll go do more editings..! ^.^

I think it's nice but the character is a bit blur ... >.<
Keep on trying XD

i like your wallie >_< , but yeah the same as people pointing at.. the character looks blur. and i like the wing but the colour of wing seems like out from the place. hope that did'nt offend you >_<

hahax..! not it didn't thanks for all comments, still editing..!

nice wallie!
Maybe you can add some blur effect or some shadow effect to the text :)
(and yes, she looks a bit too blur X-P )

  • uyo
  • 1y 43wk ago

Nice wall; it is quite cute, though there are some stuff needing fixing.
Aside from the blur, as many have already said, the flower's noise is kind of bad. I think you should just make it solid. The wings do not look attached; perhaps that was the point, but they look out of place. Especially when they are dotted like that. Also, I find the dots in the bg slightly annoying after a while, but that could just be a personal preference thing.
By the way, across her arms, there is a dark line; I do not know what that is, but I am guessing that should not be there.

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