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well finanly im back into the groove of things and writing the poems i like so heres alil something

Laying before me you are undressed and completely bare
And I tower over you with no intention of playing fair
You naked frame and glimmering skin truely an arousing sight
I now take you to a world full of passion and ecstasy tonight

Tracing my fingers down your slender form you then lightly shake
From a possiblility that it is your virginity I will soon take
Further down your body my fingers gently continue to slide
The feelings of passion in your hungry eyes no longer can you hide

Between your legs my fingers press into you with gentle touch
Gasping from never had experienced an intense pleasure as such
Bringing my hand to my lips I lick your juices from my fingers
The sweet taste of your nectar through my mouth softly lingers

Parting your legs and moving myself over your position
With intentions of pleasuring you until your scream of submission
Pressing into you slowly ensuring the first thrust is deep
Control over emotion along with virginity you no longer keep

Pistoning into you like the great engine I watch you scream
But your heart tells you blissfully it is a passionate dream
Alas from my own heavy breathing I realize that the time is cue
To pump into you the final thrust releasing my climax into you

You always had a way with words.
Once again your poems are bursting with creativity and passion.Dont lose that...or ill cut your throte!

this efinately satifies the seductive part.
Makes me think of all the kinky things ive done hahaha.

me lose my touch...never hehe and yes .i try to get my poems to open and remind people of all there inner feelings of kinkyness

Heyy nice poem youu've wrote there^^ Didn noe that this subject could be put in a poem :D
Keep it coming! :D

OMG *fans face* purrfectly written my friend two thumbs way way WAY up ^_^
wish i could fav this for if i could i would

how...ahhh....romantic...ehheheeh ^_^'
nice...i donno what to say...but me posting here should be enough to tell you it was nice...and it rhymes too...talk about talent...wonder what inspired this poem.. XD
hahahahhaahahhahahahaha

nice poem luckymouse very graphic :)

Quote by Lionhearted911how...ahhh....romanti(...) ^_^'
nice...i donno what to say...but me posting here should be enough to tell you it was nice...and it rhymes too...talk about talent...wonder what inspired this poem.. XD
hahahahhaahahhahahahaha

tis a secretttt ^_-

merged: 12-05-2006 ~ 06:29am

Quote by Lionhearted911how...ahhh....romanti(...) ^_^'
nice...i donno what to say...but me posting here should be enough to tell you it was nice...and it rhymes too...talk about talent...wonder what inspired this poem.. XD
hahahahhaahahhahahahaha

tis a secretttt ^_-

w0ahhhh it rhymes! you really do have a way with words. great job!

very nice, never thought a poem could be made from such a subject, very impressive.

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