i had to write one of these again..after all they are my fav so i hope ya all like

loves grace a simple embrace for you ive found all the pieces that seemed to break.as the worlds collide and dizzyness faded i found you sitting there as you waited for me watching the skys horizon as your dreams never seemd to fade. as your thoughts drifted they became to become hazy in the existence that soon became real as you opened your eyes to me as i wrap my arms in a warm embrace holding you close never letting go..never fading as i erase your worrys making them all so blurry as i stare into your eyes i swear there more beutiful than the stars and heavens combined with a simple touch are lips connect in a breathtaking moment i lay you to reast in forever happyness and forever lore ill make your worrys no more

beautiful...
separate lines if you can and this part lost me for a bit "drifted they became to become hazy" had to reread it
other than that lovely dont stop writing

lol thxs blk

its beautiful indeed.
really nice work

thxs ya all

ahh the poem is very beautiful...
thanks for sharing! and keep it up...the poem is soo sweet
sob
lols...later!

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*cries*....*sniffs*.....very.....touching..(...)
hey man, great work....wow...amazing poem....keep it up....
interesting poems....thanks a lot for sharing...

^)o nooooooooo prob ^^