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Deleted Nami fanart , opinions

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The original lineart from kaenguma Nami, ready to swim ! by Kaenguma , I redrawed some things like the torso or legs , because she was a little too skinny , here is the link http://img179.imageshack.us/my.php?image=namireadytoswimcoloredys2.jpg please tell me opinions :)

Very well done. Simple reason for being deleted from the gallery: too ecchi. You can see every detail of her genetalia. If you use teh same techniques with a less mature scan, you'll get good reviews. ^_^

i agree with sailorchiron... the reason is probably that ... anyways one thing about the pic (now simply commenting on the pic) wouldnt it be better if the part of legs instead of being in the water would be out... if the water was just in the bg? i felt it was add when i saw the pic the first time.. the line of horizon seems to be on the belly of the character (judging only on the character) . . . but I get the impression that water its self has different line of horizon which creates this weird sensation (there are 2 h-lines) .. BUT i love your pic! its reeeeally 3D, coloring and all that.. good job.

I think mine didn't get deleted because i removed a few details in her bikini. It's not very perceptible but this probably made the difference.
It's too bad yours got deleted, because it looks really great. If you remove some details to make her "private parts" less apparent, it will probably be accepted if you resubmit it.

yeah , i added the water and the last moment , ...

i think it is too ecchi..like sailorchiron said..^^
and also...as Oyazi said, the water seems a bit strange...maybe u could have added more water behind her too ^^

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