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Cardcapter Sakura wall ~ comments needed.

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Hi, my newest wall from Cardcapter Sakura. I've completed it but i'm not sure if its ok, so i would like some feedback on it.

Here's the wall: clicky

Please comment~
Thanks! :)

its nice :) but the only thing is sakura and i think you need to blend her in more into the background and smooth out the edges and maybe use a texture over her to make her more blended in the background

i like it but you need to clean the scan first, use the smart blur in PS (if you use it of course) to clean it

im talking about that paper texture in the scan

Background is nice, but the way the water ripples are don't seem to fit into the perspective/angle of the wall, and the petal doesn't seem quite blended in.

i agree with fixing some of the coloring on Sakura, like the grainy texture you can visibly see on her hair. And the ripple is also strange.

I'd also like to add, how about making sakura smaller, if possible. she looks so big and block off a lot of that beautiful background. :) She also seems a little too contrasted, like someone raised the brightness and added a little too much contrast.

-Extraction looks good.
-For the ripples, you need to free transform the height smaller of the ripples so it looks flatter.
-like what almost every other person has said already, sakura is too dark and contrasted with the bg. it looks like she has a hard light layer on her or something..I think you need to make her lighter and softer looking. I dont know if you did duplicate her layer and put it on somekind of layer effect, but if you did, take off that layer effect. If you didnt, duplicate her layer, put it on screen or something, and gaussian blur the top layer a bit. Its hard to advise you on what to do with her layer because I dont know what will look good without doing it myself.
-that moon or planet looks really crisp against a smooth background. I would blur the edges of it just a teeny tiny bit

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