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Burst Angel Wallpaper... Need comments please!

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Ok Ive been working on this wallpaper for about 3 days now. The basic concept of it is as if your looking though the eyes of a cyborg at Joe who has just killed his comrad. The wallpaper is still a major work in progress, there still alot I want to add or change. Im just simply looking for oppinions, comments, critiques (be nice please), and ideas. If you have an idea and know a tutorial to help me with that idea.. please tell me, Im still learning Photoshop. Thank you.

Im looking for a good tutorial on flames and metal objects. If you know of one please post the link. It would be very much appreicated! Thanx again! :)

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9600/burstangelwallie6hk7.th.jpg

Looks good so far and I like the idea but there's a few things:

The background (clouds) needs to be smoothed out, 'cause the smart blur looks too sharp.
The extraction around Jo's scarf thing needs work.
The parts of the buildings, while a good idea, seem too rough against the painty look of the scan.
Also, if you're looking through the eyes of a borg, I would put a very very light (like, lower the opacity as well) "window" type thing on the wall.
If you need a flame tut, check out Ningen's.

Joe looks very good! I like the skin, and the pose. Just work with the background.

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