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RE background, Help!

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Minitokyo » Culture & Entertainment Fora » The Sandbox  RE background, Help!

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Ive tried my best and made this.
Could you please pin point the problems.


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Well, the background is just white (which is low-effort).
So like, you need to find something to put in the background. Maybe you can stick her in front of a wall or something?

More stuff on the wall... ok, I understand.
To the photoshop cave!

Chloe-chan is right, you can make the girl, look like she's sneaking up on someone from behind a wall. Or something along those lines.

As the others have stated, it's a low effort wall since there's nothing there. Try putting in some background pieces, like having her steak up on some bad guys or something.

i am not going to repeat what others have said but a few things if you will.

1) the extraction has obvious jagged edges (edge tear). if i was to guess i would say you used the magic wand. allow me to suggest the pen tool- it's tricky to learn but is ideal for vectoring and selection etc. tutorial here: http://revision3.com/pixelperfect/pentool

after extraction i would suggest taking a very small brush and paint over the outside edge or simply stroke it.

2) the white bg doesn't work here. for a theme of "all alone' i would go with a darker color
the text is horrific as well. the color red is a no-no.

3) most importantly. a wall should have a concept in mind or a purpose to exist. try to visualize what you are going to say with this wall.

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