Crow stopped. Wing stopped. Liz stopped.
Errione moved forward.
Crow stopped, unable to believe what he saw. His buddy, whom he actually had a
crush on, has been turned into a carbon-based waste, her lovely form all
drenched in blood, her eyes, wide, lifeless, as she tried to gasp for air. Her
body lies on the earth, while her blood started flowing out of her like a river
spoiled by humanity.
Wing stopped, in the name of fairness, for he has the advantage, the advantage
to strike and kill his adversary. But at the same time, he can't help but to
smile, as he witnessed, once again, the true nature of Captain Shinshinovi
Mal'Errione.
Liz stopped, for her life is about to be distinguished by reality. All in her
mind, she knew, she was not ready. She thought, that after turning into an
Arrancar, she can defeat anyone. She thought, that by being beautiful, she can
seduce any male who might dare touch her sensitivity, She thought, that by
stepping into Soul Society, she'll be safe from harm, away from the cursed land
called Hueco Mundo. But all of these things that she imagined never became real.
For she finally realised, that battle is not for her. She now started to regret,
why did she allowed herself to become a Hollow. She now started to regret, why
did she allowed herself to be in a messy life called battle. She now started to
regret, why did she allowed her anger to consume her, as she stared at her left
hand, all bloodied (and blurry to her eyes) and dirty.
She merely wants to escape reality.
But so does Errione.
Errione knew what's in her mind. 'I'll kill all
Shinigamis, then no one will then harm me.' His eyes knew it, his mind
knows it, and his heart won't deny it. Pity, he thought, for he knew how harsh reality is. He replaced
Vhalren back to it's scabbard, as he wiped out the blood on his fingers, while
pain stings his soul. But pain is nothing for him. In battle, that is.
For the pain his last victim is uncomparable to any other pain he witnessed
before.
"Done. She failed." Errione said calmly, as he continued walking
forward. Crow just stared at her, unable to draw any emotions, while she lay on
the ground, desperately clinging on life. Her tears started to flow, more
painful than ever, as Liz felt her body slowly getting numb, her consciousness
slowly shutting down. She knows, she'll die.
"Bankin.*"
A suddeny flail of arrows appeared from out of nowhere and lounged on Liz. Crow,
again, was shocked at the sudden action of the man moving towards them. But
before the arrow-like projectiles stroke, Errione spoke anew:
"Reversal of Confinement Spell, Initiate!"
The projectiles stopped moving, and instead of striking their prey, it
dispersed, and the spiritual particles that it emitted covered the Arrancar. And
it froze. Liz , after being drenched in energy, lost her consciousness. And her
pulse.
Crow, realising that it was the final blow, lashed out at Errione...
...only to be dealt by Wing, in a single blow.
"GUH!" Crow choked, as blood sprung out of his body like a fountain.
It was a fatal blow, and his vision became blurry, as his life started it's
demise, fast. He took one last look at Wing, who spoke, "Whoa. I'm your
enemy, not him, right? Oh well, die."
"S***...", were Crow's final words, as he dropped down.
Errione and Wing looked at each other, emotionless.
Errione first spoke, "Am I that ruthless?"
Wing answered, "Yes. Am I that ruthless?"
"Yes. You did not even let the poor guy do his release. What the heck,
Wing, be fair."
"HEY! I AM FAIR! I ALLOWED HIM TO HAVE A BREATHER WHEN HE STOPPED! He
attacked, so I assumed that the fight has resumed, you know, instinct! Yeah,
with added marshmallows!"
"Marshmallows?! Wing... don't tell me... you're hungry again?" Errione
asked, while drawing out a silly smile on his face. Wing snorted, and laughed.
Then both of them looked at Liz, who's timeline has been suspended by Errione's
trick.
"Looks like you got lucky. She survived the 90 spell, dude."
"She nearly died, you dimwit. I nearly failed to initiate the first part.
Well, at least you're right." Errione answered, as he walked back to Liz,
and carried her softly. Then he looked back at Wing, who's now grinning from ear
to ear, while wiping out blood from the Shallow Forge he borrowed. Then they
walked back to the place where the Captains are, as the night started to greet
them.
While walking, Errione looked at Liz, her eyes now closed, still teary-eyed, her
pulse still suspended by the "spell distorment technique*" Errione
used on her. Then he smiled sweetly, as he said back to Wing:
"Yeah, I guess I'm lucky."
-to be continued.-
------------------------ Bankin - Same spell used by Urahara
Keisuke's shop assistant (forgot the muscle-man-with-glasses's name, I'll be
glad if you tell me) on Ichigo during the attempt to awaken Zangetsu. I forgot
the literal translation, but in this fanfic, I made some twists, for Errione's
special capability is obviously Kidoushuu. He has the unique ability to twist,
reform, and neutralize any spell, whenever it's Kidou (Blast), Bakudou
(Confinement), or Kai (Release) spells. Plus, he's able to cast any spell at
full power, or whatever the power output he wished, without even chanting AND
telling the spell initiation, by a bilateral system called 'command'. 'Command'
will be explained later on. Meanwhile, Bankin's level is 90, appropriate for a
level 90 spell like Kurohitsugi.
His Name is Tessai, And Bankin is Bakudou 99: The 1st song is when some strings
come and hold youown, 2nd song shoots swords at you to seal in the string
thingys and the final song : Bankin Taihong creates a large safe over target and
crushes target.
Quote by shinshinovi in the name of
fairness, for he has the advantage, the advantage to
strike and kill his adversary.
try "in the name of equality",
instead of 'fairness'
for he had the...
try "upper hand", instead of 'advantage'
try "oppurtunity", instead of the second 'advantage'
Quote by shinshinovi away from the
cursed land called Hueco Mundo.
try " the cursed land of Hueco
Mundo, instead of 'called'
Quote by shinshinovi She now started
to regret, why did she allowed herself to
become a Hollow. She now started to regret, why
did she allowed herself to be in a messy
life called battle. She now started to regret, why did she allowed her anger to consume her,
*sigh*
She now started to regret allowing
herself to become a Hollow. She now started to regret allowing herself to live this
messy battle-filled life. She now started to regret allowing her anger consume her.
Quote by shinshinovi
She merely wants to escape reality.
But so does Errione.
She merely wanted to escape reality.
But so did Errione.
Quote by shinshinovi Errione knew
what's in her mind. 'I'll kill all Shinigamis, then no one will then harm
me.'
knew what was in her mind...
kill all the Shinigami
Quote by shinshinovihow harsh reality
is. He replaced Vhalren back to it's scabbard, as he wiped out the blood on his fingers, while pain stings his soul. But pain is nothing
for him.
how harsh reality was.
try "He placed Vhalren...",
instead of 'replaced'
try "wiped off the blood...",
instead of 'out'
try "though the pain continued to sting (or - still stung) his
soul"
Quote by shinshinovislowly shutting down. She knows, she'll die.
try "slowing fading away",
instead of 'shutting down'
try "She knows it, she was going to
die", instead of 'She knows, she'll die'
Quote by shinshinovi Wing answered,
"Yes. Am I that ruthless?"
Italic-ify Wing's "I"
Quote by shinshinoviback to the place where the Captains are
'the place' is not nessicary.
where the other Captains were
"back to where the other Captains were"
Zanpaktou name: Faniena. (Looks like a regular fan until it becomes bigger when
the user use her spirit. It has iron razor blades onto it.
Shi Kai Ability (s):
Faniena Jaine- When it stays in the regular fan-like it uses Faniena Jaine,
which the user has to bleed on purpose.
Faniena Macorna- When it bigger it uses the heavenly powers to kill only the
hollows.
Bankai
Faniena Oanuedn- Its Heavenly Powers disabled the the user's foes at
ease.
The user name is Ripsi Macron she is the Captain of the 14th squad and the 14th
squad is secretive it moves in the shadows and it also acts like a executioner
squad it has Soul Reapers and Quincies in her squad.
Ripsi even has a hollow-soul reaper person who protects her his name is Takeshi.
Quote by guessjeans When it stays in
the regular fan-like it uses Faniena Jaine, which the user has to bleed on
purpose.
i have no idea what u mean. whats the
effect?
Quote by guessjeansFaniena Oanuedn-
Its Heavenly Powers disabled the the user's foes at ease.
pls
eloborate, HOW exactly does it "disable" the
foes?
Quote by guessjeans the 14th squad is
secretive it moves in the shadows and it also acts like a executioner squad. It
has Soul Reapers and Quincies in her squad.
The 14th squad
is the recruitment squad... and, just where are these Quincies from? are they
all Uryuu's decendants?
Quote by guessjeansRipsi even has a
hollow-soul reaper person who protects her his name is
Takeshi.
this Takeshi, he is ur Vice? and by Hollow-Soul reaper u mean Vizard, no?
Please read the fanfic right from the beginning, so you'll have an idea.
Regarding those who demand explanation, it will be explained, of course, but
during the fanfic.
Afterwards, chaos850 shall proceed to the RPG version.
Name: Tsuki no Kage (shadow of moon) -> shikai
the blade is like the curved moon with black hilt
release command:
Ability:
> 1st tsuki, Akai tsuki: make the red moon come in the sky, make the opponent
hallucinate...
> 2nd tsuki, kage no kekkai: the opponent surruonded in the darkness make he/
she unable to move
> the bearer can hide in the shadow
> the bearer will especially strong when full moon occurs
Bankai: Mugen Tsuki no Kage
The area became pitch black, the blade itself dissapeared and became new moon in
the sky
ability:
> 3rd tsuki, tsuki no hikari: the opponent covered in the moonlight and make
their movement slower
> final tsuki, (full moon barrage): the moon became full and dropping
countless blade to the opponent
> while the moon still new, or half there in limitation of how many blade can
the user creates from it's light
shikai form: the user is handle 2 zanpakutou , the user is command 9 elemental
dragons -fire,water,earth,wind,ice,dark,light,thunder and gravitation .this
dragon is very insane so the user must think twice to release the
shikai
shi kai abillities:
the user can control 9 kind of elemental and combine those into new kind of
elemental like fire+dark=dark flame or earth+water=forest like that
kind^_^
bankai name: jigoku rekuzan(invisible fang of hell)
bankai form:
the left hand of user is formed by the armor of 9 dragon that have become one in
his left hand and become left hand of the forbiden one , the armor is like the
hand of dragon and very scary ,it pitch black .and the right palm is on armor
to^_^.the user is holding very long katana
bankai execution:as long as the user in this form ,the reiatsu become incridibly
strong , the amounts of reiatsu is incrise ,and he can perform ryuugan(eye of
dragon).user katana can slice enemy in very long distence . his katana can
carved an invisible slash to , whe the enemy is run to the invisible slash , the
enemy can be cut into two piece
bankai abillity:
ryuugan;unable to see a future 10 second forward
hado no hyaku(arts of distruction nomber 100);eneble to perform any kind of
zanpakutou . the user must have a piece of another shinigami's reiatsu that he
want to manipulated it to use in bankai form
gate of death god:a gate that unable to call a reinforcement
gate of myth:a gate that give the user a weapon that he imaginating (like
reality marble^_^)
dai jigoku ryuu no noroi(giant armor of hell dragon);the user is in full armor
mode that brings him into insane
Crow stopped. Wing stopped. Liz stopped.
Errione moved forward.
Crow stopped, unable to believe what he saw. His buddy, whom he actually had a crush on, has been turned into a carbon-based waste, her lovely form all drenched in blood, her eyes, wide, lifeless, as she tried to gasp for air. Her body lies on the earth, while her blood started flowing out of her like a river spoiled by humanity.
Wing stopped, in the name of fairness, for he has the advantage, the advantage to strike and kill his adversary. But at the same time, he can't help but to smile, as he witnessed, once again, the true nature of Captain Shinshinovi Mal'Errione.
Liz stopped, for her life is about to be distinguished by reality. All in her mind, she knew, she was not ready. She thought, that after turning into an Arrancar, she can defeat anyone. She thought, that by being beautiful, she can seduce any male who might dare touch her sensitivity, She thought, that by stepping into Soul Society, she'll be safe from harm, away from the cursed land called Hueco Mundo. But all of these things that she imagined never became real. For she finally realised, that battle is not for her. She now started to regret, why did she allowed herself to become a Hollow. She now started to regret, why did she allowed herself to be in a messy life called battle. She now started to regret, why did she allowed her anger to consume her, as she stared at her left hand, all bloodied (and blurry to her eyes) and dirty.
She merely wants to escape reality.
But so does Errione.
Errione knew what's in her mind. 'I'll kill all Shinigamis, then no one will then harm me.' His eyes knew it, his mind knows it, and his heart won't deny it. Pity, he thought, for he knew how harsh reality is. He replaced Vhalren back to it's scabbard, as he wiped out the blood on his fingers, while pain stings his soul. But pain is nothing for him. In battle, that is.
For the pain his last victim is uncomparable to any other pain he witnessed before.
"Done. She failed." Errione said calmly, as he continued walking forward. Crow just stared at her, unable to draw any emotions, while she lay on the ground, desperately clinging on life. Her tears started to flow, more painful than ever, as Liz felt her body slowly getting numb, her consciousness slowly shutting down. She knows, she'll die.
"Bankin.*"
A suddeny flail of arrows appeared from out of nowhere and lounged on Liz. Crow, again, was shocked at the sudden action of the man moving towards them. But before the arrow-like projectiles stroke, Errione spoke anew:
"Reversal of Confinement Spell, Initiate!"
The projectiles stopped moving, and instead of striking their prey, it dispersed, and the spiritual particles that it emitted covered the Arrancar. And it froze. Liz , after being drenched in energy, lost her consciousness. And her pulse.
Crow, realising that it was the final blow, lashed out at Errione...
...only to be dealt by Wing, in a single blow.
"GUH!" Crow choked, as blood sprung out of his body like a fountain. It was a fatal blow, and his vision became blurry, as his life started it's demise, fast. He took one last look at Wing, who spoke, "Whoa. I'm your enemy, not him, right? Oh well, die."
"S***...", were Crow's final words, as he dropped down.
Errione and Wing looked at each other, emotionless.
Errione first spoke, "Am I that ruthless?"
Wing answered, "Yes. Am I that ruthless?"
"Yes. You did not even let the poor guy do his release. What the heck, Wing, be fair."
"HEY! I AM FAIR! I ALLOWED HIM TO HAVE A BREATHER WHEN HE STOPPED! He attacked, so I assumed that the fight has resumed, you know, instinct! Yeah, with added marshmallows!"
"Marshmallows?! Wing... don't tell me... you're hungry again?" Errione asked, while drawing out a silly smile on his face. Wing snorted, and laughed. Then both of them looked at Liz, who's timeline has been suspended by Errione's trick.
"Looks like you got lucky. She survived the 90 spell, dude."
"She nearly died, you dimwit. I nearly failed to initiate the first part. Well, at least you're right." Errione answered, as he walked back to Liz, and carried her softly. Then he looked back at Wing, who's now grinning from ear to ear, while wiping out blood from the Shallow Forge he borrowed. Then they walked back to the place where the Captains are, as the night started to greet them.
While walking, Errione looked at Liz, her eyes now closed, still teary-eyed, her pulse still suspended by the "spell distorment technique*" Errione used on her. Then he smiled sweetly, as he said back to Wing:
"Yeah, I guess I'm lucky."
-to be continued.-
------------------------
Bankin - Same spell used by Urahara Keisuke's shop assistant (forgot the muscle-man-with-glasses's name, I'll be glad if you tell me) on Ichigo during the attempt to awaken Zangetsu. I forgot the literal translation, but in this fanfic, I made some twists, for Errione's special capability is obviously Kidoushuu. He has the unique ability to twist, reform, and neutralize any spell, whenever it's Kidou (Blast), Bakudou (Confinement), or Kai (Release) spells. Plus, he's able to cast any spell at full power, or whatever the power output he wished, without even chanting AND telling the spell initiation, by a bilateral system called 'command'. 'Command' will be explained later on. Meanwhile, Bankin's level is 90, appropriate for a level 90 spell like Kurohitsugi.
His Name is Tessai, And Bankin is Bakudou 99: The 1st song is when some strings come and hold youown, 2nd song shoots swords at you to seal in the string thingys and the final song : Bankin Taihong creates a large safe over target and crushes target.
Ahh, so it's 99, not 90. I'll correct it tommorow.
Thanks for the info dude.
well i have officially eaten my own words. Errione is not heartless, just cold and clever
DIE EUGENE... DIE.
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Haha!
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merged: 02-15-2008 ~ 04:26pm
time to edit ur work dude.
... by Wing was answered...
...and Liz were in a....
had a homing ability or 'could home in onto its target'.
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...asked the said captain...
the captain sat on the ground.
INFLATABLE not PORTABLE.
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Her body lying on the earth
try "in the name of equality", instead of 'fairness'
for he had the...
try "upper hand", instead of 'advantage'
try "oppurtunity", instead of the second 'advantage'
her life was about to be
try " the cursed land of Hueco Mundo, instead of 'called'
*sigh*
She now started to regret allowing herself to become a Hollow. She now started to regret allowing herself to live this messy battle-filled life. She now started to regret allowing her anger consume her.
She merely wanted to escape reality.
But so did Errione.
knew what was in her mind...
kill all the Shinigami
how harsh reality was.
try "He placed Vhalren...", instead of 'replaced'
try "wiped off the blood...", instead of 'out'
try "though the pain continued to sting (or - still stung) his soul"
try "slowing fading away", instead of 'shutting down'
try "She knows it, she was going to die", instead of 'She knows, she'll die'
Italic-ify Wing's "I"
'the place' is not nessicary.
where the other Captains were
"back to where the other Captains were"
I dont want to die yet i aint wingz.,,,
BEsides The only thing u can do to harm me is to cero or bala me EDWARD....
Wingz doesnt want to die u dumbass. if he wanted to he would have released his Bankai by now.
Bloody bullshit. Do you seriously think that a freaking 3rd seat can survive a Kenpachi?
Edward is a cool name, a great name. The name of Kings
Bring it on u melee fag
He'll join soon. Don't worry.
Anyways, regarding the Gigai, I said "Portable" because you can carry it ANYWHERE.
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Catch is, it's hard to use, no one had managed to use it like Urahara... until I came into scene. /brag /brag
why r Chaos and Way of Life fighting again?
Shin i said INFLATABLE cos thats why Urahara himself said.
But u see it may be a different one from uraharas one.....
it may be Shins own creation :P
It's Urahara's. Errione modified it. So, it's PORTABLE. >:)
But, Kisuke's one was also Portable... ;p
Zanpaktou name: Faniena. (Looks like a regular fan until it becomes bigger when the user use her spirit. It has iron razor blades onto it.
Shi Kai Ability (s):
Faniena Jaine- When it stays in the regular fan-like it uses Faniena Jaine, which the user has to bleed on purpose.
Faniena Macorna- When it bigger it uses the heavenly powers to kill only the hollows.
Bankai
Faniena Oanuedn- Its Heavenly Powers disabled the the user's foes at ease.
The user name is Ripsi Macron she is the Captain of the 14th squad and the 14th squad is secretive it moves in the shadows and it also acts like a executioner squad it has Soul Reapers and Quincies in her squad.
Ripsi even has a hollow-soul reaper person who protects her his name is Takeshi.
uhh...
i have no idea what u mean. whats the effect?
pls eloborate, HOW exactly does it "disable" the foes?
The 14th squad is the recruitment squad... and, just where are these Quincies from? are they all Uryuu's decendants?
this Takeshi, he is ur Vice? and by Hollow-Soul reaper u mean Vizard, no?
Please read the fanfic right from the beginning, so you'll have an idea.
Regarding those who demand explanation, it will be explained, of course, but during the fanfic.
Afterwards, chaos850 shall proceed to the RPG version.
yeah. im gonna pretty much demand details and GOOD ENGLISH! ;p nah, just try yer best.
Name: Tsuki no Kage (shadow of moon) -> shikai
the blade is like the curved moon with black hilt
release command:
Ability:
> 1st tsuki, Akai tsuki: make the red moon come in the sky, make the opponent hallucinate...
> 2nd tsuki, kage no kekkai: the opponent surruonded in the darkness make he/ she unable to move
> the bearer can hide in the shadow
> the bearer will especially strong when full moon occurs
Bankai: Mugen Tsuki no Kage
The area became pitch black, the blade itself dissapeared and became new moon in the sky
ability:
> 3rd tsuki, tsuki no hikari: the opponent covered in the moonlight and make their movement slower
> final tsuki, (full moon barrage): the moon became full and dropping countless blade to the opponent
> while the moon still new, or half there in limitation of how many blade can the user creates from it's light
coool
just to be sure, its full-based shikai rite?
ur sword looks weird (the way i imagine it anyway)
i was bout to correct all ur mistakes... but... NAH!
Author's Notes
I know that I have not updated this thread for about 6 days now, but please bear with me. Real-life issues are eating my brains out.
Thank you.
hey i want to give mine to , can i ^_^
zanpakutou name:rekuzan(invisible fang)
initial release command(shi kai):Rage,rekuzan
shikai form: the user is handle 2 zanpakutou , the user is command 9 elemental dragons -fire,water,earth,wind,ice,dark,light,thunder and gravitation .this dragon is very insane so the user must think twice to release the shikai
shi kai abillities:
the user can control 9 kind of elemental and combine those into new kind of elemental like fire+dark=dark flame or earth+water=forest like that kind^_^
bankai name: jigoku rekuzan(invisible fang of hell)
bankai form:
the left hand of user is formed by the armor of 9 dragon that have become one in his left hand and become left hand of the forbiden one , the armor is like the hand of dragon and very scary ,it pitch black .and the right palm is on armor to^_^.the user is holding very long katana
bankai execution:as long as the user in this form ,the reiatsu become incridibly strong , the amounts of reiatsu is incrise ,and he can perform ryuugan(eye of dragon).user katana can slice enemy in very long distence . his katana can carved an invisible slash to , whe the enemy is run to the invisible slash , the enemy can be cut into two piece
bankai abillity:
ryuugan;unable to see a future 10 second forward
hado no hyaku(arts of distruction nomber 100);eneble to perform any kind of zanpakutou . the user must have a piece of another shinigami's reiatsu that he want to manipulated it to use in bankai form
gate of death god:a gate that unable to call a reinforcement
gate of myth:a gate that give the user a weapon that he imaginating (like reality marble^_^)
dai jigoku ryuu no noroi(giant armor of hell dragon);the user is in full armor mode that brings him into insane
i want a zanpaktou with a lightening effect.as for its shikai maybe it is a small dagger form.till its bankai.i will just become lightening on my hand