Hmmm i dont know whats wrong but i think i need to extract the scan of Shiki and Sion ..

hmmm what part of the extraction is poor.. and is the Background okay?

the extraction doesn't look so bad to me.

the background seems fine too except it's a little blurry. i think you should try and play with the lightning effects on the characters so they look a little less brighter, maybe to match the rest of the environment

I can see some white around the nose and jaw of the guy and along some parts of the hat and hair of the girl. The background is kinda blurry.

I agree with what Choe has said. Also, you may have gone slightly overboard with the smart blur, since the quality of the scan isn't so great in some areas.

okay got it .. hmm i made some little changes and i want to look like an old movie pic...hmmm so what do you think...

Personally, I like the first version's colors better. There is also still a little white by the guy's nose. Other than that, it's pretty cool.

Final edit...

Nice work on the background, it looks really nice. And although you got rid of the white stuff, now there is a bunch of black stuff around the guy's nose. O.o