Ok people this is my Second Chapter of my MT Novel
enjoy and please comment remember it's made up and oh you'll need something
to
eat it's pretty long ><
Enjoy! ^_^
Chapter 2
Kit-Nekoâs On the Case
I decided to take Cloudnineâs advice and I sent a PM to Tama-Neko
In hopes that sheâs would reply.
I waited and waited and she never did and soon MT was looking pretty dull.
âWhatâs going on were are all the members?â? a member
named Irix asked.
âUhh Iâm working on it guysâ? I replied.
âYour not a mod neither a Admin what can you do?â? said Bromithia
a member with an attitude.
âUhh well you see I kind of know whatâs going onâ?
âOh really why donât you fill us in thenâ?
âWell I canât say much except be careful and donât get
too much into MTâ?
âHmmm whateverâ? he replied.
It was a shame these members really didnât know how much danger they
were in and I knew me telling me everything was going to be ok meant nothing.
âSo what do you think about the people disappearing? Cool
huh?â?
âCool? Whatâs wrong with you? Thatâs not cool at all
Fiona is missing and I donât think I can bring her backâ?
âWell I always knew the world would end, but I didnât think it
would end with us all being sucked into a computerâ?
I didnât like the way that sounded at all, if I was going to get all the
members back I would have to get in the computer somehow but how? I just wish
that Tama-Neko would reply to me.
I felt so lost and hopeless I was going against a person who I thought was
just a character made up but no she was realâ¦.BotChii
Is alive and if I donât stop her sheâs going to
well⦠who knows but the world will be empty. When I got home from
school I started to look at the computer and think of how she was pulling them
into the computer but I couldnât find it no crack or anything. Then I
got a PM from Tama-Neko.
The message read:
âCloudnine knows you? Thatâs a surprise I must admit, yes I do
realize the members are missing and Iâm working on it I really
donât need your help with anything you should just stay off till I fix
everythingâ?
I had to write back because I didnât feel right standing back while she
went and tried to save all those member by herself so I offered my help to her
and told her about the unknown PMâs that I got then I got a new message
from her.
The message read:
âUnknown messages? BotChii is sending you that I hope you know,
sheâs not unknown and not bad at all in fact BotChii is trying to help
us not kill usâ?
She didnât believe me about BotChii and I knew she wouldnât
because Tama-Neko really looked up to BotChii and I knew I couldnât
change her mind. So I had to come up with another plan to get her on my side and
believe that BotChii was really doing everything that was happening.
Then I got another message from Tama.
The message read:
âSo how do you plan to save the members? Youâre going to need
help right? And I know how to enter her world so you coming kid?â?
Finally!! I had a person who could help me she wasnât the nicest but she
was my only help and I had to take anything I could get.
Then I got several PMâs and I was kind of happy to see that their were
from my friends and they has real good news I could tell from the subjects they
put so I read all of them
The messages read:
(From: ShyxSakura) âKitten!! Let me help you Saki knows how to get in
the world too Saki can help!!â?
(From: Devilet) âKitten I can help you weâll all go together and
kick BotChiiâs buttâ?
(From: Alpha) âDear friend Kitten I can help, Tama told me
youâre going to save the membersâ?
(From: Bromitha) âHey, Tama said your going to challenge BC Iâm
in if you like it or notâ?
(From: Belmikry) âHey Iâm up for it letâs get
going!â?
I replied back to all of them and was kind of wondering how they were all
going to get inside their computers or in BotChiiâs world as they said.
I was also wondering why Tama decided to help me it was weird because at first
she didnât want me to even bother but then she changed her mind pretty
fast. Well now that I had a team and enough information I was ready to visit
BotChii in her sick world.
I thought I would send Tama a PM and ask how we were going to get in
BotChiiâs world but also to ask her a question
My message read:
âHey Tama, umâ¦exactly how are we going to get in
BotChiiâs world? Oh and I made a name up for us not our whole team I
kind of thought it would be me and you but itâs very good to have our
friends help us! But what to you think of the name Kit-Neko?â?
I thought I would lighten Tama up a bit she was a very mysterious person
and very quiet but she always expects the best and I believe she deserves it but
I always thought she was way to strict and didnât know how to have fun.
Then I got another message this time it was from OracleAngel it was good to see
he was still here.
The message read:
âBotChii has all the other Gallery Director! Iâm the only one
left she must like me huh? Anyway Iâm here to help you if you need help
I can help you while youâre in BotChiiâs world so donât
sweat it and get are friends back!â?
I really was happy to hear from OracleAngel though I wondered why BotChii
didnât take him but it was good to have him here helping me along.
âWe all will meet at the Clueless oneâs houseâ?
Tama sent every one of us a PM and the clueless one I knew she meant me. We all
lived very far from each other but we all manage to be together in my apartment
but it was late.
âOk you guys got the plan right?â?
âYeah!! Sakiâs ready!â?
âNow guys we have to be careful BotChii is no normal personâ?
âThat is right we must be on our guard all timeâ?
I looked around the room and just looked at everyone sitting there and plan.
What we were going to do? They all looked scared except for Tama she looked
tired somewhat.
âHey Tama why donât you sleep in my bed you look tiredâ?
âNo Iâm fineâ?
âGo ahead please rest I donât mindâ?
âFine if you insist so muchâ?
âNight!â?
I slept on the floor with the rest of my friends. I know we all
couldnât sleep so I just had to ask a stupid question.
âUmmâ¦. guys what MT stands for?â?
âHaha maybe Mindless Toys?â?
âOh Saki knows!! Meanies Takeover?â?
âUmm thanks for the answers you twoâ?
âHey Kittenâ?
âYeah Tama?â?
âThat name you picked for usâ?
âYeahâ?
âIt will do fineâ?
The Next morning I had woke up early and I tried to log on but MT
wasnât coming up. I ran to the living room and put the news on to see if
anymore people were missing.
âIt is a depressing day for everyone around the world as more people
disappear from the world without any traceâ?
More and more people were being sucked in and more people were crying for their
lost ones.
âMy people do not fear for I have come with a solution to end these
disappearing problemsâ? The President announced on the news.
âShutdown MT!!! They canât do that how will we get into
BotChiiâs world?â?
Devilet was very angry and so was I, they had decided to Shutdown MT to stop
people from disappearing it was good idea but not good for us.
âFine well break in the safe and get the disk back so we can
enterâ?
âTama wait we canât do thatâ?
I was really surprised to hear Tama say that but then again thatâs
something I thought she would say. I agreed with her nothing was going to stop
me from rescuing my dear friend and the other members as well.
âIt will be dangerous weâre going to have to fight our way
throughâ?
I really had no idea what Tama meant when she said that but then I kind of had
an idea.
âYou mean punching and kicking right?â?
âNo silly!! Fight with magicâ?
Magic? I hope they were playing with me. I mean first people disappear by
getting sucked into a computer and now their telling me they can use magic I
felt like I was in a crazy house but they all looked serious.
âMagic? You guys use magic? Since when?!?â?
âYou mean you canât?â? asked Devilet.
âWell sorry Iâm not a witch and Iâm only normal you
knowâ?
âThen itâs best you stay close to usâ?
âAlphaâs right BotChii will crush youâ?
âOk if you guys say soâ?
I still couldnât get over it since when do people use magic? And why was
I so new to it, if I had no magic why did BotChii want me to find her? I knew
from there I was in trouble and I donât think even my friends could help
me.
âYou ok?â?
âOh yes Iâm fine Bel donât worryâ?
I tired to smile to let her know it wasnât bothering me but it was a lot
âWhy canât I use magic?â?
I thought of it all that time how I was going to defend myself against her?
I might die in the process but all I could think of was my friends and how much
I wanted to help them all.
âDonât worryâ¦.weâll protect you,
promiseâ?
I felt Bel hug me and I just wanted to believe her but I knew I couldnât
be safe and I didnât want them to die over me I really didnât
know what to do.
âOk people here we go the safe were the disk is at is hidden in that
level of the tower but the security is very good and itâs going to be
hard to get into understand?â?
âYep so whatâs the plan?â?
âHmmm ok weâll all do what comes to mindâ?
âHuh?â?
âYep freestyle peopleâ?
âYeah letâs have fun!!â?
âAbout Kittenâ¦.â?
âShe stays with meâ?
âGot itâ?
âOk then get the disk keep Kitten safe and go in freestyle
right?â?
âYes letâs goâ?
We arrived at the tower were the we saw tons of guards and police cars you would
think they were protecting the president or something
I wondered how Tama and the rest were going to pull this over and get us in that
tower but I could do nothing but watch. Then I felt heat near me I looked to my
side and I saw ShyxSakura or Saki as we called her holding a fire ball like it
was no big deal I just stood there amazed and I felt so small compared to
her.
âThe forest right?â?
âYes close to were they can all see itâ?
âWait, wait, wait we canât just set the forest on fire
weâd be killing the tress and half the forest for that
matter!â?
âIf we donât do this people will die and having forests around
wonât matter!â?
âBut Tama!â?
âBurn it Saki!â?
I watched as Saki threw the fire and it quickly caught on and grew bigger. I was
so angry but I knew that was the only was we would be able to get through them
all, I could tell Saki didnât like the idea but we all had no other
choice.
âOk letâs go while their busy with thatâ?
We all ran to the back of the tower and busted the back door open then ran up
the stairs were Tama stopped and looked outside.
âHmmm some guards are still near the tower I guess we should have some
of us go on top of the tower and tell us their move it would be easier to know
where they areâ?
âSaki likes that idea!! Who will go?!â?
âHmm well I really donât knowâ?
âHow about Alpha and Bromithia?â?
âFine the both of you go to the top and tell us every move the guards
makeâ?
âBe careful you guys!â?
âThank you Kittenâ?
âWhatever letâs go alreadyâ?
We all ran up the stairs of the huge tower that seem to go on forever. I could
tell we were all tired so we stopped.
âWaaah! With all this money canât they make an elevator?!?
âWell Saki this is the back of the tower they made no elevator because
no one enters from the backâ?
âWell they could treat their thiefâs right donât you
think?â?
âHahaha maybe Deviâ?
Suddenly as we were lying on the steps we heard a hugs rumble then another one
almost as if the place was falling apart then we heard both Brom and Alpha
talking on their communicators at the same time till we heard
âGet out their sending a Guard they know were here!!â?
I felt my stomach turn for a moment what the hell could be that big to make
those sounds?
âNo were going to fight itâ?
âWhat?!?! Have you lost your mind Tama?!?â?
âWhere not going to make it out in time I know what that thing is and
thereâs only one way to get by and thatâs to fight!â?
âBut!! Sakiâs not prepared and Saki doesnât want to
die!!â?
I was wondering how Tama was planning to keep me safe but then she looked at me
and pointed.
âGet Ready youâre our main ticket to beat himâ?
âHuh... me?!?â?
âYes I donât feel your weak rays anymore that means your good to
fightâ?
âWait a minute Iâm just a normal personâ?
âYea I know I thought that too but there are always some people who
stand different from the restâ?
âOhâ¦â?
âAnd we are those peopleâ?
I got what Tama was saying somewhat but I still didnât know how she
planning on me to bring some powerful source out I canât even finish
dishes let alone a huge thing that weights a ton! But I figure I was going to
give it a swing and try what ever to help them out.
After awhile while we were planning the noise stopped.
âWhat happened?â?
Ok you made it through the end congratulations! hope it wasn't boring
*sorry for the missing words I know there's some missing but next time or when I
have time
I will just write the name of the person who's talking I think that will be a
better idea ^_^
yeepee chapter's 2 out...... good job once again. ahah seems like MT is the
focus of the whole world actually (i like the way you put "the world would
end"........ hey not everyone goes on this site ^_^)
and the freestyle kit-neko team....... muahahah i can imagine that. you sure
should have ppl make sketches of the characters, that would be so cool. and
tama's sleeping on the bed *kicks tama off* the bed is mine
bromithia *pwned*
ahah i love that story, i just can't wait for kitten superpowaa..... anyway
still the "microsoft word problem" with the apostrophes etc. but
otherwise it's pretty good, yet sooo unrealistic. a bunch of ppl going to
assault a heavy guarded building freestyle XP
This is a great great chapter Kitten!!! I love the suspense and actions!!! It
was so cool the moment Saki threw the fireball...........This story is just
lovable Kitten!!! I'll be so looking forward to the next one!!!
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~ Kitten rockz!!!
Fascinating~ I really like the fact that people can use magic. That's pretty
neat. But since Kitten can't use magic, I think you're going to end up with the
biggest in the role in the end. ^_^ This is getting really good!
ok. I finally got some free time to read it Your
story is getting more and more intresting. We have new characters developing
here, like Tama, Devilet, etc. (to tell you the truth from what you were writing
at the very begining I thought that Tama is in league with botChii XP but now
she is a good character). Cannot wait for the next installment. Just one
criticism though, since you are having many characters and the long dialogues it
gets confusing who is speaking what. So either use smth like this: Tama:
"...". Saki: "..." or "........",said Tama. etc.
So that it is clear for the reader who is the person speaking at the moment.
Other then that good story
oh man, you're a master of suspense...right when it's getting really good...the
chapter ends...
i luv the team's name...kit-neko...it's so cute. and i luv how you guys have
magic...makes it even more interesting. can't wait to find out what you're
power is...sounds like it will be very powerful.
and i was just gonna comment that you should add names to the dialogue, but you
already covered that...lol!
this was not boring at all...it's too exciting!
This is very nice!! I love the story.
I can't wait to see what will happen to you. ^__^
Hehe!!
This is very exciting!!
I'll look forward to your next chapter!! Keep up the good work. ^__^
[Thank you, 'Super Drive' & 'The Rage Beat' from Gravitation, for lifting my
spirits to type up this stuff!]
[Sorry, I couldn't control myself typing out this horrible thing!]
Kitten! No, I was thinking for days now: please don't include me in your
story... but thanks for the offer! Oh no, this thread really is distracting
me....
But I do have a suggestion re: including other MT members/personages into your
story! ^_^ Thanks again in advance for hearing me out.
i did mention a while back that other MT people might get left out and feel bad
about not being included in the story. But on the other hand, putting too many
characters in your MT novel might be bad, too. Too many characters would mean
less time to flesh out each character. And it might turn like into a "MT
member of the day" for the story or something... (heh, 'am still burdened
with lots of stuff offline, so sorry for not being clear enough).
but! I do have something in mind to remedy the
"too-many-characters-in-story" problem a bit: may I suggest
introducing two (2) new characters in your story later on? (I don't think these
two MT members would stumble upon this thread, so it's kinda safe to put these
two in... but I feel they'd love to be in your story anyways. Also, it's my
surprise to them. Anyway, you have all the right to turn down this suggestion,
ok? No prob. ^_~). I did have a lot of fun typing all this out!
Proposed New Characters for your MT
Novel: vampyre and sarak
Character Descriptions: (only partly
based on their real personalities!)
Best of friends (with a little hint of something else, if you'd like ^_~ ...),
vampyre and sarak are a pair of traveling doujinshi artists/manga-ka. They met
up in formal art school, found out that the academic pursuit is robbing them of
their creativity and passions (their art professors detest their
'anything-goes-rough-style-of-art [it's not art to draw manga, they say, lol]
and their peers find them too weird) so they decide to drop out of art school
and just enjoy their common love for doujinshi... but by accident, they
discovered their 'special ability' (to be detailed below).
vampyre is the more-outgoing, impulsive, outspoken of the two. Whatever she
wants, she gets. She can get to be a little clumsy, and she kinda hates boys.
sarak, on the other hand, likes things to be quiet and orderly. She teases
vampyre a lot, and she has a lot of wise things to say. However, sarak can be
quite indecisive because she wants things to be well-thought-out, so she can't
be counted on for a quick decision.
vampyre loves and is more or less skilled in sketching, while sarak absolutely
loves coloring vampyre's drawings. They share a single sketchbook, but vampyre
carries her own pens and pencils, while sarak carries watercolors, crayons,
color pencils and even a mini-laptop loaded with a fancy computer program that
can scan in vampyre's sketches and color them.
Special Powers:
Doujinshi Summon!
Obviously, they are not ordinary artists. When they combine their mental powers,
whatever they drew and colored on any medium becomes real or comes into being,
solid and empowered with special abilities that they wished that drawing with.
Sort of like a summon, but they summon characters they drew and colored! The
summoned character also can act and think on its own! Can I call this power the
"Doujinshi Summon"? They just
think real hard enough, and amazingly, their thoughts create the summons from
the sketchbook!
So, basically, the Doujinshi Summons are MT members/denizens themselves. You can
get to choose which MT members fit for each doujinshi summon.
Weaknesses:
Of course, this duo can only do the 'Doujinshi Summoning' technique when both of
them are present. The power they have has unlimited potential, but can take
time, as vampyre and sarak have to have some idea first of the chara before they
can summon it/them. Maybe they have to concentrate thinking for at least 10
minutes? Also, if any of the two are hurt badly, the 'doujinshi summon'
disappears. Oh, you can have a time limit sort of thing, like the summon only
lasts for a day or so. Afterwards, the summoned doujinshi fades and the drawing
on vampyre's sketchbook disappears.
Also, maybe the summon can be a drain to both vampyre and sarak that they can
only summon three times in a day...
Also, when vampyre draws something and sarak colors it, they have to somewhat
mentally agree on the character they have in mind. If they have
slightly-different feelings or thoughts about their drawings, well, the
write-ups below might give an idea as to what might happen:
Scenario Examples:
Can I give some funny examples?
For example, vampyre draws a really big, fat but cuddly teddy bear or cat on her
sketchbook. She thinks to herself, "This is a mecha-teddy-bear/kitty armed
with big laser eyes and such (lol, shades of OracleAngel's wallpaper?)!"
She then hands over the sketchbook to sarak, who likes the drawing, but since
she doesn't want the teddy bear or cat doujinshi to be that big (she has a
phobia for teddy bears/cats or something, lol) so she kinda messes up the
coloring; she wants it to be a little smaller when they summon it.
Ok, they think and imagine the chara is real ... but since they didn't agree
fully on the chara, the summon they created pops out as.... Anjhurin or diamarrr! (you should see their
avatars, btw, so cute...) The summon seems like a weak, small, wiggling teddy
bear/cat thing... he's small, but when threaten, he can let out a powerful Teddy
Bear Sonic Scream, or Neko-Scream or something (lol, what about having someone
translate the attacks into Japanese for some fun?)...
Ok, for serious examples:
vampyre draws a really dramatic drawing of a samurai warrior or knight drawing
(well, she drew them with a helmet or a cloak thing that covers their faces, so
that covers up his hate for boys, lol... 'hope you're still enjoying this!)...
sarak, since she is so inspired, colors it well... and when they concentrate,
out pops... shinsengumi or even
Jinzhou or Drak or KnightofLain or DREAM or gundragon or hikarujm! Armed with a deadly katana or
broadsword or a rogue knife (you can invent some attacks for them) and with a
loyal devotion to their mistresses...
Or, other examples, like: vampyre draws a ferocious-looking werewolf lady, but
sarak wants to tone down the violence, so she colors it differently (and added
some curvy lines to accent her more feminine features... and out comes Ayamael, a shape-shifting lycanthrope a
la Wolf's Rain, with a sarcastic attitude (she can tease both vampyre and sarak
and say they're amateur, upstart, hippie-wannabe-artists, and she can complain
like, "Hey, you didn't draw my tail right!" or something, just for
fun...)... but again, she can fight without any hesitation or something.
Or, another example: vampyre wants to help out another character in the story
(say, belmikry, Tama-Neko or OracleAngel) about a certain puzzle or problem that
they need to solve before they could progress into the next level or
something... so she draws either a female or male character with glasses of
sorts (and a large book, to boot)... and out comes Terra-chan, Kei-kun, markjo or Mordin or Celessa, doujinshi summons whom they can
turn to advice or something, since they seem to be wise and can give another
perspective on things.... ^^^^^
Or (yes, another example), maybe the party comes to a town/root town or whatever
that only speaks Spanish or Russian, and they have trouble understanding the
inhabitants of the place, so they draw and color another character, like pegassuss (scholarly multinglingual
artist) or Mistress
(elf/fantasy-bent artist).
i hope this all gets thru! I think I kinda went overboard making examples....
Please do pick and choose ideas you like!
vampyre and sarak's Final Attack:
"Arte Infinite"
What about giving vampyre and sarak also a special Final Attack?
For example, the biriwilg-rescue party is in a rather-sticky situation (too many
enemies, half of the party have fainted or too weak to fight), the vampyre-sarak
tandem can draw other doujinshi/wallpaper artists who in turn can draw other
characters to fight their enemies? So, if vampyre and sarak draws and colors a
whole bunch of MT doujinshi/wallpaper artists (like for example, they draw and
color white-zero
(Abstraction-Action-Artist), bongtakun
(Online-RPG-Character-Artist), Evanrued (Butterfly-Obssession-Artist),
Clap (Touch-of-Darkness-Artist), minakomel (Vector-Fun-Artist), Anjeille (Lady-of-Light-Artist), frozenwilderness
(Melancholy-Artist), pegassuss
(Creatures-of-The-Mind-Artist), CoolBlueX
(Anime-Guys-All-Around-Artist), levezzali (SurrealRomanticist-Artist)
and other doujinshi/wallpaper artists), these "Doujinshi Summons" then
can be commanded by vampyre/sarak to draw other "Doujinshi Summons" to
attack their enemies or something? So if these 10 Doujinshi/Wallpaper Artist
summons draw other summons, that makes 20 Doujinshi Summons to attack the
baddies with their respective attacks?
"Arte Infinite"... but one main drawback of this is that they might
lose their lives doing this (ohhh, just to put the immense gamble they'd have to
face when they do this) ... they would lose too much life force or something...
ehe, does this sound cliche-ish?
Please do change the MT members/artists (or find or explore other people who
might fit more into the story)! I only mentioned people which first came into
mind, ok?
Final words?:
Oh! These are only examples, Kitten! If you really feel that these don't exactly
fit into the story, please do feel free to trash the whole idea and feel free to
take any idea that you like! Or you can completely reject this whole darn thing.
But I did have fun making this whole thing up (I'm supposed to do something
else, but your thread is really distracting me, sorry). We call that
"re-appropriating ideas". Anyway, I really had fun typing this thing
out... lol, odd stress-relief thing...
Anyway, sorry for the long idea, but maybe the vampyre-sarak-Doujinshi-Summon
characters might be a plot device so that you could introduce other MT members
into the story without sacrificing much character development and stuff... since
you only have to put these two characters (vampyre and sarak) on the main party,
and you can devise some way to put the other MT members' names as
"Doujinshi Summons" as the story progresses...
But for back story on vampyre and sarak, maybe you could put in something that
they are looking for, something that [Bot]Chii has that the two need... oh,
maybe they need some energy thing from [Bot]Chii that they need so that the
charas they create can last longer summoned or something... or maybe something
simpler, like maybe they're just curious about the whole disappearance thing and
offered their help.
Hey, sorry again if this sounds too crazy.
'Hope this helps! Yikes, I gotta go back to other commitments now!
[Note: The above-mentioned MT members are, more or less, mentioned because of
certain characteristics they seem to embody in this virtual space. Apologies in
advance for any offended parties! Gomen. ]
Hey Kitten, you're writing an awesome story here! The action is heating up and I
can't help but love the way everyone is supporting each other, especially
Tama-chan ^_^ I like friendship stories very much!
Ok people this is my Second Chapter of my MT Novel
enjoy and please comment remember it's made up and oh you'll need something to
eat it's pretty long ><
Enjoy! ^_^
Chapter 2
Kit-Nekoâs On the Case
I decided to take Cloudnineâs advice and I sent a PM to Tama-Neko
In hopes that sheâs would reply.
I waited and waited and she never did and soon MT was looking pretty dull.
âWhatâs going on were are all the members?â? a member named Irix asked.
âUhh Iâm working on it guysâ? I replied.
âYour not a mod neither a Admin what can you do?â? said Bromithia a member with an attitude.
âUhh well you see I kind of know whatâs going onâ?
âOh really why donât you fill us in thenâ?
âWell I canât say much except be careful and donât get too much into MTâ?
âHmmm whateverâ? he replied.
It was a shame these members really didnât know how much danger they were in and I knew me telling me everything was going to be ok meant nothing.
âSo what do you think about the people disappearing? Cool huh?â?
âCool? Whatâs wrong with you? Thatâs not cool at all Fiona is missing and I donât think I can bring her backâ?
âWell I always knew the world would end, but I didnât think it would end with us all being sucked into a computerâ?
I didnât like the way that sounded at all, if I was going to get all the members back I would have to get in the computer somehow but how? I just wish that Tama-Neko would reply to me.
I felt so lost and hopeless I was going against a person who I thought was just a character made up but no she was realâ¦.BotChii
Is alive and if I donât stop her sheâs going to well⦠who knows but the world will be empty. When I got home from school I started to look at the computer and think of how she was pulling them into the computer but I couldnât find it no crack or anything. Then I got a PM from Tama-Neko.
The message read:
âCloudnine knows you? Thatâs a surprise I must admit, yes I do realize the members are missing and Iâm working on it I really donât need your help with anything you should just stay off till I fix everythingâ?
I had to write back because I didnât feel right standing back while she went and tried to save all those member by herself so I offered my help to her and told her about the unknown PMâs that I got then I got a new message from her.
The message read:
âUnknown messages? BotChii is sending you that I hope you know, sheâs not unknown and not bad at all in fact BotChii is trying to help us not kill usâ?
She didnât believe me about BotChii and I knew she wouldnât because Tama-Neko really looked up to BotChii and I knew I couldnât change her mind. So I had to come up with another plan to get her on my side and believe that BotChii was really doing everything that was happening.
Then I got another message from Tama.
The message read:
âSo how do you plan to save the members? Youâre going to need help right? And I know how to enter her world so you coming kid?â?
Finally!! I had a person who could help me she wasnât the nicest but she was my only help and I had to take anything I could get.
Then I got several PMâs and I was kind of happy to see that their were from my friends and they has real good news I could tell from the subjects they put so I read all of them
The messages read:
(From: ShyxSakura) âKitten!! Let me help you Saki knows how to get in the world too Saki can help!!â?
(From: Devilet) âKitten I can help you weâll all go together and kick BotChiiâs buttâ?
(From: Alpha) âDear friend Kitten I can help, Tama told me youâre going to save the membersâ?
(From: Bromitha) âHey, Tama said your going to challenge BC Iâm in if you like it or notâ?
(From: Belmikry) âHey Iâm up for it letâs get going!â?
I replied back to all of them and was kind of wondering how they were all going to get inside their computers or in BotChiiâs world as they said. I was also wondering why Tama decided to help me it was weird because at first she didnât want me to even bother but then she changed her mind pretty fast. Well now that I had a team and enough information I was ready to visit BotChii in her sick world.
I thought I would send Tama a PM and ask how we were going to get in BotChiiâs world but also to ask her a question
My message read:
âHey Tama, umâ¦exactly how are we going to get in BotChiiâs world? Oh and I made a name up for us not our whole team I kind of thought it would be me and you but itâs very good to have our friends help us! But what to you think of the name Kit-Neko?â?
I thought I would lighten Tama up a bit she was a very mysterious person and very quiet but she always expects the best and I believe she deserves it but I always thought she was way to strict and didnât know how to have fun. Then I got another message this time it was from OracleAngel it was good to see he was still here.
The message read:
âBotChii has all the other Gallery Director! Iâm the only one left she must like me huh? Anyway Iâm here to help you if you need help I can help you while youâre in BotChiiâs world so donât sweat it and get are friends back!â?
I really was happy to hear from OracleAngel though I wondered why BotChii didnât take him but it was good to have him here helping me along.
âWe all will meet at the Clueless oneâs houseâ?
Tama sent every one of us a PM and the clueless one I knew she meant me. We all lived very far from each other but we all manage to be together in my apartment but it was late.
âOk you guys got the plan right?â?
âYeah!! Sakiâs ready!â?
âNow guys we have to be careful BotChii is no normal personâ?
âThat is right we must be on our guard all timeâ?
I looked around the room and just looked at everyone sitting there and plan. What we were going to do? They all looked scared except for Tama she looked tired somewhat.
âHey Tama why donât you sleep in my bed you look tiredâ?
âNo Iâm fineâ?
âGo ahead please rest I donât mindâ?
âFine if you insist so muchâ?
âNight!â?
I slept on the floor with the rest of my friends. I know we all couldnât sleep so I just had to ask a stupid question.
âUmmâ¦. guys what MT stands for?â?
âHaha maybe Mindless Toys?â?
âOh Saki knows!! Meanies Takeover?â?
âUmm thanks for the answers you twoâ?
âHey Kittenâ?
âYeah Tama?â?
âThat name you picked for usâ?
âYeahâ?
âIt will do fineâ?
The Next morning I had woke up early and I tried to log on but MT wasnât coming up. I ran to the living room and put the news on to see if anymore people were missing.
âIt is a depressing day for everyone around the world as more people disappear from the world without any traceâ?
More and more people were being sucked in and more people were crying for their lost ones.
âMy people do not fear for I have come with a solution to end these disappearing problemsâ? The President announced on the news.
âShutdown MT!!! They canât do that how will we get into BotChiiâs world?â?
Devilet was very angry and so was I, they had decided to Shutdown MT to stop people from disappearing it was good idea but not good for us.
âFine well break in the safe and get the disk back so we can enterâ?
âTama wait we canât do thatâ?
I was really surprised to hear Tama say that but then again thatâs something I thought she would say. I agreed with her nothing was going to stop me from rescuing my dear friend and the other members as well.
âIt will be dangerous weâre going to have to fight our way throughâ?
I really had no idea what Tama meant when she said that but then I kind of had an idea.
âYou mean punching and kicking right?â?
âNo silly!! Fight with magicâ?
Magic? I hope they were playing with me. I mean first people disappear by getting sucked into a computer and now their telling me they can use magic I felt like I was in a crazy house but they all looked serious.
âMagic? You guys use magic? Since when?!?â?
âYou mean you canât?â? asked Devilet.
âWell sorry Iâm not a witch and Iâm only normal you knowâ?
âThen itâs best you stay close to usâ?
âAlphaâs right BotChii will crush youâ?
âOk if you guys say soâ?
I still couldnât get over it since when do people use magic? And why was I so new to it, if I had no magic why did BotChii want me to find her? I knew from there I was in trouble and I donât think even my friends could help me.
âYou ok?â?
âOh yes Iâm fine Bel donât worryâ?
I tired to smile to let her know it wasnât bothering me but it was a lot âWhy canât I use magic?â?
I thought of it all that time how I was going to defend myself against her?
I might die in the process but all I could think of was my friends and how much I wanted to help them all.
âDonât worryâ¦.weâll protect you, promiseâ?
I felt Bel hug me and I just wanted to believe her but I knew I couldnât be safe and I didnât want them to die over me I really didnât know what to do.
âOk people here we go the safe were the disk is at is hidden in that level of the tower but the security is very good and itâs going to be hard to get into understand?â?
âYep so whatâs the plan?â?
âHmmm ok weâll all do what comes to mindâ?
âHuh?â?
âYep freestyle peopleâ?
âYeah letâs have fun!!â?
âAbout Kittenâ¦.â?
âShe stays with meâ?
âGot itâ?
âOk then get the disk keep Kitten safe and go in freestyle right?â?
âYes letâs goâ?
We arrived at the tower were the we saw tons of guards and police cars you would think they were protecting the president or something
I wondered how Tama and the rest were going to pull this over and get us in that tower but I could do nothing but watch. Then I felt heat near me I looked to my side and I saw ShyxSakura or Saki as we called her holding a fire ball like it was no big deal I just stood there amazed and I felt so small compared to her.
âThe forest right?â?
âYes close to were they can all see itâ?
âWait, wait, wait we canât just set the forest on fire weâd be killing the tress and half the forest for that matter!â?
âIf we donât do this people will die and having forests around wonât matter!â?
âBut Tama!â?
âBurn it Saki!â?
I watched as Saki threw the fire and it quickly caught on and grew bigger. I was so angry but I knew that was the only was we would be able to get through them all, I could tell Saki didnât like the idea but we all had no other choice.
âOk letâs go while their busy with thatâ?
We all ran to the back of the tower and busted the back door open then ran up the stairs were Tama stopped and looked outside.
âHmmm some guards are still near the tower I guess we should have some of us go on top of the tower and tell us their move it would be easier to know where they areâ?
âSaki likes that idea!! Who will go?!â?
âHmm well I really donât knowâ?
âHow about Alpha and Bromithia?â?
âFine the both of you go to the top and tell us every move the guards makeâ?
âBe careful you guys!â?
âThank you Kittenâ?
âWhatever letâs go alreadyâ?
We all ran up the stairs of the huge tower that seem to go on forever. I could tell we were all tired so we stopped.
âWaaah! With all this money canât they make an elevator?!?
âWell Saki this is the back of the tower they made no elevator because no one enters from the backâ?
âWell they could treat their thiefâs right donât you think?â?
âHahaha maybe Deviâ?
Suddenly as we were lying on the steps we heard a hugs rumble then another one almost as if the place was falling apart then we heard both Brom and Alpha talking on their communicators at the same time till we heard
âGet out their sending a Guard they know were here!!â?
I felt my stomach turn for a moment what the hell could be that big to make those sounds?
âNo were going to fight itâ?
âWhat?!?! Have you lost your mind Tama?!?â?
âWhere not going to make it out in time I know what that thing is and thereâs only one way to get by and thatâs to fight!â?
âBut!! Sakiâs not prepared and Saki doesnât want to die!!â?
I was wondering how Tama was planning to keep me safe but then she looked at me and pointed.
âGet Ready youâre our main ticket to beat himâ?
âHuh... me?!?â?
âYes I donât feel your weak rays anymore that means your good to fightâ?
âWait a minute Iâm just a normal personâ?
âYea I know I thought that too but there are always some people who stand different from the restâ?
âOhâ¦â?
âAnd we are those peopleâ?
I got what Tama was saying somewhat but I still didnât know how she planning on me to bring some powerful source out I canât even finish dishes let alone a huge thing that weights a ton! But I figure I was going to give it a swing and try what ever to help them out.
After awhile while we were planning the noise stopped.
âWhat happened?â?
Ok you made it through the end congratulations! hope it wasn't boring
*sorry for the missing words I know there's some missing but next time or when I have time
I will just write the name of the person who's talking I think that will be a better idea ^_^
Ummmmmmm I didn't find myself here .....................................................................sad
That's good Kitten! The story is getting more exciting. ^_^ Keep on writing, you're doing great.
yeepee chapter's 2 out...... good job once again. ahah seems like MT is the focus of the whole world actually (i like the way you put "the world would end"........ hey not everyone goes on this site ^_^)
and the freestyle kit-neko team....... muahahah i can imagine that. you sure should have ppl make sketches of the characters, that would be so cool. and tama's sleeping on the bed *kicks tama off* the bed is mine
bromithia *pwned*
ahah i love that story, i just can't wait for kitten superpowaa..... anyway still the "microsoft word problem" with the apostrophes etc. but otherwise it's pretty good, yet sooo unrealistic. a bunch of ppl going to assault a heavy guarded building freestyle XP
well done again!
This is a great great chapter Kitten!!! I love the suspense and actions!!! It was so cool the moment Saki threw the fireball...........This story is just lovable Kitten!!! I'll be so looking forward to the next one!!! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~ Kitten rockz!!!
Hi,Kitten
Great chapter!!!
I love the story!!!!!
It getting more exciting!!!
Well done!!
Keep on writing!!!
Thanks for sharing!!!
*BIG HUG*
A very nice story, seriously. Hey, I wasn't in there.
Seriously, though, great story. 
hi kitten. u have created another great story.
wow.. cool story. i wish everyone was mentioned too
good good!!
(Sniff Sniff)You make me cry cause it so good I'm crying tears of joy.good jobies kitty.><
haha kitten~ the story just keeps on getting interesting eh~
oh yeah, da longer da more fun~ ^_^
Fascinating~ I really like the fact that people can use magic. That's pretty neat. But since Kitten can't use magic, I think you're going to end up with the biggest in the role in the end. ^_^ This is getting really good!
Lolz haha
Koooooooool
I think this is betta than the first
lookin forward to the future chapters
how long did this take?
Ohh and can you not have the letters that doesn't need to be there
kinda intercepting through my reading
anywayz... real kool
Hehe! A great modern fantasy, sound more like RPG. Hehe! XP Its a great story though kinda short.
Anyway
hope to see more story coming out from you! 
ok. I finally got some free time to read it
Your
story is getting more and more intresting. We have new characters developing
here, like Tama, Devilet, etc. (to tell you the truth from what you were writing
at the very begining I thought that Tama is in league with botChii XP but now
she is a good character). Cannot wait for the next installment. Just one
criticism though, since you are having many characters and the long dialogues it
gets confusing who is speaking what. So either use smth like this: Tama:
"...". Saki: "..." or "........",said Tama. etc.
So that it is clear for the reader who is the person speaking at the moment.
Other then that good story 
oh man, you're a master of suspense...right when it's getting really good...the chapter ends...
i luv the team's name...kit-neko...it's so cute. and i luv how you guys have magic...makes it even more interesting. can't wait to find out what you're power is...sounds like it will be very powerful.
and i was just gonna comment that you should add names to the dialogue, but you already covered that...lol!
this was not boring at all...it's too exciting!
This is very nice!!
I love the story. 
This is very exciting!! 
I can't wait to see what will happen to you. ^__^
Hehe!!
I'll look forward to your next chapter!! Keep up the good work. ^__^
o.o;;
O.O;;
me has speciall super powers~<333
x3 tee heeez .. burn everything .. burn burn burrrnn~
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butbut .. me doesnt wanna get burned too ... ;-;
*wears gloves*
[Thank you, 'Super Drive' & 'The Rage Beat' from Gravitation, for lifting my spirits to type up this stuff!]
[Sorry, I couldn't control myself typing out this horrible thing!]
Kitten! No, I was thinking for days now: please don't include me in your story... but thanks for the offer! Oh no, this thread really is distracting me....
But I do have a suggestion re: including other MT members/personages into your story! ^_^ Thanks again in advance for hearing me out.
i did mention a while back that other MT people might get left out and feel bad about not being included in the story. But on the other hand, putting too many characters in your MT novel might be bad, too. Too many characters would mean less time to flesh out each character. And it might turn like into a "MT member of the day" for the story or something... (heh, 'am still burdened with lots of stuff offline, so sorry for not being clear enough).
but! I do have something in mind to remedy the "too-many-characters-in-story" problem a bit: may I suggest introducing two (2) new characters in your story later on? (I don't think these two MT members would stumble upon this thread, so it's kinda safe to put these two in... but I feel they'd love to be in your story anyways. Also, it's my surprise to them. Anyway, you have all the right to turn down this suggestion, ok? No prob. ^_~). I did have a lot of fun typing all this out!
Proposed New Characters for your MT Novel:
vampyre and sarak
Character Descriptions: (only partly based on their real personalities!)
Best of friends (with a little hint of something else, if you'd like ^_~ ...), vampyre and sarak are a pair of traveling doujinshi artists/manga-ka. They met up in formal art school, found out that the academic pursuit is robbing them of their creativity and passions (their art professors detest their 'anything-goes-rough-style-of-art [it's not art to draw manga, they say, lol] and their peers find them too weird) so they decide to drop out of art school and just enjoy their common love for doujinshi... but by accident, they discovered their 'special ability' (to be detailed below).
vampyre is the more-outgoing, impulsive, outspoken of the two. Whatever she wants, she gets. She can get to be a little clumsy, and she kinda hates boys. sarak, on the other hand, likes things to be quiet and orderly. She teases vampyre a lot, and she has a lot of wise things to say. However, sarak can be quite indecisive because she wants things to be well-thought-out, so she can't be counted on for a quick decision.
vampyre loves and is more or less skilled in sketching, while sarak absolutely loves coloring vampyre's drawings. They share a single sketchbook, but vampyre carries her own pens and pencils, while sarak carries watercolors, crayons, color pencils and even a mini-laptop loaded with a fancy computer program that can scan in vampyre's sketches and color them.
Special Powers:
Doujinshi Summon!
Obviously, they are not ordinary artists. When they combine their mental powers, whatever they drew and colored on any medium becomes real or comes into being, solid and empowered with special abilities that they wished that drawing with. Sort of like a summon, but they summon characters they drew and colored! The summoned character also can act and think on its own! Can I call this power the "Doujinshi Summon"? They just think real hard enough, and amazingly, their thoughts create the summons from the sketchbook!
So, basically, the Doujinshi Summons are MT members/denizens themselves. You can get to choose which MT members fit for each doujinshi summon.
Weaknesses:
Of course, this duo can only do the 'Doujinshi Summoning' technique when both of them are present. The power they have has unlimited potential, but can take time, as vampyre and sarak have to have some idea first of the chara before they can summon it/them. Maybe they have to concentrate thinking for at least 10 minutes? Also, if any of the two are hurt badly, the 'doujinshi summon' disappears. Oh, you can have a time limit sort of thing, like the summon only lasts for a day or so. Afterwards, the summoned doujinshi fades and the drawing on vampyre's sketchbook disappears.
Also, maybe the summon can be a drain to both vampyre and sarak that they can only summon three times in a day...
Also, when vampyre draws something and sarak colors it, they have to somewhat mentally agree on the character they have in mind. If they have slightly-different feelings or thoughts about their drawings, well, the write-ups below might give an idea as to what might happen:
Scenario Examples:
Can I give some funny examples?
For example, vampyre draws a really big, fat but cuddly teddy bear or cat on her sketchbook. She thinks to herself, "This is a mecha-teddy-bear/kitty armed with big laser eyes and such (lol, shades of OracleAngel's wallpaper?)!" She then hands over the sketchbook to sarak, who likes the drawing, but since she doesn't want the teddy bear or cat doujinshi to be that big (she has a phobia for teddy bears/cats or something, lol) so she kinda messes up the coloring; she wants it to be a little smaller when they summon it.
Ok, they think and imagine the chara is real ... but since they didn't agree fully on the chara, the summon they created pops out as.... Anjhurin or diamarrr! (you should see their avatars, btw, so cute...) The summon seems like a weak, small, wiggling teddy bear/cat thing... he's small, but when threaten, he can let out a powerful Teddy Bear Sonic Scream, or Neko-Scream or something (lol, what about having someone translate the attacks into Japanese for some fun?)...
Ok, for serious examples:
vampyre draws a really dramatic drawing of a samurai warrior or knight drawing (well, she drew them with a helmet or a cloak thing that covers their faces, so that covers up his hate for boys, lol... 'hope you're still enjoying this!)... sarak, since she is so inspired, colors it well... and when they concentrate, out pops... shinsengumi or even Jinzhou or Drak or KnightofLain or DREAM or gundragon or hikarujm! Armed with a deadly katana or broadsword or a rogue knife (you can invent some attacks for them) and with a loyal devotion to their mistresses...
Or, other examples, like: vampyre draws a ferocious-looking werewolf lady, but sarak wants to tone down the violence, so she colors it differently (and added some curvy lines to accent her more feminine features... and out comes Ayamael, a shape-shifting lycanthrope a la Wolf's Rain, with a sarcastic attitude (she can tease both vampyre and sarak and say they're amateur, upstart, hippie-wannabe-artists, and she can complain like, "Hey, you didn't draw my tail right!" or something, just for fun...)... but again, she can fight without any hesitation or something.
Or, another example: vampyre wants to help out another character in the story (say, belmikry, Tama-Neko or OracleAngel) about a certain puzzle or problem that they need to solve before they could progress into the next level or something... so she draws either a female or male character with glasses of sorts (and a large book, to boot)... and out comes Terra-chan, Kei-kun, markjo or Mordin or Celessa, doujinshi summons whom they can turn to advice or something, since they seem to be wise and can give another perspective on things.... ^^^^^
Or (yes, another example), maybe the party comes to a town/root town or whatever that only speaks Spanish or Russian, and they have trouble understanding the inhabitants of the place, so they draw and color another character, like pegassuss (scholarly multinglingual artist) or Mistress (elf/fantasy-bent artist).
i hope this all gets thru! I think I kinda went overboard making examples....
Please do pick and choose ideas you like!
vampyre and sarak's Final Attack:
"Arte Infinite"
What about giving vampyre and sarak also a special Final Attack?
For example, the biriwilg-rescue party is in a rather-sticky situation (too many enemies, half of the party have fainted or too weak to fight), the vampyre-sarak tandem can draw other doujinshi/wallpaper artists who in turn can draw other characters to fight their enemies? So, if vampyre and sarak draws and colors a whole bunch of MT doujinshi/wallpaper artists (like for example, they draw and color white-zero (Abstraction-Action-Artist), bongtakun (Online-RPG-Character-Artist), Evanrued (Butterfly-Obssession-Artist), Clap (Touch-of-Darkness-Artist), minakomel (Vector-Fun-Artist), Anjeille (Lady-of-Light-Artist), frozenwilderness (Melancholy-Artist), pegassuss (Creatures-of-The-Mind-Artist), CoolBlueX (Anime-Guys-All-Around-Artist), levezzali (SurrealRomanticist-Artist) and other doujinshi/wallpaper artists), these "Doujinshi Summons" then can be commanded by vampyre/sarak to draw other "Doujinshi Summons" to attack their enemies or something? So if these 10 Doujinshi/Wallpaper Artist summons draw other summons, that makes 20 Doujinshi Summons to attack the baddies with their respective attacks?
"Arte Infinite"... but one main drawback of this is that they might lose their lives doing this (ohhh, just to put the immense gamble they'd have to face when they do this) ... they would lose too much life force or something... ehe, does this sound cliche-ish?
Please do change the MT members/artists (or find or explore other people who might fit more into the story)! I only mentioned people which first came into mind, ok?
Final words?:
Oh! These are only examples, Kitten! If you really feel that these don't exactly fit into the story, please do feel free to trash the whole idea and feel free to take any idea that you like! Or you can completely reject this whole darn thing. But I did have fun making this whole thing up (I'm supposed to do something else, but your thread is really distracting me, sorry). We call that "re-appropriating ideas". Anyway, I really had fun typing this thing out... lol, odd stress-relief thing...
Anyway, sorry for the long idea, but maybe the vampyre-sarak-Doujinshi-Summon characters might be a plot device so that you could introduce other MT members into the story without sacrificing much character development and stuff... since you only have to put these two characters (vampyre and sarak) on the main party, and you can devise some way to put the other MT members' names as "Doujinshi Summons" as the story progresses...
But for back story on vampyre and sarak, maybe you could put in something that they are looking for, something that [Bot]Chii has that the two need... oh, maybe they need some energy thing from [Bot]Chii that they need so that the charas they create can last longer summoned or something... or maybe something simpler, like maybe they're just curious about the whole disappearance thing and offered their help.
Hey, sorry again if this sounds too crazy.
'Hope this helps! Yikes, I gotta go back to other commitments now!
[Note: The above-mentioned MT members are, more or less, mentioned because of certain characteristics they seem to embody in this virtual space. Apologies in advance for any offended parties! Gomen. ]
The very good history, really good! it pleases this reading to me!
Hey Kitten, you're writing an awesome story here! The action is heating up and I can't help but love the way everyone is supporting each other, especially Tama-chan ^_^ I like friendship stories very much!