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[POEM] What a lie..

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Just a poem i wrote just now about how i feel...

Quote: what a lie...
a lie of love..
a lie of forever..
the hate..
the pain..
this is too much to handle..
how can you..
keep hurting me..
purposly..
telling me you love me..
and dont want me..
telling me you want friendship..
and backstab me constantly..
with stupid words..
words that hurt so much..
on purpose..
your world is fake..
face reality..
accept your destiny..
dont sit back and play games..
this is no matrix..
games you've played..
played with my heart..
my mind..
my life..
you only hope for the worst..

is that really how u feel right now? :( *sniff*

oh...i can feel your pain and emotion in this poem.... T_T

Quote by VanillaHfan01is that really how u feel right now? :( *sniff*

wow thats a really painful poem it really depressing is that really true <_< you feel like that it make me sad to read thing pain ful like this

I WANT TO DIE! T.T

why does everyone always hurt me soo much..i have no one left anymore..

what are your joking please tell me your joking

Quote by toxictea23I WANT TO DIE! T.T

why does everyone always hurt me soo much..i have no one left anymore..


oh no....
*gives toxictea a hug*
you still have friends here, as well...
hope you feel better soon... -_-

I HAVE NO FRIENDS!
why does everyone always hate on me...everyone i love hates me....
i have no reason to live!

you have ever one at mt

no one cares....

i caare

Quote by toxicteano one cares....e


i don't know you personally, but i still care...
tears are welling up in my eyes right now....

whats wrong

no...no ONE cares..
the person I loved MOST IN MY life...is stabbing MY heart...and laughing...and everyone hates ME..

who has hurt you so much that would make you say things like thisyou

he is shoving everything in my face,making me feel terrible and wantiing to die, and pushing me away like a dang dog!

I won't pretend to know what's going on here. But this looks like another online bf/gf relationship that's gone to the gutter this week. I really hate butting into the middle of things when I'm a stranger. But death sucks. Suicide to end the pain of a hurt heart is just plain selfish.

What do I know about pain? I suffer so others don't. I yearn to at have been in pain of love. But I'm such a coward I haven't ever had a girlfriend (I'm male). Oh, the senior prom would have been when I would have done it too. Attention getting, ruining the night... but what about the pain of friends and loved ones?

Just some food (or poison) for thought.

PS Sorry if I sound like another "Compassionate Conservative" (which I'm not) but this is the 2nd or 3rd person like this I've been notified one way or another of suicidal intentions and is starting to bother me a bit.
Maybe there's something wrong in the air... seems contageous.

Quote by sillymoogleI won't pretend to know what's going on here. But this looks like
another online bf/gf relationship that's gone to the gutter this week.
I really hate butting into the middle of things when I'm a stranger.
But death sucks. Suicide to end the pain of a hurt heart is just plain
selfish.
What do I know about pain? I suffer so others don't. I yearn to at have
been in pain of love. But I'm such a coward I haven't ever had a
girlfriend (I'm male). Oh, the senior prom would have been when I would
have done it too. Attention getting, ruining the night... but what
about the pain of friends and loved ones?
Just some food (or poison) for thought.


THIS WAS NOT A online relationship!!
this IS A REAL relationship
not A FAKE one..

please don't do this gurl....
i can't stand when someone feels
like this.... jus live without him and
try to find a better life, onegai ne.>_<

  • Kev
  • Retired Moderator
  • 3y 18wk ago

toxic, i had times wanted to die, but live on please

ive talked to u on AIM, i tried cheering you up, dont tell me that ive wasted time for nothing

and yes, if he's still a jerk, leave him

oh, i'm so sorry someone jerked you around like that...but he's not worth it...
there's so many other people you can meet that will treat you so much better than this!
i know you're dying inside, but trust me....time, friends, and loved ones will help heal your wounds. don't give up, ok? you're so much a better person than this jerk that hurt you so terribly!

whao im really sorry to hear this and this takes me back to my sister....
my sister wanted to die. i dont know whats her problem was but she manage to make it though becasue my help.
Please dont do this. there more things in life. you just have to start another one or make changes.
There more people who cares about you and maybe you just dont realize it. I dont know you but hell! i care about this! Its not too late to make a changes. So pleasethink it over... were are all here to help and get you through this together!

Waaaaaaaahhhhhhhh, your poem is so sad. :( *sniff sniff*
Don't worry, buddy, I'll always be your friend and I'll always support you. :) I still care about you, I care about all my friends, even everybody here, that means you, my buddy. Please don't feel so sad, I don't like people being sad, it makes me sad too. :( Please cheer up, and keep on living. If any of my friends leave me forever, I'll be very very sad. Don't leave buddy, and stay here till you really can't go on. Okay? Promise me you won't go away. :)

life is full of irony. you love but don't get loved, you want to leave but stay anyway. just keep your head high and never show that you crumble to pieces when something bad happens. cry, suffer and hate when you are all by yourself. you will then learn the true extent of your feelings and will know and love yourself more.

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