~ I want you back ~
When the day you left it was quiet,
I dream about you when you not with me,
I though it was the end of my life.

The day I saw you at the mall I gave you a smile
and you smile back at me,
But now your gone.

Today is not a happy day,
I want you back,
in my life,my heart,and my mind.

To you my love,
I want you back with me.

If you care about them,
Tell them you love them alway's
-zero-walt

Nice poem. But I think I heard it somewhere before. Anyways, keep it up!

So.................bring her back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hehehe................great poem you made and really please keep it up!!!!!!

Damn that's deep, whoever the girl is, I hope she does come back to ya.

well............wow................thats deep.......................

sounds recent, like it happened a while ago in your poem. i've been there, in those situations. eventually, it fades away, but the memory remains.

wow thats touching... well if you want her back go get her. ^_^ great work keep writing your good.

Wow, takun!! This poem is so deep and lovely!! It makes me want to cry!

Very, Very Touching.....Nice poem!! I like it!

Hey, nice poem ryt there. Keep it up.

Hei !!! Your poem is already nice and meaningful.I like it very much.So keep it up and I waiting your next poem .

very good

that was really Kaiboshin' yer good at poems
i hope you keep it up i like reading them they're enspiring and they talk to whoever understands
them. keep goin' and don't stop i'm behind you all the way

OOooo nice!!!! ...ur so good at this!!!! and once again i did not believe guyz can write like that...... not that i was ever right but why r they all so... sad???

this poem is so touching and heartfelt. and i've felt this way about guys, too. i hope she comes back to you!

k i think you r in luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv...................lol

wow, nice poem I like it congratulations, for your work.