It's fustrating
you're pure damm acting.

I don't want to see you again
rather stay away.

Everything I do, you hate
Everything it's done ain't ok.

My darkness screams desperately
the walls crawls inside of me...

She orders me
and I leave.
She condems me...
don't get the grip?!!!

What she doesn't get
is my patience got a limit.

Like to shut the door in her eyes
and the fan is enough
to keep me rationally fine....Mom!!!

ps I love my mom

Wow another deep poem, i hope u and your mom could work things out so you can feel happy

i have felt that way before with my mom an di do ,ove her as well. nicely done friend nicely done

aww... this poem is deep.
i felt that way before with my mom, too.. but i love her still hehehe
nice one, again! ^^

Another nice poem from you. It's nice yet very deep. Great one!!

Quote by DoubleBarrelWow another deep poem, i hope u and your mom could work things out so you can feel happy

I like it it's nice to know you would share it with us *smile*

Thanks you guys are all so nice, I must say even though i wrote this poem I don't wish this hatred feeling towards my momy, i love her so much, im like a birdy annoying her existence

hey
hope to see some more great poem from you
i am one of your fan.
i have a poem for you.

it calld Mother

born as a human,
(I)
loved by the living life
(had)
cuddled in the fire of strong arms,
(loved)
nourish the young
(thee)
and lastly, always will be the one.

this poem was made by a friend of mine.

Ahahahahaa, I know that complex, it's natural. All kidz have this tendecy to rip away from parents, it's a way of breaking bonds to move on. So much anger, try contemplating from another perspective perhaps.

Geez, write your poetry in a doc first, then revise it later. It's too *raw, if ya get it.

Thanks but nope that poem is a show, and exageration of a feeling to make it look evil and dramatic ^^ don't real pro's do that? yeah, I bet they do, and the raw I know I have to work on that.

awww... this poem is very deep!! i hope you and your mom works out this solution!! keep up the good work!

wow... i wish i had a good relationship with my mom (sry but i hate that bitch ) but i like the poem! ^-^

hopefully you guys suppossedly hating your moms or what not is just a passing phase and some of you apprecciate your moms someday unless she really is a horrible person.

I am very glad that you love your mom! This poem kind of express your feelings about your mom! ^^ Good job!

I could relate in the poem in some way because i also hate my mom when she doesn't appreciatiate the things I'm doing just to be a good son to her instead she always scold me in my wrong doings at home. She doesn't know that my patience has also a limit. I hope God understands me.

"Thanks but nope that poem is a show, and exageration of a feeling to make it look evil and dramatic ^^ don't real pro's do that? yeah, I bet they do, and the raw I know I have to work on that."

please don't start thinking and comparing yourself to any pro, it's condescending (lowering oneself). I like that my guess was not right, cause I never consider anything to be set in stone. I can see the play and the play on words now, thanx for the enlightenment.

hahaha I love that at the end p.s I love my mom lol nice touch and once again he's right this is more venting then poetry but alot of artists do that in their work like I vent in my poems so good job [again] hmm I'm starting to see something in your work,it reminds me of something.....