For being invisible to you
I turn into an ocean
which you visit and contemplate.

I'm the Ocean
and with the come and go of my waves
I emerge near you
and I greet you with my tenderness
to keep you near
and see you closer
to seduce you with my beauty
so irresistible.

I hipnotice you
with the blue of my being
and I go along when you swim
without you even noticing
the real me.

I'm the Ocean
your eternal bliss...

ps. check the goddess here: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v110/punkielira/watergoddess.jpg

wow you should be a poet cause your poems are deep, they hit the heart pretty hard

oh man such passion in that i love it

This one is very great too. I love it!

I like it alot thanks for sharing,
You should write a book I'll bet it would sell really well *smile*

hey ya all thanks for your comments, it keeps me looking for inspiration to fill you with, if you haven't gone here just click: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v110/punkielira/watergoddess.jpg
cause is related to this poem

Awesome job, kaleidogirl!! ^^ Such a beautiful poem!! Hope you'll keep on writing more poems!!

I've read this one b4, but didn't want to comment until I felt better. I'll just break it down piece by piece:

For being invisible to you
I turn into an ocean //oceans are huge and clear, but more visible
which you visit and contemplate. //a friend that it's projected towards?

I'm the Ocean
and with the come and go of my waves //emotions
I emerge near you
and I greet you with my tenderness //oceans are soft
to keep you near
and see you closer //but also can surround all around
to seduce you with my beauty
so irresistible.

i hipnotice you //ooooo
with the blue of my being //blue usually equate depression
and I go along when you swim
without you even noticing //so blind
the real me. //so close yet so far away

I'm the Ocean //so grand, full of life, vast and lovely
your eternal bliss... //forevermore

The Ocean, original, grand
flowing, unending, so vast
brings life unto land
sailing mostly at half-mast

Yeah sometimes we don't see the things/people around us because we find them common but we don't really see is the beauty they possess within that cannot be seen by the naked eye.

lol i can't believe you broke my poem to pieces and analyzed it like it was species of a lab, but you did a good job at trying to understand the meaning behind it, which is pretty basic, but I still like people playing with my poems, don't ask why