You arrive to me just in time
to inspire and bring out
new challenges and happy goals.
To reinforce the honor
that we give to the One that gave us life
meaning to our existance
among the darkness.
You arrive just in time
in the dangerous flow that threatens the life of the dreamer....
ungrateful....
I found you
just when in my eagerness
I found myself ready
to see and cease to be blind
to this paradise of thruths
that pass by in front of doors
searching that heart worthy of life
and enjoys from exquisite delicacies
reserved only for the one that gives
the proper use of it's sources
and awaits in a prayer.
Until I become free
of compassionate lies
that swollens the heart.
You arrive...and I'm grateful.
humm.... this one bothers me, it can mean many things. however, the most
prevalent seems that the protagonist is enlightened, open to new ideas than
before. could you state what inspired you to write this piece?
If I tell you the reason that inspired me then there would be no magic to this
original poem, and as you said I always try to look that my poems mean lots of
things cause then again, lots of people read so it's dedicated for lots of
different minds. That's what I try to do when writting a poem.
You arrive to me just in time
to inspire and bring out
new challenges and happy goals.
To reinforce the honor
that we give to the One that gave us life
meaning to our existance
among the darkness.
You arrive just in time
in the dangerous flow that threatens the life of the dreamer....
ungrateful....
I found you
just when in my eagerness
I found myself ready
to see and cease to be blind
to this paradise of thruths
that pass by in front of doors
searching that heart worthy of life
and enjoys from exquisite delicacies
reserved only for the one that gives
the proper use of it's sources
and awaits in a prayer.
Until I become free
of compassionate lies
that swollens the heart.
You arrive...and I'm grateful.
Another good one i think your on fire when it comes to writing poems
wow that is great keep it up my dear
sweet poem.. ^^
cool.. wow.. talented ppl
Very great one. I think you're very talented.
Wow *awws in amazement*
humm.... this one bothers me, it can mean many things. however, the most prevalent seems that the protagonist is enlightened, open to new ideas than before. could you state what inspired you to write this piece?
Yay! Another one of your great poems!! I luv this poem!! ^^ Good job, kaleidogirl!
Talking about inspiration that arrive unexpectedly in your life that change the whole thing from bad to good.
If I tell you the reason that inspired me then there would be no magic to this original poem, and as you said I always try to look that my poems mean lots of things cause then again, lots of people read so it's dedicated for lots of different minds. That's what I try to do when writting a poem.