Making steps in the golden sand
while breeze goes through
the shells in the shinning sun.
An invitation to dance to the
rythm of the island.
A piece, a smile...
suddlenly warm in a hug
a feeling that grows in the
deep of the night,
and to the sweetest of all emotions.
Time goes around us
saving memories.
When remembered,
sparks of joy comes out
and brings the flavor.
Born again in your poison
I fulfill and spread seeds
around the garden
that makes you shine on others
but most and specially ...ours.
Small Author Comment: This is the very first poem I made in my life, afterwards
I started making more poems, sadly some of the good ones are in spanish. With
all my love for you Mt members
Wow! This was your first poem?! It's very good!! ^^ You have a talent for
poetry!! I never knew you write poems, too! Great job, kaleidogirl!! Keep up the
good work!!
bleh, reminded me of my fantasy, walking in the sand, clear water, dreaming.
no worries, stress free, beauty. unyielding sunset beyond the horizon at arms
length, casting my shadow upon your sea shell play.
If I get people to think and put their imagination to fly I think im doing a
good job with it, im gonna try to look forward to that, but still being faithful
to my style. Thanks guys, luv ya all.
I observed that you like to make poems to express your feelings I wonder if you
could give tips so I could write one too. This is a nice poem I must admit.
You're talented in this field.
Making steps in the golden sand
while breeze goes through
the shells in the shinning sun.
An invitation to dance to the
rythm of the island.
A piece, a smile...
suddlenly warm in a hug
a feeling that grows in the
deep of the night,
and to the sweetest of all emotions.
Time goes around us
saving memories.
When remembered,
sparks of joy comes out
and brings the flavor.
Born again in your poison
I fulfill and spread seeds
around the garden
that makes you shine on others
but most and specially ...ours.
Small Author Comment: This is the very first poem I made in my life, afterwards I started making more poems, sadly some of the good ones are in spanish. With all my love for you Mt members
YAY
nice poemness 
good
job keep up the good workism *thumbs up*
Very nice, there isn't a lot of rhymes but why not ? Some known poems are like that too ^^
Thank guys you're all so pretty with me, um gomen, im being mushy again ^^
That's cool I culd read spanish maybe I could see them sometime *smiles*
very beautiful. i love this one too. you do such a great job on poems my friend.
Wow! This was your first poem?! It's very good!! ^^ You have a talent for poetry!! I never knew you write poems, too! Great job, kaleidogirl!! Keep up the good work!!
wow! pretty. i kind of now how that feels like. in a way ^-^ very good job and keep em comin!!!!
talented.. really ^^
Even though this was your first poem, this was really great! You're very talented.
bleh, reminded me of my fantasy, walking in the sand, clear water, dreaming.
no worries, stress free, beauty. unyielding sunset beyond the horizon at arms length, casting my shadow upon your sea shell play.
hehe for some reason this poem gets me turned on
good
poem 
If I get people to think and put their imagination to fly I think im doing a good job with it, im gonna try to look forward to that, but still being faithful to my style. Thanks guys, luv ya all.
I observed that you like to make poems to express your feelings I wonder if you could give tips so I could write one too. This is a nice poem I must admit. You're talented in this field.