Wish to be here with you
take a time apart
with your heart
between the rush
that awaits
to look carefully
at the beautifull things
on front of you.
Have it's love
as it would be
caressing your skin
let it fill you
with it's strength
and draw a smile in your heart.

by the author: I wrote it with love.

great poem! good job!

awwwwwwwww so mushy lol nice poem [x3] lol good job ehnessism ^_^

wow... a poem outa love.. thats cool! keep it up!

Thanks you all, lots of hugs unitl you go purple

wow... this is such a loving and emotional poem!!
you are very talented at making poems!
i hope you continue to make more poems in the meantime!!
thanks for sharing your wonderful ideas with us!! ^.^

Poems witnessed first-hand by us the MT'ers thanks for the awsome poems.

the love shows in this poem. it brought a smile to my face as i read it. keep up the great poems. and thank you for shareing

Wow!! This poem is very lovely!! It's such a relaxing poem! Great job!! ^^

actually
i don't know what feeling i have when i read this poem.
there is something more to it.
it like you love him then hate him at the same time.

wow, this poem is deep (and i know deep, i'm kinda emo T-T) good job, i really like this one too. it could have different meanings as thedarkness said.

I love this one, very nice...I can feel the emotions being written.

This one is very great! I love it!

wow amazing passion and love put in this poem I can't say anything but great job and keep it up you're doing well.

I smiled deep within. Thank you (in a soft voice)

Acidsmudge

this one now makes sense, it took a while.