.............um Hi all and well.......this is my poem.......(Im not ver good @ poetry) ^_^" Tell me wat ya think of it.....

My one love
forever
in my heart.

Eternally
.....I
lust for
you.

From the first time
we.....
looked in each
others eyes....
I was bound
by your
radiant beauty.

I.....
always wanted
you to
be mine....
yet I...
let you slip
away
into the
Abyss of life

My heart yearns
to see you
one
last time...
To say
that
I love you!!!

this is a very romantic poem... I love it..
Is this poem dedicated to someone you love? If so, I am sure that she'll love it...
dont let her slip away ... again.. ^^

awww its sooo sweet
gud job u did ^-^

Quote by Fire-Fliesthis is a very romantic poem... I love it..
Is this poem dedicated to someone you love? If so, I am sure that she'll love it...
dont let her slip away ... again.. ^^

Ashamed to say this but Im still single...........though this did come from my feelings

Cool, I like it *smile*

You missed your chance to tell a girl that you love her right? It is the only brand of sap a guy can make to get attention from a girl that he has just melted like butter if she doesn't cut the crap. I hope that you and everyone finds happyness. I for one know I will, and I have taken a lot of junk from one girl. I really learned about myself through my relationship with another person. Time really stopped for me after we split. Two weeks seemed to pass in the time of a day. I couldn't stop thinkning about her. Eventually I just got over it. I still think about her and the things that I know realize was stupid. Mostly public displays of affection. My other regret was not cutting through the bovine scat, and just asked her I could put my arm around her. I could have just shown my affection and would have been rewarded ten fold with hers. In the end she fell for another guy, and she just couldn't admit that she did. It really didn't help with me being jealous, and having thoughts of other girls. We all must reach a point where we are willing to shut out others and only have affections for one person. Until then, it is normal to think of others, just stay faithful to the one you are with.

soo sweet looks like! It reminds me of Squall from final fantasy 8 that he likes Riona!

OMG, I didn't like it, think Captain Kirk from star trek. Now, read the poem with him speaking in the cliche pause verse mode and tell me what you think.

Besides, love is overbearing enough without poetry. Who is it that you love???

well its very romantic......i like it very much....i think it would be very nice if yu could dedicate it to the 1 yu love....

O.o interesting poem.. ^^ ..like the rythm of your poom.. it's pretty unique.. ^^ .. and it's beautiful i should say.. ^^ ..