i have yet to make a title for this one

Hair long and sleek
glistening in the sun

Skin soft as silk
and far as porcelian

Her touch feather light
and tender

Her gown of burgandy satin
sways as she glides in

And a smile that
brightens any room

She looks like a doll to easily broken
but looks can be decieving

Dark eyes like brown velvet
and ruby red lips
She dances to her own music

The music of life

i hope you all enjoy this.. and please be gentle on the critque

very nice

Another great poeml from you babe!!!!! haha....please continue to make more*hehe* Love all ur poems!!

You should name it A Better Version of Me, It's one of my favorite albums by Raneir Maria. It references skin as smooth as porcelain. I just put in in the cd player what a great album.

NIce poem!

Wow, that was a wierd one... it's like you described a demon to me. She may be good/appealing/whatever on the outside, but she might be evil on the inside.

If girls get that much attention from nonfamily members claiming beauty and aren't brought up in a stable home, they usually become so... demonic.

Quote by jasaiyajinWow, that was a wierd one... it's like you described a demon to me. She may be good/appealing/whatever on the outside, but she might be evil on the inside.
If girls get that much attention from nonfamily members claiming beauty and aren't brought up in a stable home, they usually become so... demonic.

*laughs* i guess it is a matter of preception on the poem.....if it came across that way i am sorry *laughs again*

Great poem B-lotus I really like it it's so nice....
thanks for sharing it with us!

you're a real author !!
Have you publish a poem book ?? If yes, tell me where I could buy a french version of it !! (what ?!? you don't do a french version.... ...ohhh, i must learn english more so !!)
kiss

this is a nice one .. it kinda reminds me of a seductress.... or someone from a harem...
kinda makes me ask where are her bells

on her ankles but i couldnt work them in so i gave up on that but next time

It was very nice.

I'd have to say that it was taken from a very interesting view, perhaps I understood it a little better than jasaiyajin, it was still good. Taken from a view that I had not considered.

nice one blklotus.

wow very good she sounds very sexy

I really like your choice of words. I like it, it's another nice poem from you B-Lotus ^^

whoa.... this is a cool and tender poem!! you should call the title "The Music of Life"!!

Amazing poem Lotus ^_^ the way it sounded was like you are describing someone very close to you like a friend.It was very descriptive it sounded so real ^_^.

oh sexy. heart felt!! nicely done

Wow I love it. It's got a nice beat/rhythem. Nice job!

thanks guys it means alot that you are reading them