Vitriolic acid

that moves on sliding

it smiles for me

and swims on my womb

and fades

but it lights

shines me a goodbye

friendly as it is

goes away in time.

this one is confusing, i am confused, somebody help me, somebody get me a med kit.

if the tea is sour, add sugar. you obviously could not find the sugar, so you didn't drink.

Mind tangling.
Pretty much like math but this time I like it.

Nice one Xange.

if you think about it to hard yes it is confuseing. it isnt ment to be thought over just felt. i love it xange good job!!!

Ahh, I don't get most of the symbolism like "and swims on my womb." Why isn't it in your womb? And this poem doesn't flow too well. I hope you didn't just make it up in 5 minuets.

Mm, another nice poem, but is a bit confusing to me (sorry).
It'd be good if you can tell me the meaning.
Great job anyway.

so i guess not everyone understand this poem.
mahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
i guess this poem has a deeper meaning or it is just about sometime that happen to xanga that give her the feeling that she has drink sour tea.
-mxc

Wow! Three poems!!! It takes me forever to finish one...and it's usually not that good...Keep it up!

....like i said, i hope everything works out for u ^_^

Are u talking about a baby?

He is part of you for some time (living withing you) until you give brith to him and so he will eventually go away (when his older and stuff).

A nice poeam but little bit confusing... I can't get the image in the poem... Abstract as it seems in my view... still great poem..

I love tea ! It is my beverage of choice !
I thought that this poem was simply talking about tea - drinking it and tasting/savouring it on many levels?
I'm confused at the baby/womb imagery though. I do admit there may be more to this poem than tea.......

Quote by j0n0Ahh, I don't get most of the symbolism like "and swims on my womb." Why isn't it in your womb? And this poem doesn't flow too well. I hope you didn't just make it up in 5 minuets.

yeah i did make it in about five or 10 minutes lol btw this poem is not about tea and is not about a baby hehe

It's a pretty good, it's nothing likethe others that I read . You know, this almost sound as if you're being intimate on a certain level with this one, with the a piece of citrus with it's juices sliding down your body. *pauses* Wow, I think I just made this poem sound dirtier than needed .

Quote by BlkLotusif you think about it to hard yes it is confuseing. it isnt ment to be thought over just felt. i love it xange good job!!!

True, so true

ooo....this poem is confusing but great!! it is very rare and deep!! i like it very much!! keep up this great work and continue to impress us, okay?

Quote by GintheTwilightswordsIt's a pretty good, it's nothing likethe others that I read . You
know, this almost sound as if you're being intimate on a certain level
with this one, with the a piece of citrus with it's juices sliding down
your body. *pauses* Wow, I think I just made this poem sound dirtier
than needed .

God this guy knows what he says.

I don't understand it, but as the way it sounds, its really good to me. Take care.

Quote by xange

Quote by j0n0Ahh, I don't get most of the symbolism like "and swims on
my womb." Why isn't it in your womb? And this poem doesn't flow too
well. I hope you didn't just make it up in 5 minuets.

yeah i did make it in about five or 10 minutes lol btw this poem is not
about tea and is not about a baby hehe

lol that explains a lot. And now i get the symbolism, lol.