I walk on a puddle of blood,
that glows all the way up.

Is the feeling of love
calling upon my heart.

Is the last drop of hope
ready to save my soul.

For the soul of one who searches the deep,
for meanings of life, for meanings strife.

One must look past this surreal life,
to witness my mortal come through
the way that one lives in this perishing world.

Haikuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu..........................................

Your(...) affectionate mind always glows orange!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...
Positive comment.
What to say? Blood looks black in darnkess,
When the book is gonna be published, or..?

I love blood anywayyou did another great job with your poem xange, continue to kkeep up the great work.

you did a wonderful job. i like the fact that you had the blood glowing. in a way it can if it is hit just right by light. anyway keep up the good works

What another poem already...ahh. Ok, ok, This one flows very well and sounds quite pleasant. Good job on this small one [it somehow doesn't seem like its finish...aka more to the story]

A short poem, but is really nice.
I like it. Great job!! Keep it up.

this was a short poem.....
so one mentioned a book are u going to publish you poems?
-mxc

Bravo xange! I like this one a lot. So much is said in just a few lines...really fantastic!

^_^...dai-jou-bu?

mm... I have not much to say about this one. It was small and well it has blood in it....

Haiku... japanese poem... nowadays I rarely see/read poems like this but I'm glad that someone still making one... ^_^

Hey guys just a small hint this poem is not about blood literally, think about what blood represents...ups i just gave out a clue

I think I may like this one abit more than the last, but they are both pretty good . I believe this poem is of how one would stray away from their path and their emotions, all the while one emotion may be able to reach them. Blood represents a quite a few things; emotion(i.e. love), life, and the colour red. Though , I could be wrong, be everyone has there own interpretation of art, and some people will understand the meaning of what the artist was convey one way or another.

hmm interesting view of it, i like when people do that

It is, but it might not be anywhere near your theme behind this.

I like it 'cause it sounds so cool

Wow!! How cool!!! This poem is wonderful even though it's short! And it's very unique and deep!! Great job, xange!! Keep it up!

cool poem....i love the part where you say you walk on a puddle of blood! it reminds me of sorrow and mystery! great job on this poem!

ou do this poems very deeply, and well construct, this one is good as the others. Take care.