Nice poem. This definitely express your feelings. Thnks 4 sharing this.

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yeah I was thinking just the same... you definetivelly express yourself in more than one way, which is very impressive.
I guess evryone could at some point relate to what you have written, or at least we could wish to be most of the times as transparent and not complicated.
Nice of you to share this

wow. That's really deep you know? nice poem. I luv the end. nice job girl.

I already said it in you guestbook, but I'll say it again, This is sooooo beautiful!
It's seems so simple, but it holds so much emotion, and the words just make so much sense!
I agree with masterjesse, There should be a place to post these kind of poems on MT, for then even more people could read it!

Anyways, I hope you work things out with your friend, and in the mean time be sure to keep writing and posting! For they can be a lesson and of help to us all!

Take care my friend!

so heart felt and deep. i love it i wish i could fav this poem *claps hands* keep it up

In English:

It is deep......... very sincere and something of heart.......... you play very pretty parts that alone they can be arrived to them when you have played the bottom.............

I congratulate you my friend............. it continues ahead.....

En español:

Es profundo......... muy sincero y algo de corazon.......... tocas partes muy lindas que solo se pueden llegar a ellas cuando has tocado el fondo.............

Te felicito amiga mia............. sigue adelante.....

wow, that is such a good poem...
it expresses all the feelings that one will have someday^^
great job! i can't even write a poem ^^""

Hey TG you're first poem and it's really good I didn't know you have a poetric side in your character XP and I must say you got talent
hope to see more poems from you very soon!!! and keep it up!

owh, thats in ur u.p. !!!
cool, you express yourself very well.
nice one, tripleG!
you gotta talent there, keep em coming!

wow this poem is very powerful!!! i have trouble expressing and putting my feelings into action many times... sometimes i feel like putting it on paper is a lot better and more honest because paper will not judge or hurt you back... but then of course there is always the risk of the paper cut! i just posted this comment on my own guestbook so that i remembered it when i was sad... i want you to read it... it is kind of harsh... but those were the thoughts in my head at the time!!... could you read it for me?... thanks... ohhh if anyone else wants to too you are welcome to... just remeber i was in a weird mood ( i have been a lot lately)... thanks... and good luck with your friend... and take a chance tripleG... most friends are worth a chance...

I love this poem...should send it to most of my irl male friends

wow! Ese poema esta muy bonito, i luv it.. son palabras que salen del corazon. Truly beautiful, great poem, hope to see more of you. ^____^