all my life ive searched for a love so true,
as true as the one i found with you.
i love u my baby from this day forward,
to have and to hold even when u are bored.
i love u with all my heart,
with out u i am only a part.
i like my heart to be whole,
baby without u im a worthless mole.
and as u know u hold the key to my heart,
till death do us part.
awwwwwwwwwwww another sweet poem UGH!
i can't take it anymore! they're all
so good...i can't choose a fav!! i can't
wait for your next poem nitetrain-san!^^ i bet its gonna be another beautiful
one righ? ^.~ take care 'k? ^_^
lumina s gotta be happy with you, that is so freakin sweet, lol i gotta agree
with people and say it sounds songish but its still great, good job... i trip
over myself just trying to rhyme and make an ounce of sense lol
All my life
all my life ive searched for a love so true,
as true as the one i found with you.
i love u my baby from this day forward,
to have and to hold even when u are bored.
i love u with all my heart,
with out u i am only a part.
i like my heart to be whole,
baby without u im a worthless mole.
and as u know u hold the key to my heart,
till death do us part.
XOXOXO
i love u Lumina <3
wow this is good, to m it sounds more likea song then a poem.lol
Great poem, I agree with DoubleBarrel, sounds like a song, but still good! You've got a great Muse!
Sweet Poem. ^^
Thanks Nitetrain. ^^
this reminds me of that song "all my life" but anyhoo another sweet poem nite keep it up ^^
Your poems are nice and it's pretty cool how you add a touch of humor to them!
awwwwwwwwwwww another sweet poem
UGH!
i can't take it anymore! 
they're all
so good...i can't choose a fav!! 
i can't
wait for your next poem nitetrain-san!^^ i bet its gonna be another beautiful
one righ? ^.~ take care 'k? ^_^
this is good, the beat in the poem, if u put into a song will be even better
It's a good poem.
Sweet poem! It's very touching and heart warming!
nice poem you did a really great job
Sugo! nice poem from nitetrain! it's full of love in it! you did a great job! keep up the gud work!
wow love the poem!
i think this is a very sweet poem. keep it up!!! i would like to read more from you
lumina s gotta be happy with you, that is so freakin sweet, lol i gotta agree with people and say it sounds songish but its still great, good job... i trip over myself just trying to rhyme and make an ounce of sense lol
awwwww *sniffles* this one is ssssooo sweet n cute good job me like dis 1
keep it up
i think its very well put. simple but nice poem u got there nitetrain.
aww.... very cute !
the style reminded me of a lecturer of mine who taught us mnemonics by writing loads of limmericks !
Keep the poems rolling in
Awwww.........thats so sweet! I feel like I've just eaten a cupcake.
Keep up the good work!
awww so sweet , it's really amazing. i like the first part it's so sweet. make more when you get the chance. =)
Lotta good comments on your poems huh nitetrain.
^^ lamo... jk.
Thanks a bundles for all the sweet poems.
-Lumina
Very romantic
sugoi! teehee...love the poem! ^_^ great job and keep it up^_^
nice but u don't have to force the rhymes..