Spank me ,whip me.
You know i like it mean.
Smack me on the ass.
Do it once or twice.
You got to play it dirty.
You can not play it nice.
Ill show you new positions.
I think your gonna like.
Hit me with that whip again
Ill show you what I like.
Come a little closer dont worry i dont bite.
Ill give you some more candy.
If I get another ride.
Im a bad girl thats liking what you do.
So whip me a little harder and i might stay here with you.
WOW, im not into getting spanked but, Ahem like i was saying your poems have
alot of erm.. emotion to it, very good emotion, ah yes keep up the good work.
HAHA...supo...this is like poem heaven...and you have killed me with an arrow of
emotions...
*singing*...spanking that spanking that spanking that ass...HAHA...your very
naughty..lol..but its all goodz...lol..
Wow, that`s what I like in you.you`re great.
Make more poems like that, I know you can make even stronger poem than this one,
but don`t overdo it.I don`t know what people here can do after reading a poem
like that :P
Is that some kind of poem for sado-masochists ? Contain a lot of hard words but
express very well the feelings of the writer (you do are the writer, aren't ya
Supo ?)
lol, now i understand why it said 17+
ok this poem was funny( i lmao) your 14 yourself, and the most coolest thing is,
i was even able to understand the poem easely, not like other people with all
those weird words i never seen, lol
Poems are truly an interesting thing. Not the first time I've seen something
like this though. I do have to say it's rather decently done. I'd work on
re-wording a few things and more of making it flow a bit better, but overall
it's not that bad of a poem. On a side note, most guys like a 'bad girl' so I
bet this'll drive em' wild . A very
interesting concept and a rather unique thing to make a poem out of. I do have
to say it's not half bad. =).
unimaginable....
unthinkable...
this is by far what i have been looking for in a poem....
you are deep down dirty or just plain wanna show us that you are ready to
be...?
great work, i like this, ya better patent this....coz i am gonna find it hard to
put down.
now if only my girlfriend will read this aloud/...
Spank me ,whip me.
You know i like it mean.
Smack me on the ass.
Do it once or twice.
You got to play it dirty.
You can not play it nice.
Ill show you new positions.
I think your gonna like.
Hit me with that whip again
Ill show you what I like.
Come a little closer dont worry i dont bite.
Ill give you some more candy.
If I get another ride.
Im a bad girl thats liking what you do.
So whip me a little harder and i might stay here with you.
WOW, im not into getting spanked but, Ahem like i was saying your poems have alot of erm.. emotion to it, very good emotion, ah yes keep up the good work.
HAHA...supo...this is like poem heaven...and you have killed me with an arrow of emotions...
*singing*...spanking that spanking that spanking that ass...HAHA...your very naughty..lol..but its all goodz...lol..
Wow.
Holy crap, I take that back with the other poem, THIS is the most intense poem that I have read from ya so far, just, wow...
whats up with this poem...ur good...u must b a baaad girl
Wow. I really don't no what to say. I mean it's hot but alittle well scary lol. I like it tho. thanks for shareing it. (*^_^*)
wow... supo, you're one naugthy girl. Not that I disnlike that, I just wanted to say it. Well, this is another well done adult poem. you're good.
hehehe i love this one.... um... yeah itsgreat *smiles big time* oh wow. please do more *giggles*
wow yeah thats my reaction too hah *thumbs up* niiice
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Lol more wows.. for WO WO woow.. naughty naughty 100% naughty..
OUCH i liked it (ha another joke i made) i need to show my freind this he'll love it just as much as me!
Wow, that`s what I like in you.you`re great.
Make more poems like that, I know you can make even stronger poem than this one, but don`t overdo it.I don`t know what people here can do after reading a poem like that :P
Is that some kind of poem for sado-masochists ? Contain a lot of hard words but express very well the feelings of the writer (you do are the writer, aren't ya Supo ?)
lol, now i understand why it said 17+
ok this poem was funny( i lmao) your 14 yourself, and the most coolest thing is, i was even able to understand the poem easely, not like other people with all those weird words i never seen, lol
Poems are truly an interesting thing. Not the first time I've seen something like this though. I do have to say it's rather decently done. I'd work on re-wording a few things and more of making it flow a bit better, but overall it's not that bad of a poem. On a side note, most guys like a 'bad girl' so I bet this'll drive em' wild
. A very
interesting concept and a rather unique thing to make a poem out of. I do have
to say it's not half bad. =).
unimaginable....
unthinkable...
this is by far what i have been looking for in a poem....
you are deep down dirty or just plain wanna show us that you are ready to be...?
great work, i like this, ya better patent this....coz i am gonna find it hard to put down.
now if only my girlfriend will read this aloud/...
alright, pull them pants down and let me start the whipping/spanking.
no words can describe this...poem
hehehe ^_^ a dark side to every person I guess
O_O im speechless lol
so ya like being spanked i guess well thats cool
lol
:p Sounds very much like lyrics to a rap song. Totally sell it to the recordning companies. x)
i ah woo that was soooooo hot,and wow from a 14 yr old,you are truelly truelly very hot, imean what ya put was amazing o_o
rofl
very creative