hmm i dont know this poem just feels right in its own way lol

i want you now and i want you here
to hold you in my arms and here ya scream my name
ill fuck you hard,ill fuck ya fast,this moment will always last
ill hold you down and rub your ass ,
this moment will always last,
i want you now
i want you here
only you will quench this thrist
only you will will drive this lust.

abit sexual but at least it ryhmes

that is very hot and direkt ... the part with

Quote: ill fuck you hard,ill fuck ya fast,this moment will always last
ill hold you down and rub your ass

that is very hot for me it seems that u want your girl and that u are very horny of her
hope u can do it with your girl fuck her hard and fast

lol, someone's a virgin. you need to get laid buddy

Make a good song don't you think?I think its interesting.

lol yea its good sounds like a poem i would write so hope ya get laid sometime lol xd

damn dude...you really need to get laid before you start humping the couch

This peom is okay. I really don't know what to say.... But seem's like everybody is saying the truth. I like the peom a 7/10. But you should keep it up

its funny...how everyone points out how sad it is for a guy to be horny and how much he needs to get laid, but when a girl posts the same poem,we all praise her.

IM NOT A virgin!!!!!!!!!1! im just love to have fun ^_-

calm down dude

Quote by luckymouseIM NOT A virgin!!!!!!!!!1! im just love to have fun ^_-

hey i believe you and this is a very hot *fans my face* poem oh please do more

and really this wasnt for kass,i just felt like writing a sex poem,and it turned out pretty damn good,and if people like it ill try to write more.

Yo...what a freaky delight you created..ohhh..now youve done it...you have unleased the freaki sides....O_O....nice poems...i like....lol..keep it up..

so dirthy

He he he.....didn't knew that you are a dirty boy.....ha ha ha....

Quote by maverickmechanicdamn dude...you really need to get laid before you start humping the couch

I agree...

haha, a great poem and everything rythms though I kind of wish you didn't use profanity, LOL, I sound like a parent but nonetheless dirty but truthful poem!

lol... interesting poem... ^^ very... very... interesting.
Yes yes, it's a lil' dirty. XP hehehe.
*eherm* Just an advice from a 14 year old...
You love to have fun? Then go have fun!
*rushes out of thread* whoops. (X

So, Who is a pervert, you ask? every GUY IN THE universe!!!

*nods vociferously*

interesting :d

i kinda like this... but it's not the kind of fare I usually read