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[Poem] Rain Rain

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The sun shines
I fall for you
The wind blows
I call for you
The rain falls
I cry for you
The thunder roars
I scream for you
The lightning strikes
I burn for you

hmmmm..... what to say.... I dont know... I just wrote these... I had a really bad day yesterday... still stuck on that.
Just tell me what you think.... Pretty please?

Well this one is good too. I do like the poems you post up here. I hope you will post up some more poems.

Sorry to hear that, but at least you had the chance to write this beautiful poem, it is really... I didn't knew liked to write poems, you're very good at it.

keep up the good job :)

This is a beautiful poem.
"The rain falls I cry for you" it touch my heart T_T (right now my home is rain)

I love this one it is a really cute concept.I like that you used weather to convey and enhance feelings! Great job! :D

Interesting works, your poems are pretty, I think that they are part of the life. :D

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