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Look into the future what do you see?
I realy need to know now is there a place for me?
If were gonna survive the dream must stay alive.
Tell me would you love me?
Would you be rite there?

Tell me would you hug me?
In the time we share.
All the dreams and the things you see.
I dont want to miss you,I dont want to cry.
I want to be with you every day and night.

Give me your love and soon time will pass bye.
Look into the future.
What do you see?

wow that sounds so freaky O_O
i swear i did one JUST LIKE THAT!
omg mine was a little different but not by much!
wow thats weird...
awesome job though supo^^ i like youre icon ;)

Quote by himeno22wow that sounds so freaky O_Oi swear i did one JUST LIKE THAT!
omg mine was a little different but not by much!wow thats weird...
awesome job though supo^^ i like youre icon ;)

Thank you ^_^

MMmmmm! Awesome poem . . . you are very good. Keep them coming. XD XD XD

Very NICE supo...me likei this one tooz...its very lol...i forgot my words XD XD XO XO

... :\ ..anyways... :D nice poem...i had just finished hw..please forgive me.. XP x_x x_x
Great job once again.. ;) its a keeper!!!

Nice poem Supo-Chan.
Keep making more.
I'll be reading away.
Sayonarra.

-Lumina

Like always a very good work of yours!^^ Keep it up ´cause it is always fun to read your poems!

I like it, very romantic

very nice poem, keep doing this excellent work. :D.. very romantic too.. ^_^

very good supo. i enjoyed this one. keep up the good work

I already told you what I see in the other one : ]

Quote by SharinganKnightI already told you what I see in the other one : ]


Yes I remember *blushes*

woo... *fails to ask*

nice poem, supo. You're a very talented girl :) some of these poems are deep and meaningful... some are incredibly shallow but fun reading ^^

good sig ^^

Great poem supo. This poem is really deep and beautiful. It makes you think, and that's a great acomplishment for a poem. Excellent work!

i dont dwell on the future...i concentrate what is here and now...baby steps in the darkness one after the other

woooow... great poem ^^ thnx for replying to alot of my threads ^^ im nto very gud at threads =/ buh i LOVE reading wut other peepo say =D

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