Hey this is a wall i started about a year ago, i put off workin on it till
recently
but i'm almost done with it, just need to make my bg
What im plannin on doin for it is a bunch of cables that fade into digital
wording( 1's n 0's), that way the digital part would go with motoko and the
cables would go with jo(you'd have to see the anime to kno wat i mean)
Any ideas, or critiques would be welcome, thanks
btw,tho it's meant to be dual screen, i designed it so it can be cut in half to
use either as a single screen wall (also i dun have dual screens, just thought
it'd be fun makin one)
Hmmm, I think you did pretty good for the wall, though I do not really like the
black color background..nor the monotone red in the right side.. it makes all
the color drown, maybe you would wanna do a different color ones...
Other than that, I think extraction and composition are generally fine..
But maybe you would wanna do a little more something for the background on the
left side later ^^
Since you haven't reconstruct the whole background, I cannot really give anymore
suggestions (since you understand what you are going to do) tell
me if you edited this and I will give more suggestion to that version
;D
Well, i modified it a bt, mostly fixing blemishes, but i did make the right side
a bit dimmer
Also i made jo not jump out as much:P
I'm not plannin on postin an update till i get a bg goin, tho it'll be a while
due to school, if there are any requests i could up the updated version but it's
really not much different from the above
Thanks for the help guys
woo nice....but i don't like the red on the right hand side, it's tooo red...
it'll be cooler if u can make some techy bg...like a battleground or
something...
but nonetheless, it looks pretty good ^^
prolly not the place to put it, but if anyone who's ever watched or has
bakuretsu tenshi, i'm lookin for a screen of one of the bad guys, the one with
the cables, i wanna see if i can use that for the bg in some way
Hm...I rather like the first version better. The right side of the second one
looks too red to me...but perhaps that's just me . Can't wait to see what you do with the bg. Judging from the mist you've
already added, I'm going to guess that it's going to be scenic/abstract. Anyway,
it's a great start.
hmm, two who say the first was too bright n two who say it's just right:/
Well, i'll go the midroute:D i'll make the second version a little more red on
the right, keeping everything else the same
I think the main prob with the first was that Jango was bright, not necessarily
the background, so i've also made jango less red, as for the second, i prolly
over did the red removal, making it less virbrant and more boring
I won't be workin on it for a bit due to several weeks worth of midterms and
quarter term exams:/
Hey this is a wall i started about a year ago, i put off workin on it till recently
but i'm almost done with it, just need to make my bg
What im plannin on doin for it is a bunch of cables that fade into digital wording( 1's n 0's), that way the digital part would go with motoko and the cables would go with jo(you'd have to see the anime to kno wat i mean)
Any ideas, or critiques would be welcome, thanks
http://img177.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dual3ig.jpg
btw,tho it's meant to be dual screen, i designed it so it can be cut in half to use either as a single screen wall (also i dun have dual screens, just thought it'd be fun makin one)
Hmmm, I think you did pretty good for the wall, though I do not really like the black color background..nor the monotone red in the right side.. it makes all the color drown, maybe you would wanna do a different color ones...
tell
me if you edited this and I will give more suggestion to that version
;D
Other than that, I think extraction and composition are generally fine..
But maybe you would wanna do a little more something for the background on the left side later ^^
Since you haven't reconstruct the whole background, I cannot really give anymore suggestions (since you understand what you are going to do)
Hope that helps..
nice wallpaper ..
why wait with working on it ? looks nice so far. .
not enough time to work ?
doesn´t matter. . looks great.
is it done yet ?
maybe give the girl in teh right a shadow. . she jumps out, doesn´t fit in the back as good as the left one. .
onther then that . . all great . . nice and clean. . : )
thx man
Well, i modified it a bt, mostly fixing blemishes, but i did make the right side a bit dimmer
Also i made jo not jump out as much:P
I'm not plannin on postin an update till i get a bg goin, tho it'll be a while due to school, if there are any requests i could up the updated version but it's really not much different from the above
Thanks for the help guys
woo nice....but i don't like the red on the right hand side, it's tooo red...
it'll be cooler if u can make some techy bg...like a battleground or something...
but nonetheless, it looks pretty good ^^
prolly not the place to put it, but if anyone who's ever watched or has bakuretsu tenshi, i'm lookin for a screen of one of the bad guys, the one with the cables, i wanna see if i can use that for the bg in some way
btw, i wasn't plannin on it but here's an updated version
http://img371.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dual2ru.jpg
Hm...I rather like the first version better. The right side of the second one looks too red to me...but perhaps that's just me
. Can't wait to see what you do with the bg. Judging from the mist you've
already added, I'm going to guess that it's going to be scenic/abstract. Anyway,
it's a great start. 
GREAT job, I would love to see more dual screen walls on MT
It's indeed a shortage.
I like the first one like bluSake.
hmm, two who say the first was too bright n two who say it's just right:/
Well, i'll go the midroute:D i'll make the second version a little more red on the right, keeping everything else the same
I think the main prob with the first was that Jango was bright, not necessarily the background, so i've also made jango less red, as for the second, i prolly over did the red removal, making it less virbrant and more boring
I won't be workin on it for a bit due to several weeks worth of midterms and quarter term exams:/
cool wall. sexy, nice that its dual