Hey i would like it you you all could tell me what you think of my freestyle
pic. i would be happy if you give me any comments on it besides the hands i know
i really messed them up ^^. thanks.
Messed up? You're joking, right? I wish I could draw like that. I mean, I draw
and it looks much more decent than most of the fanart on the net... but you're
better.
As for the girl, I don't really like how her shoulders are aligned. The right
one seems too round and the hand, uh, it just goes in the back too much. ^^ So
yeah, you should work with the hands. Actually, I always have problems with
drawing hands. And eyes. But your image looks kind of like a CLAMP artwork...
were you inspired by MKR? ^^
Oh, by the way, you really should color the image. Or make a lineart or vector
it. Because now it is kind of difficult to see which line is the actual one. ^^'
Thanks Tokitoh i was sorta inspired by clamp, but not by magic knights, but
rather tsubasa chronicles, but now that u mention it she sorta dose resemble the
red haired one (forgot her name). I'm going to erase her arms and stuff and try
to see if i can put them in a better position.
I wanna color it, but i never colored an image before, but i will try. I also
wanna put in a background sorta like a floating city or some dragons or
creatures from the manga. I am truly glade you looked at my work and commented
on it. I rarely get 3 or 4 ppl to talk about my art. i guess i have to work
harder. Thanks again. I'll probaly show you a update when i wake up tomorrow.
You honestly think that's a mess? I think it's great!
i personally think that the head is somehow to big in proportion to the
arms...
fix this by either lengthening the arm, or do some shading...
other than that, all you need to do is clean up the pencilwork, color it in, and
i think it's ready to submit! ^^
wow that is good .
U have good control over your lines quality.
I like the quality of ther lines, it has lineweight and flow to it.
Not stiff, very nicely done.
Imagine your skill qith a great cging , it'll be awesome drawing.
Good work
Hey i would like it you you all could tell me what you think of my freestyle pic. i would be happy if you give me any comments on it besides the hands i know i really messed them up ^^. thanks.
Melru
Hey heres the updated one thanks for all you Q&C they help me alot
.
Melru001
Messed up? You're joking, right? I wish I could draw like that. I mean, I draw and it looks much more decent than most of the fanart on the net... but you're better.
As for the girl, I don't really like how her shoulders are aligned. The right one seems too round and the hand, uh, it just goes in the back too much. ^^ So yeah, you should work with the hands. Actually, I always have problems with drawing hands. And eyes. But your image looks kind of like a CLAMP artwork... were you inspired by MKR? ^^
Oh, by the way, you really should color the image. Or make a lineart or vector it. Because now it is kind of difficult to see which line is the actual one. ^^'
Thanks Tokitoh i was sorta inspired by clamp, but not by magic knights, but rather tsubasa chronicles, but now that u mention it she sorta dose resemble the red haired one (forgot her name). I'm going to erase her arms and stuff and try to see if i can put them in a better position.
I wanna color it, but i never colored an image before, but i will try. I also wanna put in a background sorta like a floating city or some dragons or creatures from the manga. I am truly glade you looked at my work and commented on it. I rarely get 3 or 4 ppl to talk about my art. i guess i have to work harder. Thanks again. I'll probaly show you a update when i wake up tomorrow.
You honestly think that's a mess? I think it's great!
i personally think that the head is somehow to big in proportion to the arms...
fix this by either lengthening the arm, or do some shading...
other than that, all you need to do is clean up the pencilwork, color it in, and i think it's ready to submit! ^^
wow that is good .
U have good control over your lines quality.
I like the quality of ther lines, it has lineweight and flow to it.
Not stiff, very nicely done.
Imagine your skill qith a great cging , it'll be awesome drawing.
Good work
Thanks calisqo i hope i be able to cg it cuz i wanna make this into a wall, sig, and avatar.
good luck with it .
I'd like to see that when it's finihsed ^_^
Till then ^_^