DEATH NOTE! DEATH NOTE! Death Note pwns you so bad. *gonk* O_O;
Okay, now that that's accounted for...
I think how you did the "notebook" effect is really cool, but since
the lines are tilted and the text isn't it looks kind of weird, and some of the
text goes off the side of the notebook, and the right bar is all by itself with
no borders or anything, it wound up kind of screwy. Maybe if you just made the
notebook extend farther, that's the problem. There's no way to solve the
tilted-lines issue, though, so maybe if you made the lines a little
lighter...?
I dunno, it's still pretty good. I rate you a 6.5.
The notebook effect is really interesting. One thing you might want to try in
order to match the text with the lines is to convert the text to curves. Then
you can use the deforming tools to make the text seem like it is actually part
of the page and not just pasted on top. I think that would go a long way to
making your page that much cooler.
Thanks for sharing.
6.5/10 (8 if the text/notebook was fixed)
Hey the idea of note book page is quite cute!
I love it!
Too bad that I don't understant what the series of Japanese words said......
But still really cool!
I made my userpage featuring the death note =D I'm so proud I changed all the text colors <3
Please tell me what you think
DEATH NOTE! DEATH NOTE! Death Note pwns you so bad. *gonk* O_O;
Okay, now that that's accounted for...
I think how you did the "notebook" effect is really cool, but since the lines are tilted and the text isn't it looks kind of weird, and some of the text goes off the side of the notebook, and the right bar is all by itself with no borders or anything, it wound up kind of screwy. Maybe if you just made the notebook extend farther, that's the problem. There's no way to solve the tilted-lines issue, though, so maybe if you made the lines a little lighter...?
I dunno, it's still pretty good. I rate you a 6.5.
It looks really cool, I like the notebook effect. But it looks kinda weird how Ryuk's face is cut off. good job anyway. 8/10
NICE page. death note=special.
The notebook effect is really interesting. One thing you might want to try in order to match the text with the lines is to convert the text to curves. Then you can use the deforming tools to make the text seem like it is actually part of the page and not just pasted on top. I think that would go a long way to making your page that much cooler.
Thanks for sharing.
6.5/10 (8 if the text/notebook was fixed)
Hey the idea of note book page is quite cute!
I love it!
Too bad that I don't understant what the series of Japanese words said......
But still really cool!