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(poem) ~I'm always with you~

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~I'm always with you~
When you look outside during a rainy day you miss me,

You cry when I'm gone, I wipe them when you are sleeping and crying at the same time,

You look sad when your heart is broken when I'm with you,

Look up in the sky and you see me in one of those pretty clouds that are passing by,

I'm always with you no matter what happens:
Crying while you are sleeping,
Can't eat when I'm gone,
Cry because you miss me sooo much,
Crying out for me,
But I'm always with you,

I'm always with you in your life, heart and your mind,

Care for your love one's
And they will care for you
-zero-walt


merged: 11-27-2005 ~ 12:23pm
Love my poems^_^
oh yeah
go romantic zero!

Good poem.
Very... romantic.
As always, ^^

- Lumina

Aww...such a sweet poem! Great job!

umm is there a style of poetry that doent have constant stanzas?

but yeah good poem

Oh...thats such a sweet poem..makes me wanna hug someone. -sniffles-

as always your poems are fantastic takun^_^

What the? me confused, how is this a poem? And why are you so full of yourself?

too unstructured, loosely fit ideas... pull them together man, for the love of... poetry

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