Hey everyone, I just thought instead of writing a thread about one poem, I'll make a thread about more poems in time. All you need to do is reply and I'll keep on writing (in time that is)

Most of my poems are my points of view in a period of time in my life. I have a book of poems that I name "Chapters of my Life". Every line has meaning and most of them have to do with reading between the lines.

So friends and members of MT, please reply and give comments about what you think the poems represent or if you want to hear more. I might not be able to keep writing all the time but I'll try. Since I'm at work right now, I can't always reply back right away. So here's my newest poem I just wrote...

~ Regardless ~

Regardless of what you say or do...
My feelings for you will be the same
For no one knows you like I do...
I hope you never change

Remind me if I go too far
And make you feel unease
I will return to where you are
But you should know, I'll never leave

Though I should mention
It's you I need...
It was always my intention
If ever you believe

As for time I spent with you
I wish would last forever
As if I was meant for you
To live happily ever after

For you always take my breath away
I will always remember you
Regardless if we go our separate ways
I will always love you for you...

hmm snazzy. has good meaning and such i'm not much for poems so i have no way of criticizing it for its flaws cuz i wouldn't know them if i saw them or complimenting it either but i can understand the concept goin on there. pretty coolz i wouldn't mind reading more.

that is very nice. i like that one alot. keep them coming.

Hey! Thanks buggydude and BlkLotus for your reply and for your nice comment. So here's another I wrote awhile back... (I think I post it once in this forum some where)

~ The Lost of Innocent ~

My sorrow unmatched
My sadness unbroken
Love I had lost
and lie my heart broken

Dreams I once had
now just pass me by
all my life I been sad
now my hope has die...

What's there more to life?
all I ever felt was pain
and through this restless night
things will always be the same

I searched for love
knowing not, it will be my death
as for the dreams I been dreaming off
now there's nothing left

I never change for any one
though now I have to face
that my world is falling apart
for you I can't replace

I was a fool to ever love
and to thought that we were meant to be
today is the day I realizes...
that I love you... More then you ever love me...

such heart break and turmoil. it sounds like what i had to go thru recently. *hugs you tight* thank you for shareing this with us.

so much emotion in this please dont stop writing poemns they are so good

Quote by BlkLotussuch heart break and turmoil. it sounds like what i had to go thru
recently. *hugs you tight* thank you for shareing this with us.
so much emotion in this please dont stop writing poemns they are so good

i definitely agree with it. why Dark do you have a problem? me hug you too to comfort you. **hugs** hope you are OK friend.

Thanks again for replying to my thread BlkLotus and thank you too Angelrhea ^_^ I will always keep writing if you guys want to hear more... I need to run because I'm leaving work at the moment . But here's 2 poems I wrote a while back... One of them (The ghost of you) is already in this forum but I just thought I'll do a 2 in 1 because of that... But then again, it might be both of them (can't remember)

Here's the 1st one (it's pretty short)

~ With or without you ~

Pretending you're beside me
Hoping that it's true
This emptiness inside of me
Because I'm not with you

Seeing you next to never
In a dream that's yet to come
Knowing not if this is forever
Or what I have begun

Though no matters what happen...
I can't stop thinking of you
I'll love you till the end
Whether I'm with or with out you

And here's 1 of my favorite poem that I wrote sometime ago in this forum...

~ The Ghost of you ~

The ghost of you still haunts me
Just a voice inside my head...
Realizing you didn't want me...
Forgotten promise you once said

The ghost of you comes visit...
in my dreams and when I lie awake
Reminding me of what I missed
Anticipate my heart to break

The ghost of you still makes me cry
Just memories I can't let go
Like the emptiness that grows inside
Isolate me to never know.

So let me go and let me be
My love for you was always true
Though you were never meant for me
I can never escape the ghost of you...

Cmon "darksavior", more happy and less sad love poems. Pretty good though. First one was best.

and by the way
Dreams I once had
now just pass me by
all my life I been sad
now my hope has die...

all my life "I've" been sad

Damn good poems I especially like the gost of you that is really good

Keep on writing

Quote by NaneoCmon "darksavior", more happy and less sad love poems. Pretty good though.

Hey thanks but my poem is just how I feel at that time

Quote by Endless-PassionDamn good poems I especially like the ghost of you that is really good
Keep on writing

Thanks and I will keep on writing if people keep on posting

Here's a poem I wrote for my autobiography when I went to high school. It was also the title of my autobiography "True illusion (title) the mask we all wear (tag line)"

~ True illusion ~

Though my life has little meaning
as a person who's always dreaming
Will anyone remember, when I am gone
will all my dreams from now on
blind me so, I'll never find
the past I left and lost behind
as though darkness turn to day
or like words I can never say
chosen by destiny and curse by fate
Am I dreaming now? Will I ever wake?
The pain will never go away
Only hoping that someday
my life will turn out for the best
and maybe then... my soul can rest
For no one know not of my confusion
the life I live... is true illusion...

the only one i liked is true illusion, the other lovelies are troublesome. you sound as though love long lost is haunting, even though your wisdom cannot satify the hole that's binding. i like your sig. too, it is a hard path you take to make a decision based away from other's inclusive opinions.

we are not the products of ourselves if we consider how we should be according to another.

Quote by jasaiyajinthe only one i liked is true illusion, the other lovelies are troublesome. you sound as though love long lost is haunting, even though your wisdom cannot satify the hole that's binding. i like your sig. too, it is a hard path you take to make a decision based away from other's inclusive opinions.
we are not the products of ourselves if we consider how we should be according to another.

Thanks man! You seems to understand pretty well.

Here's a poem I wrote awhile back...

~ Confused ~

One way,
One word to say...
Only dreams that can't come true

Off endless night,
Off endless day
Only dreams I had of you

Only a dream
Can any one see?
And so it seems there's only me

Off what I found
Off what is real
So confuse is how I feel

Knowing not what I have done
Only knowing you're my chosen one

For life, for love
For a moment in time...
Seems like forever in this sad and foolish mind...

Wow...these poems are very good...
i really like the lost of innocence and with or without you...

Jaszi5

Quote by jaszi5Wow...these poems are very good...
i really like the lost of innocence and with or without you...Jaszi5

Hey thanks for replying and the kind remarks ^_^ you just giving me a reason to write more. As you guys may already know this... but I'm a pretty depress person at this very moment, this how I feel... (1 of 2 of my newest poems)

~ In memories of you ~

Regret not for what is done
For what else can I do?
For you have dreams to be someone
And all my dreams is to be with you

As much as I want to hate you
I know I can't...
I am who I am today because of you
from the false hope you implant

And when I try to forget you...
Some how you find your way
To haunt me more as you did before
Will I always be this way?

So I denied myself from seeing you
But I miss you more then yesterday
I cannot win, though I pretend
to be this person I am today

So you won't know how much I love you
For it's you that I miss...
And without you in this world
I don't think I exist

As my hopeless heart is dying
To realizes... in different views...
I will always be crying
In memories of you...

well I'm not going to lie I only read a few but I think theyre pretty good
better then what I could ever do lol but they are all kinda sad maybe u
should make a more cheerful one lol keep up the kick ass work though n__nV

Quote by DarkMaiden1369well I'm not going to lie I only read a few but I think theyre pretty good
better then what I could ever do lol but they are all kinda sad maybe u
should make a more cheerful one lol keep up the kick ass work though n__nV

Thanks Liz ^_^ for being honest in your own words lol it's nice to know you like it. I'll give another shot at being alittle cheerful ^_^ here's a poem dedicated to my son (yes! I have a son) not my best work but I just want to share it with everyone...

~ Kevin ~

My son you are
And I love you so
With all my heart
With all my soul

The things I do
I do for you
Those things I do
I wanted too

Just to show you
How much I care
And no matter what happens
I will always be there

And in time
I hope you understand
And find
That I would keep you if I can

You grow so fast
Before I know
Sometime you were a pain in my ass
But hey! That's the way it goes

And there will be times
You'll feel like dad is mean
I'm only teaching you what is right
Protecting you from what's unclean

If ever you feel like you lost your way
Just call my name and I'll be there
You made me proud being the son you are
And know that I will always care

kevin is your son? how old is he? I get the feeling that you two arent living together..

Wow, these are very good, especially "The ghost of you" and "True Illusion".
I think a poem is a good one if it catches a certain moment or reflects on a unique mood or feeling. Your poems do and I think I understand those feelings pretty well, maybe that is why I like them. Keep on writing.

Quote by melonbrustkevin is your son? how old is he? I get the feeling that you two arent living together..

Thanks for replying ^_^ not sure if you like it but thanks anyway... and about "Kevin" He's my 3 year old son. He doesn't live with me any more but I do get him every weekend (note every lol) since me and baby's mother separated about a year a go

Quote by 13mdWow, these are very good, especially "The ghost of you" and "True Illusion".
I think a poem is a good one if it catches a certain moment or reflects on a unique mood or feeling. Your poems do and I think I understand those feelings pretty well, maybe that is why I like them. Keep on writing.

Hey! Thanks... Now you know the reason why I like your's (poem) too. And it's nice to know that some one does understand you. And I will keep on writing...

Here's a poem that I just wrote today...

~ Selfish Ambition ~

What's the price to pay for glory?
It's a never-ending story
To gain the world, but lose your own
And realize you're all alone
Not knowing how or when you became so numb
Only dreaming that one day this day would come
Now that it has... you feel this emptiness from within
You had sacrifice your happiness just so you can win
You have wrong you self in so many ways
This is the price that you must pay
For your greed has blur your every vision
And left you here with your selfish ambition

This one is pretty good too. A kind of self-reflection that I can identify with. Please keep on writing, I`m looking for more

Hey, nice. Very nice poems. I like them all.

Hey man, awsome poems im jealous I wish i could do those kind of poems, keep up the good work and maybe I'll cya around

i love the "Regardless" poem. it's really good, well all your poems are good! great job ^.^

Quote by 13mdThis one is pretty good too. A kind of self-reflection that I can identify with. Please keep on writing, I'm looking for more

Thanks again 13md = P and I will because you guys reply and likes my poems, Yay! lol

Quote by lthnadmlHey, nice. Very nice poems. I like them all.

Thanks lthnadml for liking all my poems, I really appreciate it that you feel that way. Really though... thanks ^_^

Quote by InuyashaRulesssssHey man, awsome poems im jealous I wish i could do those kind of poems, keep up the good work and maybe I'll cya around

Hey level 31 or so lol I should be jealous of you and level in Halo2 man lol but thanks for replying to my thread... the fact that you like my poems in a plus too. Thanks again

Quote by sakura-chii love the "Regardless" poem. it's really good, well all your poems are good! great job ^.^

thanks for the kind remarks (you made me smile) anyway, thanks for thinking that their all good too

i was surprise to see how many people reply from the last time I wrote and I just want to take the time to thank everyone that did. Thanks again I guess you want to read more because you guys replied (I'm assuming) so... this is my newest poem.

~ World of Pretend ~

All my life, I been pretending
I hide this pain that's never ending
So I subside to coexist
For I know I will not be miss

For what you see, is make believe
A lie I live not to deceive
To justify the hurt inside
To denied truth within your eyes

To all my friends I ever known
To know my heart is not my own
So view my life to be mistaken
I'm curse to live for I'm forsaken

Despise me so, I know you must
The kind of person I really was
The darkness bind, the truth is blind
Reflects my heart and then define

The person I am, to let you know
Just because I care for you so
As the friend you always been
I will always defend you from my world of pretend