hello..this is my first poem...marauder09 insipired me to write one....

The messenger

I'm running , but i don't know where im going
I think deep i can feel my blood flowing

Finally..I reach to a box of treasure
Inside it was full of pleasure

I ignore it , I walk away
speechless , nothing to say

How could i let my desire
burn deep inside the flame of fire

walking the box proved im brave
but my happiness it did not save

I might be able to walk away from happiness
but will i be able to walk away from loneliness?

I stopped , before i took another step
thinking to myself...will i regret?

Is the box that important?
is that why i am sent?

I see a bright blue light
i look deep to see whats blocking my sight

Its an angel , an angel from above
god has sent her to show me what really is love

She looks at me , she smiles
as she whispers to me

Ignore the box so our friendship wouldn't grow apart
because the true treasure is deep inside your heart!

Cooooooooool....
very nice poem......
Has alot of meanings....
Nice... Really nice...
Hope to see more from u....
Final part is the best...

very nice . i like this alot.
lots of emtion that i can read in this one

Wow. This is a very sweet poem and i thnx you very much for sharing it with us. It's has many emotions just like BlkLotus said.

omoshiroi, some good parts, real good, but also some that caused a disturbance in the flow. a little surgical grade tools should slice the surface roughage into a shining brightly written passage.

i didnt know that you made poems
its cool ^^
*hugz*