It may looks too simple but I cannot think of another addition(actually it was
deleted by botchii once ").
The main concept is that eve is sitting in the water. Here it is.
I think the positioning some of the elements can help ppl to understand the
idea.
Like the water level. Looks to me she's half drowned
The stars can be lessen, to maintain composition,
Extraction perhaps the reason it got botchii to delete it.
Using pentool or so i've been told many times, will def help a lot on cleaning
up the scan.
Till then Just keep workin on it till you get it right
good luck.
while your wallie is still better than anything i can do, i agree with what
calisqo-san said about the water level and the stars. another thing that could
use a little work is that the horizon line. it appears to be a pefectly straight
line, which imho looks a little strange. also the effects that you used on the
tree look a little out of place. but i like that scan of eve! good luck!
This time, i've changed the tree, the stars and the water border. Furthermore,
I've work on the details of eve and the ripple. Thank you very much for your
comments. They really help me out. To tell the truth, i've never used pen tool
before because i don't know what it is so I never pay attention to it ". By
using pentool, I now can do many tricks that i couldn't do it in the past.
I'm not sure that my wall is worth enough to be posted in the gallery section.
Please tell me if i have to work harder. Thanks.
Update
Or this may be better. I really don't understand how can i use 42 layers in this
wall although it seems to have nothing
first off, the water level (where the sky and water meet) is a straight line.
normally water isn't that straight. even if eve's in the pond.
might i suggest some waves? it adds a little realistic effect.
the scan of eve is great. and using her position as if she's sitting in the pond
is a great idea. probably if you blend it differently. because the glow effect
is nice, but probably not the best.
the embosed tree on the right corner is a good idea. it gives more of a 3-d
effect. but the ripple looks a bit unatural. i suggest levling it out more to
make it a little more natural.
i hope this helps you.
g'luck! i'll be looking forward to your submission in the Black Cat category!
I'm sorry I'm not able to give you advises, but I think your wallie is going to
became great, Ill'be looking forward to see it in the Black Cat gallery!
In the meanwhile I took your last updated version, hope you don't mind!
Thank you very much, I'm really glad that you guys comment my wallpaper.
Unfortunately, my second semester has already begun so i won't be able to
improve my wallpaper for a long time . But,
actually, i had submited it in a gallery section for 3 days without being
deleted (Thanks to you guys again ). For
AiraKiriyama-san, I'm glad that you like my wall and sure you can take it
without permission .
It may looks too simple but I cannot think of another addition(actually it was deleted by botchii once
").
The main concept is that eve is sitting in the water. Here it is.
well. I can kinda see the idea.
I think the positioning some of the elements can help ppl to understand the idea.
Like the water level. Looks to me she's half drowned
The stars can be lessen, to maintain composition,
Extraction perhaps the reason it got botchii to delete it.
Using pentool or so i've been told many times, will def help a lot on cleaning up the scan.
Till then Just keep workin on it till you get it right
good luck.
while your wallie is still better than anything i can do, i agree with what calisqo-san said about the water level and the stars. another thing that could use a little work is that the horizon line. it appears to be a pefectly straight line, which imho looks a little strange. also the effects that you used on the tree look a little out of place. but i like that scan of eve! good luck!
This time, i've changed the tree, the stars and the water border. Furthermore, I've work on the details of eve and the ripple. Thank you very much for your comments. They really help me out. To tell the truth, i've never used pen tool before because i don't know what it is so I never pay attention to it
". By
using pentool, I now can do many tricks that i couldn't do it in the past.
I'm not sure that my wall is worth enough to be posted in the gallery section. Please tell me if i have to work harder. Thanks.
Update
Or this may be better. I really don't understand how can i use 42 layers in this wall although it seems to have nothing
well i see what calisqo and fireflywishes meant.
first off, the water level (where the sky and water meet) is a straight line. normally water isn't that straight. even if eve's in the pond.
might i suggest some waves? it adds a little realistic effect.
the scan of eve is great. and using her position as if she's sitting in the pond is a great idea. probably if you blend it differently. because the glow effect is nice, but probably not the best.
the embosed tree on the right corner is a good idea. it gives more of a 3-d effect. but the ripple looks a bit unatural. i suggest levling it out more to make it a little more natural.
i hope this helps you.
g'luck! i'll be looking forward to your submission in the Black Cat category!
I'm sorry I'm not able to give you advises, but I think your wallie is going to became great, Ill'be looking forward to see it in the Black Cat gallery!
In the meanwhile I took your last updated version, hope you don't mind!
Thank you very much, I'm really glad that you guys comment my wallpaper. Unfortunately, my second semester has already begun so i won't be able to improve my wallpaper for a long time
. But,
actually, i had submited it in a gallery section for 3 days without being
deleted (Thanks to you guys again 
). For
AiraKiriyama-san, I'm glad that you like my wall and sure you can take it
without permission 
.