To see His face and touch His cheek
To kiss His lips and smile
To feel His heart beat under my hand
as i lean against Him
makes me never want to wake up from this dream
i want to feel loved this way forever
Feeling His passion in His kiss
and see the sparkle in His eyes as He smiles
it makes my day worth while
i dedicate this to 3 people. one wil remain nameless but He knows who He is.
the other two is bobobob and MysteryAngel.
Romantic poem......
Never really thought about romance.
Always liked gothic and gory. Still good poem!
Very realistic with the description (I think I'm repeating myself).[reads the
poem again] Wait! this is a dream?
To see His face and touch His cheek
To kiss His lips and smile
To feel His heart beat under my hand
as i lean against Him
makes me never want to wake up from this dream
i want to feel loved this way forever
Feeling His passion in His kiss
and see the sparkle in His eyes as He smiles
it makes my day worth while
i dedicate this to 3 people. one wil remain nameless but He knows who He is.
the other two is bobobob and MysteryAngel.
love you all
critique if you must but be gentle
Awwwwwwwwwww thankies that is so sweet of you to dedicate this to Chris and I. I love this poem. Great job!
awwwwwwwww thank you so much. I love it ^^. awsome job
*nods*
Great poem.^_^
A nice and swet poem with a good feel to it.
I wonder who the anonymous guy is?XP
and keep
up the good work!
anywho! the poem is really good! it sounds cool as well!
thanks for sharing it
Great poem...Wonder who that 3rd guy is?
I aways love your poems they're so full of emotions
sweet and nice poem. great job ^^
who's the other guy?
nice poem... but what about me?
That is a very good description of the enraptured state so many seek to find themselves in. Enjoy it.
this one is great
Plenty of sentimentalism, little poetic creativitism.
Yin, yang.
Good, bad.
Win, lose.
Game over.
This Poem Is OK
Although It Makes Me Wonder Who The Third Person Might Be
awesome poem
not bad..but quite similar to the previous ones
wow, sweet... very ..eetou.. innocent love... heart-felt.. simple yet 'real'.... ne?
:blushes:
Romantic poem......
Never really thought about romance.
Always liked gothic and gory. Still good poem!
Very realistic with the description (I think I'm repeating myself).[reads the poem again] Wait! this is a dream?
very nice and passionate BlkLotus keep it up
i enjoyed reading this. i hope someday i can find a love like that
i know who that third person is i hope He is happy with the out come of this one. i enjoyed reading this one i hope you do more my friend
Wooooowwwwwwww....
so simple, so nice, so beautifull... so adorable !
i wish the first with no name is me !
lots of love honey !
I have done nothing. I have said nothing much. I am staying out of this matter.