You tell me that you love me
and all the things i do

that your heart isnt big enough
to hold all the love i have for you

You tell me that my hair is soft
and the perfume i wear unique

and as we share this special day
the love grows stronger not weak

kinda simple and oh so cheesy but hey its Valentine's Day
critique if you want

Happy Valetines to all and enjoy this little gift

i like it it was good and thanks for the pointers on my poems i not that good with gramer its not my best subject

Short but very cute ^^! Good job!

Wow such a great poem and it had alot of feeling in it too.^^ Keep up the excllent job.

Hehehe, poem gave me a nice warm feeling inside, nicely done!

It's sweet; not too cheesy. And I'm not kidding here.

my critique:
there is no "cheese" on valentine ^_^
cute
made me smile, I thank U for that...
happy valentines to everyone!

somewhat, as you said, slightly "cheesey" and ....that's my only complaint.

Oh great, I hate valentines day. Its a fake holiday thats was created on commercialism and unrealistic goals. Where I just couch out money for some overpriced crap that will be gone in a week.
Sorry if my bitterness is getting the best of me today, I just came back from a test that I bombed. I'm tired, sick, and a bunch of other stuff.

How romantic great job B-lotus, I really like your valentine poem it's prertty good!
and lovely!
thanks alot for sharing it and happy valentine's day!
Ciao!

pretty interesting. nice poem for valentine's day. but then i'm not a big fan of this day

yeah a bit simple but hey... you have done a very good job anyways

it's short, simple and sweet.. ^^ ..but then again i never really liked v-day.. >.> ...never got much from it apart from bad luck.. <.<

it's so nice of you to share this one with us...
thanx a lot for this, and thanx for this nice nice moment...
love you so...

ha very cheesy decent job though

Awwwwwww this is a really sweet poem. It may be short but its still good. Good job!

I personally think there isn't true love between humans......
I don't know why I think that way but anyways I love the poem