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you wana see the wallpapers that i made?

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Minitokyo » Forum » Culture & Entertainment Fora » The Sandbox  you wana see the wallpapers that i made?

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ok i just want to make sure that if you steal my wallpapers or icons then you will get your account deleted and im NOT playing around ok but if you are here to see them then i hope you enjoy them~!

Naruto~ Gaara
this one took me 2 hours just to make it and it came out pretty
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e89/joinme666x/nightwallpaper.jpg

this gaara wallpaper was really awsome because i put my poem that i just made up on it so i like this one also
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e89/joinme666x/2gaara.jpg

here was my verry first gaara wallpaper that i made and i look back at it now its not really one that i love but it was good for a head start well comment on them all thank you~!
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e89/joinme666x/1gaara.jpg

I hope you can put a large version of your wallies, so I can view them. Sadly, i can't give a comments coz it's small. Anyway, good luck with your wallies. :)

  • bluSake
  • Retired Moderator
  • 2y 20wk ago

Just my take on the reasons for these deletions:

1st: This one would be considered "brush whore" (hm, the name sounds a bit harsh) meaning that there isn't much composition, just a lot of brushing. It's considered low effort.

2nd: The concept looks interesting, with the chara creating a portal in the sand. However (and I can't really tell at this resolution) but the bg looks mostly swirl-tool. That would be considered filter whore, another name that denotes low effort. Mostly of the space is also taken up by plain block text, which isn't well integrated with the bg and is distracting.

3rd: The composition here's a bit lacking. It looks like some scan cutouts and screenshots pasted together. Plain scan cutouts are low effort, while screenshots are low quality since you're usually pixellated. The ghosted image in the bg is considered both low quality and low effort. It also looks like there are some extraction issues with the main chara image.

Everyone begins a n00b, but everyone can improve with practice. :)

  • S13
  • 2y 20wk ago

well...blusake pretty much covered everything...overall i like your ideas, but it needs some work...

i kind of liked the first wallpaper (i like the scan) except for its background...i just don't think sparkly stars are befitting for gaara...you could easily make your own sand background and add a texture to it since the scan is texturized...

i liked the 2nd wall, except for all the text...also there's a small spelling error ^^"

as for the 3rd wall, you should concentrate on a single image...putting little cutouts here and there makes it look messy and out of place...

I am not gonna sit here and tear apart your work Like the other people on this site do. I am sure it took you some time to do it. Your time means something... so I say: Good work. ;)

  • S13
  • 2y 20wk ago

Quote by holychikinI am not gonna sit here and tear apart your work Like the other people on this site do. I am sure it took you some time to do it. Your time means something... so I say: Good work. ;)

"tearing apart your work" is such a bad connotation...this thread IS for tips and advice on how to improve wallpapers in progress or that have been deleted...

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