I submitted it to the gallery this morning and it's in quarantine already. I
don't like all my work and wouldn't submit it unless I did but I really like
this wall. Guess I was wrong. Here it is.
Hmm...Well... why did it get deleted? If you look at it closely there can be
seen that your scan lacks some quality. It would have been nice if you posted
the link of the original scan here. As far as I can see it has been put together
or something because the outer hair of both characters seems to have been added.
And it is not added too well... Why? Because one can see that it has been added
and there is something like a soft line. The pieces don't smootly connect...
there seems to be a breaking, there is no soft hairline it is not becoming
"one".
I can also see that the extraction could be improved. Which means. On these
parts of the scan that has a darker background you can still see white parts.
What are you using to "cut" the original scan out of its old
background? I can only suggest the pen tool! You have to zoom in and start
folowing the shapes of the original scan with the pentool. I don't know whether
you are using this tool already.
What else? You used some grass at the bottom that to me looks as if it has been
taken from a photo... especially behind the screen this grass looks a bit odd.
"out of place" and totally different from how the girls were
drawn.
The use of a giant moon seems to be something very popular... but not everybody
likes it... However that is not the reason why it is in quarantine...
I hope this was some sort of help for you. I think it's a good idea to ask when
you don't understand why your wallpaper got deleted. Just try to see it as a
feedback that you have to improve and keep on making wallpapers. That's how you
will improve the most!
If you have some further questions on the pen tool for example, feel free to ask
me!
Here is the original scan http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4992/4134nu.jpg
, no the hair wasn't added that is the style of the art. The moon is there
because the anime is called No Surface Moon. I don't think I am going to make
anymore wallpapers, so forgive me for wasting your time.
Don't be discouraged! It's a good wallpaper. There were some opportunities with
the extraction, but that doesn't mean it sucks. It's very pretty and your
styling is perfect.
Well... This is MT... x}
Humm... Really your wall can be improved, specially in extraction. I sugest you
see some tutorials about it. If you have any doubt, send me PM too.
But your wall is nice. Is you improve some details it will be a excellent wall.
Like sailorhiron sad: Don't be discouraged!
Good lucky Ririsuchan
I love your wallie and it would be a pity if you decided not to make anymore. I
really dont think there is thart much room for improvement. Maybe a teeny bit of
work on the extraction but that really is the only thing I can think of. The
rest is SUGOI!
I submitted it to the gallery this morning and it's in quarantine already. I don't like all my work and wouldn't submit it unless I did but I really like this wall. Guess I was wrong. Here it is.
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/6941/suzunawallpaper0as.jpg
It looks good, I am surprised it is in quarantine already, I can't possibly see what is wrong with it, but then again I am new here. but I like it.
Hmm...Well... why did it get deleted? If you look at it closely there can be seen that your scan lacks some quality. It would have been nice if you posted the link of the original scan here. As far as I can see it has been put together or something because the outer hair of both characters seems to have been added. And it is not added too well... Why? Because one can see that it has been added and there is something like a soft line. The pieces don't smootly connect... there seems to be a breaking, there is no soft hairline it is not becoming "one".
I can also see that the extraction could be improved. Which means. On these parts of the scan that has a darker background you can still see white parts. What are you using to "cut" the original scan out of its old background? I can only suggest the pen tool! You have to zoom in and start folowing the shapes of the original scan with the pentool. I don't know whether you are using this tool already.
What else? You used some grass at the bottom that to me looks as if it has been taken from a photo... especially behind the screen this grass looks a bit odd. "out of place" and totally different from how the girls were drawn.
The use of a giant moon seems to be something very popular... but not everybody likes it...
However that is not the reason why it is in quarantine...
I hope this was some sort of help for you. I think it's a good idea to ask when you don't understand why your wallpaper got deleted. Just try to see it as a feedback that you have to improve and keep on making wallpapers. That's how you will improve the most!
If you have some further questions on the pen tool for example, feel free to ask me!
Here is the original scan http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4992/4134nu.jpg , no the hair wasn't added that is the style of the art. The moon is there because the anime is called No Surface Moon. I don't think I am going to make anymore wallpapers, so forgive me for wasting your time.
Don't be discouraged! It's a good wallpaper. There were some opportunities with the extraction, but that doesn't mean it sucks. It's very pretty and your styling is perfect.
Well... This is MT... x}
Humm... Really your wall can be improved, specially in extraction. I sugest you see some tutorials about it. If you have any doubt, send me PM too.
But your wall is nice. Is you improve some details it will be a excellent wall. Like sailorhiron sad: Don't be discouraged!
Good lucky Ririsuchan
I love your wallie and it would be a pity if you decided not to make anymore. I really dont think there is thart much room for improvement. Maybe a teeny bit of work on the extraction but that really is the only thing I can think of. The rest is SUGOI!
It's very nice, but there is a problem with the extraction; there's a lot of artifacts scattered around the edge. Just try re-extracting the charas.
i think it looks really good.......