>__> All my wallpapers keep going under quarentine for the same reasons
which I don't agree with. This is the
wallpaper I got the most feedback from, but now I can't read any of that
feedback because of the stupid quarentine
They might have been praises or even better- CRITIQUES.
First of all I think the way you placed your wallpaper is a little odd... Why
did you put it into the left corner? Do you have your desktop icons on the
right? Even if you do... I think the wallpaper design should not stop that
abruptly. It's just black at the right and buttom... and I cannot see an idea
behind it, a meaning so it looks as if you had run out of ideas.
The problem of this wall may be the second scan that is taking most of the space
even though it is designed like a background shape. That may be considered as
ghosting which is probably why your wallpaper wasput into quarantine. Try to be
creative... think of a main concept for your wallpaper instead of just somehow
filling the background.
Another thing is that the wallpaper doesn't really look clean. I cannot even
tell anymore whether the original scan was a bit messy already... because there
are so many brushes... You used this text... does this have a meaning? It does
look a little randomly placed.
I like the idea of the text but it was pretty random in execution. I also like
the photo-negative idea of the background scan with the character in the front.
I would say that the character in the front needs to be more obviously the
center of the attention. Leave her more clear and less altered. I would take the
second scan, the background, and make it larger and less intense. Not a ghost, a
part of the background by having it be filtered with the rest of your background
techniques. even if you leave it just the way it is but do something with
negative space it will be an improvement. It doesn't have to be dramatic, just
something that makes the entire screen part of the wallpaper.
well here's what i think:
- It's a bit too dark. Maybe that's what you wanted, but it's kinda too much.
It's like total blackness or something. Try using different shades instead
(though i have no idea how )
- Like the others said, use the whole screen. The black areas on the right and
bottom sides are probably the one of the reasons it got quarantined.
- The image looks... something like static on broken tv (what i usually call
ants at war ) I dunno if that was the effect you were after or not, but if it
was, it's a good idea to state so when you post the revised version
Well, i hope it was of some help to you.. and i meant no offense whatsoever in
my post, and apologize if you feel offended
Really? Ohm i really like it! Love the darkness and the grunge! You used such
cool scans of Lucy! The only thing bad is the black area. Try taking it out, the
whole is really cool!
>__> All my wallpapers keep going under quarentine for the same reasons which I don't agree with. This is the wallpaper I got the most feedback from, but now I can't read any of that feedback because of the stupid quarentine
They might have been praises or even better- CRITIQUES.
First of all I think the way you placed your wallpaper is a little odd... Why did you put it into the left corner? Do you have your desktop icons on the right? Even if you do... I think the wallpaper design should not stop that abruptly. It's just black at the right and buttom... and I cannot see an idea behind it, a meaning so it looks as if you had run out of ideas.
The problem of this wall may be the second scan that is taking most of the space even though it is designed like a background shape. That may be considered as ghosting which is probably why your wallpaper wasput into quarantine. Try to be creative... think of a main concept for your wallpaper instead of just somehow filling the background.
Another thing is that the wallpaper doesn't really look clean. I cannot even tell anymore whether the original scan was a bit messy already... because there are so many brushes... You used this text... does this have a meaning? It does look a little randomly placed.
I like the idea of the text but it was pretty random in execution. I also like the photo-negative idea of the background scan with the character in the front. I would say that the character in the front needs to be more obviously the center of the attention. Leave her more clear and less altered. I would take the second scan, the background, and make it larger and less intense. Not a ghost, a part of the background by having it be filtered with the rest of your background techniques. even if you leave it just the way it is but do something with negative space it will be an improvement. It doesn't have to be dramatic, just something that makes the entire screen part of the wallpaper.
Oh sweet sweet critisim ^^ Thanks for the advice. This wall was orgianlly part of a website layout I made but scrapped.
well here's what i think:
)
) I dunno if that was the effect you were after or not, but if it
was, it's a good idea to state so when you post the revised version
- It's a bit too dark. Maybe that's what you wanted, but it's kinda too much. It's like total blackness or something. Try using different shades instead (though i have no idea how
- Like the others said, use the whole screen. The black areas on the right and bottom sides are probably the one of the reasons it got quarantined.
- The image looks... something like static on broken tv (what i usually call ants at war
Well, i hope it was of some help to you.. and i meant no offense whatsoever in my post, and apologize if you feel offended
Really? Ohm i really like it! Love the darkness and the grunge! You used such cool scans of Lucy! The only thing bad is the black area. Try taking it out, the whole is really cool!