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idontdoperky

idontdoperky

used to live in the real world..

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The Black Sheep*

She went to school
She tried not to cry
She worked real hard
So she didnt see why

When she went to sit down at lunch
Not a table could be found
Where she was welcomed
To come and sit down

She went to eat
She tried not to weep
She was so singled out
She was the black sheep

In an ocean of people
Why did she have to be
The one strange girl
The so called freak

If her family told her
You�re a very special girl
Then why was it so different
To the rest of the world

In the great puzzle
Why did she have to be
The one miscut part
The unbelonging piece

She walked down the halls
Her head hung low
Staring at her feet
Walking quite slow

Names were yelled
From across the room
Like single bricks
Building the walls of a tomb

Quietly unnoticed
She went on for days
She started to unravel
Like a fabric frays

No one really cared
What she did or said
She thought they wouldnt care
Even if she bled

No one noticed her
When she showed up to a class
They really didn�t care
When in the halls shed pass

But they noticed a hole
When something was gone
A strange void in their lives
Like something had gone wrong

The clocks wouldnt tick
And the birds couldnt sing
There was a silence in the office
When the telephone began to ring

The secretary answered
Then dropped the phone
The intercom came on
There was a voice with a strange tone

No one could breathe
No one could cry
All they could see was the face
Of the girl who was shy

What had happened
What had they done
Not all had been cruel
But nobody had been the one

To ask her to sit with them
Or to wave in the hall
A simple smile
Could have stopped it all


Most just sat staring
In total disbelief
Then came the crying
Then came the grief

They knew what had been done
And that no one else could understand
But they had caused this to happen
And the blood was on their hands

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  • May 27, 2005

butterflikysses

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~Diamond Dust Drops~

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i give it the highest rating w/e that is lol, i really like it cuz it describes everyday situations n i think everyone has been at the point at some time in their life

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MetalFire

MetalFire

where is my head

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I give a 10/10 except for fifth line doesn't make great sense :)

  • May 27, 2005

idontdoperky

idontdoperky

used to live in the real world..

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Quote by MetalFireI give a 10/10 except for fifth line doesn't make great sense :)

fixed! :)

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  • May 27, 2005
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wow thats emotional, but it pretty good.

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  • May 28, 2005

cardmage

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After you

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The girl died eventually? Its really sad. Being outcast for being different. Its quite good because the emotions and desperation at being outcast seem to be captured quite well. Keep up the good work...

Life is tranquil, Death is peaceful...
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Its the transition that is troublesome...

  • May 28, 2005

headaches4ever

headaches4ever

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it is sad... in sixth grade i honestly could relate... ugh!

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  • May 28, 2005

Spystreak

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The Grim Reaper

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I give it a 10 it's kind of morbid but I like it. I can relate it somewhat. That's how I felt freshmen year of high school.

Fools You Can't Escape from The Grim Reaper. Your Only Chance for Escape Is Death. Bye Bye Now
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Your Ignorance Will Be Your Own Downfall.

asagoro

hokori o motsu

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nice...good poemage.

  • May 31, 2005

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