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tecnophreak

tecnophreak

retired user

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written wiht inspiration from primer 55 - "My girl"

"rug" copyright tecnophreak 2005

Rug
"born alone
left alone
whats wrong when noones left at home?
standalone
crumb'ling bone
nothing grows that is sown

why do i feel like this
i feel like im just a cyst--
on this world, just dirt
on a rug thats been unfurled
walk all over me...please
make me feel something...

im just gone...
driving on an autobahn
nothings around, just endless ground
ground, that i cant grip
it just slips....

i dont belong
i should just be gone
but, ive got to be strong
dont get me wrong,
ill be strong,
but what about when its all gone?

why do i feel like this
i feel like im just a cyst--
on this world, just dirt
on a rug thats been unfurled
walk all over me...please
make me feel something...

my past doesnt haunt me
it just tries to taunt me
apathy always wants me--
to be something else than what i can be
i hope you can see
im just here for haunting
floating around you,
nothing else to do...

something is wrong with me
but noone can see
i have to be strong
to live when all is gone
for nothing at all,
so i hope you've seen
what it is to be me

please walk on me...
make me feel something..."

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  • Jun 02, 2005

Dragonprovidence

Dragonprovidence

Nefandus..

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Hey, nice piece of writing. Propes to you. I wish more people would share their creative sides besides just making walls on MT.

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aww adam baby T.T
aww your feeling in this song brings me to tears
you know i've always adored your songs. This song is sad yet beautiful t.t
100 out of 10 t.t
xd

skysong

skysong

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very cool song! nice job rhyming, and its a very dramatic piece i think. Very creative, great job!

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  • Jun 02, 2005

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