Poem: Trap in the Darkness

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SweetGrl

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This is a poem about me and how i suffer depression. I decided to post my poems so, i could express my feelings to somebody. Well, the poem is kind of short but hope you like it!!

~Trap in the Darkness~

I am sitting alone in the darkness
waiting for someone to rescue me
As i sit here, my tears fall down my pale face
My voice cries out for help but all i can see is nothing
nobody to embrace, nobody to love
It's just darkness i see, no light to guide me
I am falling, falling into outer darkness
I hear a voice calling to me
but it's too late
I am trap in the darkness
forever


Live to Love, Love to Live~~
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  • Aug 07, 2005

SilentMasamune

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This is a great poem, but you suffer from depression? This is a side of you we all never knew before, but I hope you cheer up soon because your friends at Minitokyo sure will help you out the best they could. :)

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  • Aug 07, 2005
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ohh, sounds very Emo ^_^ I like it. Sorrow is one of the strongest emotions in written form and you've succeded at capturing it very well in this poem. but, now..I want to cheer you up!! ^_^

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SealedSword

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Great poem, it reminds me of a few things
I didn't think you could ever be depressed, you always seem so cheerful in the Forums and posts =P
Best thing to do is not think about it, and think about the fun things XD
Take care = )

  • Aug 07, 2005
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Whoa..those look like the words out of a song i wrote for my band a year ago o.0 lol

CowboyBebopFreak

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Nice work!!! ^ ^ Hope your heart and face reflect absolute joy again very soon, your friends on MT can help you out as much as they can. ;)

  • Aug 07, 2005

IcyFyre

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o wow! i love poems like this! XD do you like to write poetry??? cause you have very good talent! XD thank you for sharing with us! XD

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  • Aug 07, 2005

ayane-heine

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oh man.. this poem is great.. but it sounds kinda sad too.. T_T
you are suffering from drpression, SweetGrl?? >.< dont worry.. if you need any help, everyone here will be willing to help you.. :D take goodie care of yourself ok.. ^^

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  • Aug 07, 2005

mitchell

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pretty cool poem....

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Hey, great poem! I didn't know you can do poetries. XD
This poem is kinda sad. Yeah, I too, and like you, suffer deppression before. So this poem reminds me again how's it.

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hytokiri

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The poem is great, i also have some depression on me, but i guess it will stay there, cause the thing i'm depressed about, is no ordinary stuff. Anyway the poem is really great, u have a touch to this. so good luck on the next ones, and be sure to cheer up, cause with a name like sweetgirl, u must be a nice girl.
Take care.

soujiokita

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Wow, that sounds very nice. ^^ You suffer from depression? o_0I do hope you feel better. Is there anything I can do to help you feel better?

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undeadsymphony

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Good job! Keep up the good work! :)

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  • Aug 08, 2005
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Wow...that poem was another great one...I know exactly how that feeling is... It...practicaly consists of me...the personification of true darkness...but yes, that poem was excellent^^.

  • Aug 09, 2005
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The sorrow in the poem is very deep to reach and very dark to see. Just wait for the rescuer who will come to save you in the darkness. ^_^

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  • Aug 11, 2005

xmuzai

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that's a really awesome poem. gosh, i know that sorrow is the easiest thing felt a lot of times.. you expressed it really well. great job. ;] but i hope you aren't depressed all of the timeee!

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Shoku

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Quote by SweetGrlThis is a poem about me and how i suffer depression. I decided to post my poems so, i could express my feelings to somebody. Well, the poem is kind of short but hope you like it!!
~Trap in the Darkness~I am sitting alone in the darkness
waiting for someone to rescue meAs i sit here, my tears fall down my pale face
My voice cries out for help but all i can see is nothing
nobody to embrace, nobody to loveIt's just darkness i see, no light to guide me
I am falling, falling into outer darknessI hear a voice calling to me
but it's too lateI am trap in the darknessforever

You will see the light. Be confident that you are always happy so that in whatever mistake or depression, you will be optimistic and helding on strong to the euphoria within and around you. Be happy, my friend. By the way, nice poem.

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