>i've fallen and I can't get up
>I'm screaming out for you
>but you don't see a thing
>
>I'm always there
>you act like you still care
>is it the illusion that I fear?
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>I'm sleeping but
>my eyes are wide awake
>I'm turning in my mind to keep you out
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>I'm over my head
>obsessed over my last hope
>I'm breaking down for teh second painful time
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>where are you when I need you?
>I look but you aren't there
>where are you cause I need you
>
>i hoped you'd take me higher
>than he ever could
>but my heart is only sinking waiting for you.
>
>you're a rose that bloomed in my life
>but I forgot that he had thorns
>I was blind to the pain until it attacked my heart.
>
>it's true my life is like a song
>and you are the chorus
>but I hope you're not the end...
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Do you believe in heaven above?
Do you believe in love?- Aug 23, 2005
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Nice poem! Truly meaningful but...err...you're heartbroken or somethin'? Sorry if I offended you but the poem shows like you are....^_^'
- Aug 23, 2005
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that was an amazing poem. it's really meaningful. i love the words you chose, your poem kinda represents my life sadly enough. anyway, great job :)
- Aug 23, 2005
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aydz
Pink goddess
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thats a nice poem.. :)
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- Aug 23, 2005
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Wow! This poem is very good! It feels like i am in it!! Good job!! ^^
Live to Love, Love to Live~~
- Aug 23, 2005
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Kojiroh
Mokona
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yo.. hope tha poem doesnt have any meaning in your life.. sounds depressing.. =/ you're still young, mistress.. no need to think about love at this stage of life.. remember.. at this age.. its your hormones or your mind wanting to become more mature.. ^^ hmm.. i think i went off tha topic a lil.. lol.. nice poem.. but tha best poems are always tha ones which show a sign of happiness.. not depression.. ja ne..
This above all, thine own self be true.
- Aug 24, 2005
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I.
Really.
Liked.
It.
A.
Lot.
- Aug 24, 2005
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CowboyBebopFreak
Tormented Past
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It is so dark and emotion filled. I like it! :)
Your poem reminds me of my own life in some ways. ^_^'
Nice job, I just hope that this isn't how your life is currently.. ;)
- Aug 24, 2005
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LJ23
Pimpin' since 1990
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Wow, your poem is great. Nice job!
Thank you RainOfStars for the kick ass signature!
"If you ain't no punk, holla 'we want prenup!' WE WANT PRENUP! YEEUH!"
Gold Digger - Kanye West ft. Jamie Foxx- Aug 24, 2005
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beautifully sad. it reminds me of what i have gone thru *eyes mist as i leave*
- Aug 24, 2005
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Its very sad and emotional but i think its good. Just a bit depressing
Tragedy is when I cut my finger. Comedy is when you fall into an open sewer and die.
-Mel Brooks- Aug 24, 2005
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