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himeno22

himeno22

xXsend me an angelXx

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>i've fallen and I can't get up
>I'm screaming out for you
>but you don't see a thing
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>I'm always there
>you act like you still care
>is it the illusion that I fear?
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>I'm sleeping but
>my eyes are wide awake
>I'm turning in my mind to keep you out
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>I'm over my head
>obsessed over my last hope
>I'm breaking down for teh second painful time
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>where are you when I need you?
>I look but you aren't there
>where are you cause I need you
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>i hoped you'd take me higher
>than he ever could
>but my heart is only sinking waiting for you.
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>you're a rose that bloomed in my life
>but I forgot that he had thorns
>I was blind to the pain until it attacked my heart.
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>it's true my life is like a song
>and you are the chorus
>but I hope you're not the end...

Do you believe in heaven above?
Do you believe in love?

  • Aug 23, 2005
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Nice poem! Truly meaningful but...err...you're heartbroken or somethin'? Sorry if I offended you but the poem shows like you are....^_^'

  • Aug 23, 2005

sakura-chi

sakura-chi

~Dark Angel~

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that was an amazing poem. it's really meaningful. i love the words you chose, your poem kinda represents my life sadly enough. anyway, great job :)

  • Aug 23, 2005

aydz

Pink goddess

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thats a nice poem.. :)

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SweetGrl

SweetGrl

doki doki

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Wow! This poem is very good! It feels like i am in it!! Good job!! ^^

Live to Love, Love to Live~~
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  • Aug 23, 2005

Kojiroh

Mokona

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yo.. hope tha poem doesnt have any meaning in your life.. sounds depressing.. =/ you're still young, mistress.. no need to think about love at this stage of life.. remember.. at this age.. its your hormones or your mind wanting to become more mature.. ^^ hmm.. i think i went off tha topic a lil.. lol.. nice poem.. but tha best poems are always tha ones which show a sign of happiness.. not depression.. ja ne..

This above all, thine own self be true.

Kuikka-kun

Kuikka-kun

Yori Fukai Yami He

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I.
Really.
Liked.
It.
A.
Lot.

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CowboyBebopFreak

Tormented Past

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It is so dark and emotion filled. I like it! :)
Your poem reminds me of my own life in some ways. ^_^'
Nice job, I just hope that this isn't how your life is currently.. ;)

  • Aug 24, 2005

LJ23

Pimpin' since 1990

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Wow, your poem is great. Nice job!

Thank you RainOfStars for the kick ass signature!
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"If you ain't no punk, holla 'we want prenup!' WE WANT PRENUP! YEEUH!"
Gold Digger - Kanye West ft. Jamie Foxx

  • Aug 24, 2005

BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

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beautifully sad. it reminds me of what i have gone thru *eyes mist as i leave*

EsunaMeggy

EsunaMeggy

Bubbly and Eccentric

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Its very sad and emotional but i think its good. Just a bit depressing

Tragedy is when I cut my finger. Comedy is when you fall into an open sewer and die.
-Mel Brooks

  • Aug 24, 2005

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