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[POEM] Aishiteru

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AngelKate

AngelKate

~*Lady Sweetness*~

Hi hi everyone. ^_^ I have written a new poem and I thought some of you might like to see. I know there are a few people on here who seem to like my work.

Anyway, this one was inspired by this guy I had a huge crush on at my work. I'm done with work for the summer and I won't see him until December when i come home, if he even still works there then, so I wrote this poem.

I hope you all enjoy it, and sorry its kinda long! XD Also posted in the Poetry-Corner group, my userpage, and my LiveJournal of poetry. ^_^

Aishiteru
Darkness falls
I think of you
I cry
At the thought of your smile

Strange, it seems
But to me, its not
As I'm leaving you
For quite a while

I know I like you
Maybe love you
Do you know?
I can't tell

You are mysterious
Seem somewhat shy
I never could read you
Very well

Something about you
Made me smile
I'm still
Not quite sure what

And it saddens me
To know that now
I won't see you
For several months

Knowing you'd be there
Made me happy
The only thing
That got me through

Now all I have
Are my memories
Nothing more
Is left of you

But I'll be back
Will you be there?
I'm not sure
But I hope you stay

Long shot, yes
But it gives me hope
It'll get me
Through those hard days

I'll miss you so
My summer love
I hope
You'll miss me too

Maybe someday
We'll meet again
Until then,
Aishiteru

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xange

xange

~white bunny~

I think it's cute, and lucky is the guy you dedicate this to.

she'll **** you just for the taste


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ryohekigi

ryohekigi

.:Hope:.

Hmm..the 9th stanza sounds a lil weird but maybe it's juz me as i'm not well-versed in poetry... >_< so no offence, AngelKate! :D
Anyway, i personally like the last stanza :) coz it sounds so sweet yet holds a slight sadness. but on the other hand, it shows hope after a period of darkness and i think that is great as it gives the reader hope. where there is hope, there is will. where there is will, there is a way....hold a hope in ur heart and darkness will surely pass - my philosophy ;)
On whole, i think that it's a great poem so keep them coming, AngelKate!
And i wish u good luck on ur relationship with the lucky guy to whom u hav dedicated this sweet poem! ;)
have faith, have hope...

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Hold a hope in your heart and darkness will surely pass

AngelKate

AngelKate

~*Lady Sweetness*~

Lol, we don't really have a "relationship" XD, but thanks very much. This guy has a poem about him and he doesn't even know. XD

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fooblued

fooblued

British Fetishist

*Cries loudy* Its so sweet!!!!! I have a gooey marshmallow middle, and you've touched it with this poem... I love "love peotry" though (don't tell anyone, I lose my rep as a bada$$ XD ) This such a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing it with us!!!!! *Throws roses, then runs off to get some tissues*

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SoulScholar

SoulScholar

NAVI-Gator

I was never a fan of poetry, no offence. However, this earns a kudos.

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Kitaan

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Kitaan

Revival

yea another poem to love >_< it's so nice and sweet makes me all happy and mushy inside T.T but it's so very nice as always :) thanks alot for sharing it with us I'm glad I was able to read it before my vacation ^____^

akazookin

akazookin

Okinawan doughnut

woot!! another poem from angelkate!! XD haha cant help it..but i love this one too!! =P
kanbate!! thanks for sharing such wonderful poems XD take care~

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Silvandragon17

Silvandragon17

The Rising Fighting Spirit

It's so sweet! I especially like the final stanza! ^____^
Thanks for sharing AngelKate!^^

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Society is a masked ball, where everyone hides his real character, and reveals it in hiding. -Ralph Waldo Emerson

It's beautiful.

And I know the whole crush thing too. Though it's goo that you decided to share that woderful poem.

Yay, this poem is dedicated to your crush! how beautiful, AngelKate!! ^^ its really lovely && sweet! i like it alot! :D

EsunaMeggy

EsunaMeggy

Bubbly and Eccentric

oh I like it. Is it unrequited?

Tragedy is when I cut my finger. Comedy is when you fall into an open sewer and die.
-Mel Brooks

AngelKate

AngelKate

~*Lady Sweetness*~

*nods slowly* Unrequieted...yes you could call it that. -_- I am glad you liked the poem though. :)

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animefairy

animefairy

Bored student

Aww... it is so loving and emotional!!
That was such a romantic poem!
You are very talented, AngelKate! ^.^

Thank you so much to soujiokita fro making my avy and sig! Mega thanks! *hugs*
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rinoaandsquall09

rinoaandsquall09

::Wearing This Miserable Skin::

Its such a beautiful poem. I really like it.
Its so romantic, and some parts are sad, but its so good.
I can't wait to see another one of your poems. =]

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THE-DARK-PRINCE

THE-DARK-PRINCE

Only God can judge me

WooooW...
Very really nice poem and i like it..
It's full of emotions and true feelings...
It's very clear and direct and there is no mystery on it...
Thanks alot for sharing it with us...

:) :D :) :D

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IcyFyre

IcyFyre

I love WoNdeRL@nD

*tear* XD how so very dang beautiful! XD XD XD you did a splendid job on this poem! its so full of emotions! lol! :D thank you so very much for sharing it with all of us! :D

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GearStalker05

GearStalker05

En Memoria

.......That was so beautiful. *wipes tears* Your poem is very excellent.

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moonbaby

moonbaby

<3 SOCCER

Very nice, what a sweet little expression of love ;)
Hehehe.,....... well very nice, and well written.......

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Luali

Celestial Love

Is another pretty one from ya :)
i wish I could write poetry as well as you :p

i think the nicest thing that i love about your work is that most of it I can relate to in some way :P

*hugs*

Very nice poem! I can feel the emotions now. its like talking about me. well kinda ;)

Itami-Chan

Itami-Chan

Mrs.Kakashi..and sn34k3rs master

ooooo i love that poem! its so beautiful! i really reallyyy like this one! :D

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thecatmistress

thecatmistress

the cat`s meow

*sniff* that was amazing.... to leave the one you love in hopes that you will return and he will be there....

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bbls

bbls

Lazy days...

i luv your poems, angelkate cuz they always touch me so deeply!!
i can really feel your longing for this guy, but it ends with a glimmer of hope, right?
i hope you'll see him again, and maybe this won't be an unrequited luv anymore!!
:D

Don't worry about tomorrow, don't think about yesterday,
don't live in the future, just make it through today!

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